《The Girl Who Wanted To Marry Me (editing)》22:she's change
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Criselda's pov
Hindi pa rin talaga nagbabago ang ugali nya, kahit noon ay ganun na ganun sya, miski ayusan nya ay di nagbabago. Kaya ba di sya nagbago para maakit uli si ace?
Kinwento lahat sakin ni nadia, simula nung unang nagkita sila ni mhelbel hanggang sa nagaway sila sa bahay nilani ace.
Ngayon ay iba na ang nadia na kilala ko iba na lagi ang reaksyon nya, napaka seryoso na nya at hindi ko na nakikita ang magaganda nyang ngiti. Mahigit isang linggo na sya nakatira dito, at di rin dumadalaw si ace dahilan nga na ayaw ni nadia.
simula ko, aalis kasi sya. Dadalawin nya si Darren sa bahay nila, dahil mag isa lang daw ito doon.
ani nya, at sinuklian ako ng matipid na ngiti. Oo yun lang ang bakikita kong ngiti, hindi yung kagaya dati na sobrang ganda nya kapag ngumingiti.
ani nya. Tumango na lang ako, at umalis na sya.
tanong ko, baka kasi hindi, ako yung nagaalala sa kanilang mag Ina e.
sabi ng maid. Bakit di sya kumain? Kahit kung nasa hospital sya ayaw niya ding kumain?
Nadia's pov
Nang makarating ako sa bahay namin ni Darren, bumaba na ko ng kotse.
salubong ni Darren.
tanong ko, this fast few days lagi na syang busy, buti na rin yun, kaysa bored di ba?
ani nya, ha? Anjan nanaman sya? Madalas na ata syang dumalaw dito?
Pagpasok ko sa loob nakita ko si Kurt na nagluluto sa kusina, naka airphron pa.
ani nya, bakat sa muka nya ang gulat.
Sabi nya, at niyakap ako. Pero bago nya kp niyakap tinanggal nya yung airphron.
tipid na ngiti ko. At umupo sa sofa. Nagiba na ang ayos ng bahay.
tanong nya, at bumalik muli sa kusina. Naalala ko nanaman, hindi ako buntis? Pero pano pag nagtaka sila na hindi lumalaki ang tyan ko?
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ani ko.
Nang matapos sya sa luto nya, dinalhan nya ko sa mesa ng sofa. Mukang masarap, pero ayokong kumain busog pa ko.
ani ko, at muli nyang tinanggal ang airphron at tumabi sakin.
sabi nya, at kumuha ng isang kutsara at susubuan ako.
sabi ko.
nga nga nya, tanda na gusto nya ko pangangahin. Kaya ngumanga ako at isinubo nya naman yun. Masarap naman, kaso ayoko talaga kumain.
sabi nya at muling ibinalik yung kutsara sa Plato.
bagsak sa pinto ni ace, na ikinagulat naming tatlo. Anong ginagawa nya dito?
taka ko, at tumayo. Inaamin ko namiss ko sya, pero ayoko talaga syang makita.
at niyakap nya ko ng mahigpit, bakat pa din sa muka ko ang taka, pano nya nalamng nandito ako Kay Darren?
pinutol nya iyo at hinalikan ako, kinlas ko yun at sinampal sya. Ayoko na talaga.
Bakat sa muka nya ang gulat ng sampalin ko sya.
naiiyak kong sabi, Ewan ko kung bakit umiiyak ako ng dahil sa kanya, siguro nga ay mahal ko na sya noon pa. Gusto ko na syang kalimutan.
ani nya, ansakit marinig ng sinabi nya. Alam kong aasa lang ako sa wala. Kaya nga ayaw ko sya makita dahil baka bumalik ang nararamdaman ko. Sigurot sila na nga ni mhelbel.
ani ko, ayoko ng umiyak, ngayon ko lang naranasan tong bwiset na buhay na to!
natataranta nyang sabi, bakit nagkaka ganyan sya? Siguro nga ay takot sya sa lolo nya.
naiiyak kong sabi habang sumisinghot ng sipon. At inalisan na sya, hindi naman nya ako sinundan, sumakay agad ako ng kotse at umuwi Kay criselda.
Criselda's pov
salubong ko Kay nadia, at tumayo sa kinauupuan kanina. Nakita ko kasi syang umiiyak, anong nangyari?
Hawak ko sa braso nya, at hinarap naman nya ko ng iyak ng iyak, naaawa ako sa itsura nya.
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hagulgul nya, I know its ace, ano nanamang sinabi ni ace Kay nadia? At bakit ganyan sya makaiyak?
2weeks pa lang sila pero may away na agad sa pagitan nila.
ani ko, alam kong mahal sya ni ace, dahil hindi sya papakasalan ni ace kung hindi sya mahal nito
singit ko habang nagsasalita sya, iba na usapan pag si lolo na ag topic.
napahinto sa kaiiyak si nadia, at hinawakan nya naman ako.
Mahigpit s lolo, ibang Tao sya, mas demonyo pa si lolo kaysa Kay ace, kaya nga ganyan si ace dahil may pinagmanahan sya. Kaya kahit si ace ay takot na takot Kay lolo, miski ako.
nagiba ang reaksyon naming dalawa, pero bakat pa din sa muka ni nadia ang taka.
Ayokong magsalita about Kay lolo, ayokong masira ang pangalan ni lolo sa paningin ni nadia.
ani ko, at nagmadali naman syang umakyat, alam kong madaming katanungan sa isip nya, pero isa lang ang masasabi ko, sundin lang nila si lolo kahit na anong iutos nito.
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