《The Girl Who Wanted To Marry Me (editing)》45: I feel her
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Nadia's pov
Sigaw ni mhelbhel ng bitawan ko sya. Grabe na ang ginagawa nya, di ba sabi nya kanina bestfriend nya si kurt? E bakit kailangan nyang guluhin?
Nakakahiya yung mga ginawa nya. Nakakaramdam tuloy ako ng gigil. Gusto ko syang awayin muli kaso naaawa ako sa itsura nya, lasing e walang Laban.
tanong ko para naman magkaigihan kami sa nangyayare. Tumayo na sya at pinagpag yung mga katawan nyang akala nya may dumi. Kaartehan.
ani nya at lalagpasan na Sana ako ng hawakan ko braso nya pabalik.
Hindi pa tayo tapos, humanda ka sakin pag di ka sumagot ng matino. Kahit lasing ka pa.
ani ko at nagpumewang. Nanggigigil ako na naaawa? Feel mo yun? Bwiset bakit kasi ginagawa nya pa ang bagay na yun? Sige sabihin na nating maganda talaga Sya. Yun na nga e, kaganda ganda nyang babae ipapahiya nya sarili nya?
ani nito at muli akong lalagpasan. Lasing na lasing na talaga sya, pero di ko hahayaan syang makaalis ng ganyan ang itsura nya, baka may mangyare pa sa kanyang masama, madami pa naman jang tarantado. Wow! Concern. Syempre kahit may galit ako sa kanya, di ko magagawa sa Tao ng ganung kasama.
Harap ko sa kanya. Gusto kong ayusin ang buhay nya ngayon, lalo Nat lasing sya. May pagkakataon akong sabihin sa kanya ito.
she said.
singit nya nung nagsasalita ako. Napakunot ang noo ko ng sabihin nya iyon. Bakit ako? Bakit parang ako pa yung may kasalanan? May nagawa ba kong ikinasira ng buhay nya?
ani ko, habang seryosong nakatingin sa mga Mata nya.
Tinititigan ko lang ang Mata nya, at namumuo na ang luha sa Mata nya. Dahil ba lahat to Kay ace? Kaya nya ginagawa ang bagay na yan?
naiiyak nyang sabi. Ganyan ba talaga sya? O totoong ugali nya yang inaasal nya? Mabait nga ba talaga sya? Naaawa ako sa kalagayan nya. Hindi ko alam na nakakaramdam din pala sya.
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Napatungo ako sa sinabi nya. Naluluha na rin ako dahil ganun pala ang buhay nila noon, nung wala pa ko. I didn't know, I'm sorry.
hagulgol nya, tumulo na ang luha ko. Dahil narinig ko na ang sagot sa lahat ng katanungan sa isip ko.
Nararamdaman nya din pala ang nararamdaman ko noon. Lahat ng sakit ay mas masakit pa pala sa kanya, na kaya pala nya iyon ginawa dahil pareho silang nagbago ng makilala nila ang isat isa. Hindi ko alam lahat pero grabe na ang trato ko sa kanya.
naiiyak ko na ding sabi. Naiiyak ako dahil bumabalik uli yung sakit ng nakaraan. Na hindi pala ganun kadali yun sa lahat.
sigaw nya at naiiyak pa din. Grabe na ang luhang tumutulo sa Mata nya, ramdam ko kung pano sya masaktan.
napatigil sya ng magsalita ako, at naging seryoso ang muka nyang kaninang gigil sakin. Sorry pero wala na akong balak patulan ka.
Tatalikuran ko na Sana sya ng hawakan nya ang kamay ko at biglang lumuhod.
Hagulgol nya, habang mahigpit na hinahawakan ang Kamay ko. Napatigil ako sa sinabi nya.
Ipapaubaya ko ba ang taong mahal ko? Kung ikakasaya ng iba?
napatingin kami sa sumigaw sa gilid namin. Si Aaron, nilapitan nya agad si mhelbhel at pinatayo ito. Sumunod naman si mhelbhel habang enggang engga na sa paglalakad.
Lapit naman sakin ni ace kasama ang mga 'Red Hand'
Niyakap ako ni ace at ganun din ako. Iniisip ko pa din ang sinabi ni mhelbhel. Naaawa ako sa kanya, dahil sa nararamdaman nya
tanong ni ace habang hinihimas ang buhok ko. Tumango na lang ako.
simula ni Noel. Hindi ko alam isasagot ko, kaya tinignan ko lang sila. At di ko namalayan na tumulo na pala ang luha ko, alam kong nakita nilang lahat iyon.
ani naman ni Adele. At niyakap muli ako ni ace, pero di na ko nagpayakap.
ani ko at inalisan sila. Hindi ko alam kung pano sasabihin lahat iyon Kay ace. Alam kong nagtaka sila sa pagwalk out ko, lalo Nat tumulo pa ang luha ko.
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