《Mistakes (school 2015 fanfic)》Part 1
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After a long holiday, school finally starts.
"Go Eunbi!", Taekwang cheers.
"Taekwang-a!!", she waves.
"How's your holiday?", Taekwang asks.
"Wonderful, I spent every day with Eunbyul", she smiles.
"Don't tell me that witch is back", Taekwang says feeling scared.
"YA! who do you just called witch?! That's my unnie!", Eunbi says with an angry face.
"Waaah, it's scary. Ya, you spent too much time with her. You became like her", Taekwang says.
"Of course i'm like her. We're twins", Eunbi says.
Suddenly someone wraps his hand on Eunbi. Yes, it's Han Yian.
"Let's go", he says a he drag Eunbi with him.
"Ah, right. He's Eunbi's boyfriend now", Taekwang says looking sad.
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A girl with a long black hair was seating neatly on a car with her new uniform. That car stopped in front of Sekang High School.
The drivers get out of the car and head to the passenger seat. He opens the door. The girl hopped out of the car.
"I'll pick you up after school", the driver says.
"Ah, ani ahjussi. I want to walk around first, i miss korea so much", she says.
"Oh, arrasso. Be Careful miss", he says as he bows.
The car drives away. The girl was observing the school, "Not bad", she says.
She takes a deep breathe.
"Kim Hajin, fighting!!!" she said to herself.
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Class 3-2 was noisy as always. The guys were joking while the girls were gossiping. "Ya, I heard that there will be a new student."
"A new student?"
"I hope it's a girl"
"Anii, i hope it's a guy, we're lacking handsome guy here"
"Eiiiiii!!!!!!!" all the guys were protesting.
The teacher came in, "Silent everyone!! We have new student. Hey! Please introduce yourself"
A pretty girl come in and stand beside the teacher. All the guys were screaming with joy.
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"Annyeong! I'm Kim Hajin. I was born in Korea but then I moved to America, let's be friends", she says.
"Kids, Hajin just came back from America and she's still adjusting with her surroundings, please help her"
"Arrasso seongsaengnim!"
She sit beside a guy with his head on the table. "I guessed he's sleeping" she thought.
"Annyeong! Nan Lee Shijin", Shijin waves at her.
"Nan Cha Songjoo, this is Go eunbi", Song joo says.
"Ahh, nice to meet you", Hajin smiles.
She looked at the guy next to her and Songjoo catch her looking at him and said, "He's Gong Taekwang"
"Gong Taekwang!?", Hajin looks surprised.
"Oh, wae?", Shijin becomes curious after seeing her reaction.
"Ahhh, ani", Hajin says.
"Don't bother him, he always sleep like that" said Shijin.
"or pretending to be asleep...", Hajin says as she look at Gong Taekwang.
Eunbi is quite surprise, because she's the only one who know that he is pretending to be asleep.
The bell rang, everyone was going to the cafeteria.
"Let's grab some food Kim hajin", Songjoo said.
But Hajin was already running to the cafeteria.
Eunbi laugh, "She must be hungry"
Taekwang followed them and go to cafeteria.
"Hey, that's Hajin. Let's sit next to her", said Shijin
Shijin and songjoo sit next to hajin, while eunbi sit next to taekwang.
The guys in the cafeteria were staring at Hajin, but she's too hungry to notice.
Taekwang stoped eating and stares at Hajin.
He was staring at the way Hajin holds her chopstick, it's a bit different from everyone. "It looks familiar", he thought. Eunbi stare at Taekwang worriedly, "are you sick?" she puts her hand on his forehead.
Taekwang was a bit shocked, "An..ani..."
"Then why you stopped eating?", she asks.
Before taekwang answer her, a tall guy sit beside eunbi.
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"Aren't you practicing", ask Songjoo.
"It's over", Yian said.
"Who is this?", he pointed at the girl who's about to swallow her tray.
"She's the new kid, Kim Hajin", Shijin explains. "Hajin-a, this is Han Yian"
Hajin stops eating and glance at Yian. "Waahh... he's so handsome", she thought.
"Annyeong", she says and smiles..
She then puts her chopstick down and eat kimbab with her hand.
Taekwang stared at her, and keep thinking why this looks familiar to him.
Hajin noticed him, and says, "What?".
"Nothing", Taekwang answers.
"Guys, I'll go first okay?", Hajin says and leave the table.
As soon as she left, Taekwang also gets up. And follow her.
Eunbi was watching those two left.
Hajin puts her tray back, she was about to return to the class. Until,
"Follow me", Taekwang says at Hajin.
Hajin smiles and follows Taekwang. They arrived at the rooftop.
"Waaaah!!! It's so beautiful", Hajin says.
"You!", Taekwang says as he points at Hajin.
"What?", Hajin looks confused.
"What's your name?", He asks with a serious.
"huh?", Hajin looks even more confuse.
"Just answer me", Taekwang says.
"Kim HaJin, wae?", she answers.
"Why did you eat kimbab with your hand?", Taekwang asks again.
"Wae? What's wrong with that?", Hajin then feels annoyed.
"Just answer me!", Taekwang says.
"Why do I have to eat it with chopstick when, it's a lot easier with hand?", she says with an annoyed face.
Taekwang looks surprised and he remembered something.
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FLASHBACK
"Gong taekwang ! ask your friend to eat first"
"Arrasso ahjuma, Ya Kim Hajin!"
"oh?"
"let's eat, there's kimbab"
"Waaah"
She eat it with her hand.
"Ya, use the chopstick!"
"Wae? Why do I have to eat it with chopstick when, it's a lot easier with hand?"
"Eiii"
END FLASHBACK
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"Ya Gong Taekwang, what are you thinking?", Hajin asks.
Taekwang just stare at her.
"Wae? You think I'm pretty?", Hajin smiles mischievously.
Taekwang stay silent.
Hajin smile turn to a frown, "Ya! What's wrong with you? Why did you.."
Taekwang grab her shoulder and said,
"You're Kim Hajin?"
Hajin looks confuse.
"Jinjja KIM. HA. JIN.?", Taekwang asks again.
Hajin smiles at him, "Yaa.. it's faster than what i expected. Daebak, you can recognize me this fast".
Taekwang looks surprise.
"Long time no see,
GONG. TAE.KWANG.", Hajin smiles.
Taekwang stares at her for a while, and then he let her off.
"Waa.. you didn't change at all. Not even a bit.", Hajin says.
Taekwang is still adjusting to the situation. His childhood friend just appear in front of him after disappearing without any goodbye.
"I saw that you're still doing that habit. Pretending to be sleep in class", Hajin says again.
"Where have you been?", Taekwang asks.
"America, my dad move there", she explains.
"Are you going back there again?", Taekwang asks.
"Ani, i'm here for good", she says.
Taekwang remains silent. She stares at him and then smile.
"Omo!! You must have missed me so much!!!", she says as she squeeze Taekwang's face.
"YA! Don't do that", he says as he get off from Hajin.
Hajin frowns at Taekwang, but then she laughs. Taekwang was keeping a straight face, and finally he also laugh.
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