《Ancient's Smashing Reviews》Submission Form
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As I get requests to read and review, I decided to have a submission form if more people want it. For a taste of who I am, read my reviews, and know that my favorite youtube reviewers are CinemaSins, SmackTalk, The Critical Drinker, and Totally Not Mark.
I am also one of the leaders of a writers discord group born out of WattPad that encourages each other, reads each other, helps each other, and bring each other to drinking. If you are interested in joining then talk with .
Due to how many rewrites I have caused I WILL NOT SUBJECT THE AUTHOR TO A REVIEW IF IT ISN'T YOUR STORY. DO NOT REQUEST OTHER PEOPLE'S STORIES.
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Smashing Form:
Author name - (Your name so I can find you.)
Story name - (The story so I can find it.)
Genre - (As best as you can describe it.)
(I do not accept . Period. I neither like nor dislike, it just makes no sense to my head.)
(I don't mind any genre, but if romance/LGBT I would draw the line at sex at first sight or first date. There needs to be some kind of buildup into the relationship or an understanding that the relationship has already existed and been allowed to build. Relationships where they are just horny and fucking each other's brains out isn't romance.)
Smut - (Yes/No) (If yes, which chapters have it so I will know which chapters to skip.)(References to sex happening outside of the direct scene or leaving it at undressing followed by a 'scene change' count as 'no'.)
Mature - Outside of smut, then I don't care. Rape, pillage, and plunder for all I care. Kill everyone. Let it burn!
To Smash or not to Smash - Are you 1-15 years old? Is this your first story? Are you not fluent in English? (If Yes to any of these, then I am gentler.)
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Payment - Which story will you read? (Choose one of the stories I have reviewed in the past and read it. Read as much of it as you want or don't want. The whole point of this review book is to help others, so lets do that. I also accept no payment, but let's be real... I won't be nearly as inclined or motivated to read your stuff if you don't have the fairness to read other people's stories either.) (Payment doesn't have to begin until I start reading your stuff.)
Fine Print - I will read or not read as many chapters as I want at my own discretion. After I have read it, I will review. I will review the aspects of the story I want, with full fairness to the best of my ability, and I will not be politically correct no matter how many fans you send to harass me. My opinion is my opinion and if you can't accept that then you will just have to get over it. If you wish the review removed after the fact, I will remove it. If you do not wish to have the story reviewed before the review is written or published then it will not be reviewed, it will be removed from the queue, and I will stop reading it.
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Queue:
1) The Case of Known-Uknown -
2) My Psychotic Lover -
3) Counter Clockwise -
4) Graveskies -
5) Mademoiselle Noire -
6) Kueshango Ghji -
7) Wings of Destruction and Duty -
8) The Ol'Chevalier -
9) The Accidental Wife -
10) Hi, Its James. Hames Potter. -
11) One More Highschool Comedy, Chaos Begins -
12) His Uncertain Love - @HOPE_of_LoVeE_
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Earth's Army In Another World
As the god's battleground starts to turn into anarchy with justice and prosperity disappearing and instead being replaced by pain and suffering, the goddess of Justice and Prosperity has to do something that no other god or goddess has done. Call upon the forces of a godless planet. She wanted the strongest, and got the strongest. She got armies from three separate countries, and has forced upon them a mission of no return. Literally. Like they can't return to earth unless they complete it. Without any governments, the armies are left to fend for themselves with a large amount of bullets, tanks, planes, and ships. This story will have a large amount of characterization and slice of life moments. I did an insane amount of research for this and poured so much time in, not just militarily, but other basic necessity things as well. Fights will be bloody, magic will be rampant, and the slice of life moments will just warm you to the core. (actual kingdom building)
8 172 - In Serial73 Chapters
The Verant Chronicles - Book One
The once powerful Verant Empire had been brought to its knees after seven years of civil war. The war maybe over, a new emperor maybe at the helm, but the empire remains broken. Deadly plagues, encroaching monsters, divided political loyalties only scratch the surface of the problems the empire now faces. Highwaymen make the roads unsafe, powerful wizards go unchecked and goblin hordes threaten local towns and villages. Elwin doesn’t want to spend his days as a farmer and dreams of adventure. He, his brother Rith, best friend Emerson and adopted cousin Anna, decide to go out into this world as adventurers hoping to seek fame and fortune just like in the books they read. The empire is at a crossroads as Elwin and his friends experience the aftermath of the war, they must come to terms with what it means to live in the Verant Empire as one of it's citizens. It all begins with an intriguing map sewn into cloth, written in a strange language and depicting a place that doesn’t seem to exist. Elwin and his friends decide to go to the capital city to join the adventurer’s guild and find someone who can translate the map and hopeful recognize the locations depicted. Along the way they encounter lizard creatures, goblins, former soldiers, a bard, druid and a powerful wizard who has his own eye on the map. They meet new friends and create deadly enemies. From great plains to a bustling metropolis, to a town devastated by an earthquake, their world of Gaia has a gritty realism to it and the empire is only a small part of a much large realm. It is a Romanesque world teetering on a renaissance in which Gods, gunpowder, armored knights, griffin riders and magic coexist uneasily. Elwin and his companions drink, they swear, they have sexual encounters, they make mistakes and face serious moral dilemmas at every turn. Planned out to be 30+ chapters in total including a prologue and epilogue. Chapters will be released about twice a week when possible.
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Reincarnated as a Prince but got abandoned afterwards
Yamihr von Ritzburg (Yahms-san), a nobility. Not just a normal ranking Noble but a Prince of Ritzburg kingdom. When he was born, Yamihr unintentionally released a power beyond human imagination. The king and queen thought that he was a cursed child and decided to kill him. Waiting for his demise, Yamihr was oblivious to everything around himself.
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A Shade Underneath the Heavens
What does true freedom entail? Faced with a reality where forces behind the curtain guide and manipulate one's actions, what is a person to do? Five people, puppeteered by hands both known and unknown, set on a path that is bound to cross. The prince Julius Alneal and his knightess Annea head out seeking help for a conflict at home. The magus Elynne seeks adventure and involves herself with the Inquisitor Dannar whose very job is to hunt renegade magi. And from the north comes Edwin, a boy sent on a quest he does not understand, whose fate might influence far more than he is aware of. And the five of them will discover truths about themselves and the world, slowly starting to understand that there is something terribly wrong with the very land they walk on and the heavens above. Updates every so often on Friday/Saturday.
8 176 - In Serial275 Chapters
Encounters Out There
Stories about first contact, aliens, space exploration and colonization, and beyond.
8 202 - In Serial24 Chapters
Whodunnit? Murder On Mystery Mountain
"Blood dripped down from the wall. Giles watched the dark liquid cover the wood of the cabin like a blanket. Stunned into silence, Giles could only stare at the horror before him. He knew one thing for certain. Death had found him, once again."Believing he has finally escaped the evil that has plagued his life, Giles accepts a job at a sleep away camp in America. This time, he is prepared for anything, bringing protective weapons with him. He even reconnects with Lana - his previous maid- who brings her own ghosts with her. Everything seems to be fine, that is until Giles discovers a message written in blood. The evil has once again followed him, but Giles is determined to change the rules. However, the killer has a few tricks up their sleeve. With every day, another man is murdered, and the stakes increase drastically, until the most gruesome finish yet.
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