《Bliss》Relaxing time
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I don't know wtf has gotten into to Valentina lately. It's like now that She's around her ex girlfriend well maybe current girlfriend, she's been acting mad weird and rude.
I don't know how but I am gonna find out what's wrong. No I'm not gonna seduce her I'm just gonna make her miss me until she gets over herself and comes back to me. I have no problem with Caramela, she seems hella chill. Which is good just the person I need to be around.
Anyway enough of talking, I need to get dressed to go swimming.
Ughh I'm so tired of lina . No offense I love her but my love Caramela is growing even more. She made a promise to me and she never broke it either, she came back for me.
Not to be rude, I had no clue we were bringing Lina with us. I mean we weren't gonna leave her behind but this wasn't apart of the plan.
Y'all are probably like wtf what plan. Well during these last couple of months with Isabella acting crazy asf. I've been in contact with Caramela ever since, we've planned this whole thing way ahead of time. She put a tracker inside of my phone so she can know where to find me.
I start changing into my bikini so I can go swimming. But I kinda wanna go skinny dipping, since it is a private area. Finally some time to relax and have fun.
As I'm walking out of my room, I happen to bump into this female. I pick my phone up and realize that it was Maria and nena.
Valentina-Ohh my go—
Nena-Shhh I know I will explain later. Damn girl your body looks mad good.
Lina-Thank you girl, it's hard to maintain a body like this. She says doing a silly dance.
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Maria-*Blankly stares*
Nena-We will try to catch you later at the club.
Valentina waits outside of Lina's door, Lina opens the door and mean mugs Valentina and continues walking towards the elevator. Inside the elevator is an awkward silence but you could feel the tension. The elevator stops and the doors open.
Both of the girls unlock the private pool area with their access keys.
Valentina -Lina Come over here now!.
Lina walks towards Valentina confused af, Valentina walks even closer and strips her out of the bikini, then she strips out of hers too.
Valentina-Mmm I always loved your body, it's just so perfect and beautiful. She says slightly kissing on Valentina's neck.
Lina-Baby look I'm sorry for the way I acted earlier. It's just you know how my parents was when I was younger, and I think it's time to make some decisions on my own ya know.
Valentina -I know baby I guess u can be a private dancer but I want you to practice on me before anyone else💕.
Lina-How about we actually go swimming now, last one is a rotten egg. She takes off running towards the pool slide and leaves Lina behind.
Valentina-heyyy you lil fucker, that isn't fair. She says running slowly and laughing.
Lina and Valentina both slide down and splash into the pool together. They laugh together while running around the pool in circles like kids.
Valentina-I gotchu now😝. She says holding Lina from behind closely.
Lina- I want you to forever hold me like this. She says while they both sit on the pool steps.
Caramela-So you girls were being naughty huh? Y'all forgot my office was right here. She says as she takes a seat and lights a blunt.
Valentina -Aye pass it over boo.
Caramela passes over the blunt to Valentina while staring with an unreadable face, before turning her head to look at Lina. Lina looks back deep inside of Caramela eyes.
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Valentina gets out of the pool, and seductively walks over to Caramela who's on your phone. She stops in front of her.
Valentina-You shouldn't be on your phone, give me it. She says tossing her phone inside of another cushioned chair, Valentina sits on caramela's lap.
Caramela's hands start to roam all over Valentina. Lina gets out the pool looking shocked as hell. She walks over to where the two are sitting.
Caramela-Seesh😍, the both of you are gonna cause trouble with those pretty little mouths and bodies. I don't think my girls are gonna be able to control themselves around y'all.
Lina-Maybe not she says sitting on the other side of caramela's lap.
Valentina-Maybe your the only one that can handle us. She says while playing with caramela's Louis Vuitton Durag.
Caramela-Give me a lap dance lina, let's move into the lounge side of the private pool. Show me what chu got mamì.
The girls both walk over to the lounge area only to see a pole in the middle of the door and seats surrounding, w/mood changing lights.
Valentina -Ouuu it's fancy. She says drinking a glass of wine.
Lina-Give me some. She says while reaching out to Lina's cup.
Valentina -Mmm😈 drink it all cause you know what they say about wine.
Lina-It makes the pussy wet. She says drinking the rest of the wine and handing it back. What's funny Caramela?
Caramela- lmao😂, y'all are fucking crazy but what type of music do you want me to put on.
Valentina-Umm, mmph🤔 put on Michael Jackson "Dirty Diana".
Caramela picks the song and the music starts playing.
Caramela-Remember, your inside the club not here right now. Use your imagination okay, also keep eye contact babygirl. She says winking.
Lina starts to move her hips slowly to music before walking seductively slowly over to Caramela. She pauses, and drops down slowly to Caramela's eyeview and spreads her legs wide so she can get a glimpse of her pussy.
She gets up and lifts one of her leg beside caramela arm. Caramela leans even closer and Lina starts grinding her pussy in front of her. Caramela caress Lina inner thighs gently.
Caramela-Now you know the clients can never touch you this way, only I can.
Lina then removes her leg and slowly sway her hips, and turns around and bends over so Caramela now has a view of her pussy from the back.
Lina moves her hips from side to side staying in the same position, she then starts moving her booty. And then slowly easing into a split shaking her booty again, looking back at Caramela.
Caramela-Damn girl I'm not sure if you wanna be a private showgirl anymore, my clients are gonna want more from you.
Valentina -Aww baby you did so good. Come here.
Lina walks over and gives Valentina a passionate long kiss.
Caramela-Ohh I can't get nun either? Matter fact both of y'all come here.
Lina and Valentina both walk over and sit in caramela's lap again. Lina leans in first to give Caramela a kiss while Valentina sucks on her neck swirling her tongue.
Maria-Aye tf is y'all doing? Oh and wassup, this is my girlfriend nena.
Xiomara-Wassup nena nice to meet you. Just call me Caramela for short.
Nena-Okay and hi my babies I miss y'all so much. She says walking over to hug Lina and Valentina.
To be continued...💖.
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Sword System Academia
2/17 NOTICE: I'm putting this on hiatus, possibly permanently. I didn't want to spam with an "update chapter", so hopefully here and in the story blurb will get enough eyeballs. There are a couple reasons for ending SSA for now. 1) I wrote the next chapter but wasn't happy with it. I've been less and less satisfied with SSA's quality the more I thought about it. Part of the reason is... 2) I am seriously thinking about trying to publish some novels to help pay the bills, since I don't have my other source of income anymore. I have never asked for anything from SSA readers, no money, not even a review or rating. SSA is written for fun to amuse myself, primarily, and I would kind of feel bad actually charging someone money for something as unserious as that. I don't think it is good enough to ask anything in return. To use an analogy from music, SSA is more like a jam session with a bunch of friends. You're just chiling and having fun playing some music. I mean, if you are Mozart or even Eminem, your jam session is good enough to sell, but for an amateur beginner like myself, haha, no. If I want to publish something, I feel like I need to go the proper route of practice and rehearsals, which might be more similar to a classical concert performance. With SSA, I work from worldbuilding notes and a loose outline, but what you are essentially getting is the first draft with lots of so-called pantsing. Pushing out a web novel like this also means it is very difficult to go back and improve things without breaking everything else downstream. I wanted to try this "jamming" approach, as it was a good way to teach me about another aspect of writing, but to move forward, I think I need to hone my "classical" techniques, which emphasize rewriting, or at least, revising outlines. 3) While I intend to try to make $$$, my actual current goal is to "get gud". I've spent a lot of time recently trying to understand the self-publishing industry, and I'm pretty sure I can make some money by using short-term strategies with my current amateur skill level. But I've seen too many authors come and go/burnout, and really, the only way that I think I can enjoy writing and still make money on a long-term basis is to become a better writer. And the next step for me, which I haven't done much before, is to spend more time on rewriting and outlines. That is pretty much antithetical to the way SSA is developing. I've always been kind of 20/80 plotting/pantsing, but I want to spend a lot more time outlining before I even start writing. SSA jam sessions don't really fit my goal anymore. If you're curious about what's next, read on... Among other regrets, I regret not finishing SSA. It's the first story I've dropped, but then again, it's the first web novel I've attempted, so I suppose that's not a surprise. I don't think traditional web novel formats suit me that well. The whole SSA story I had loosely planned (beyond a first book or major arc) is way too large as well. Big story = good for neverending webnovel with Patreons, bad for penniless and fickle writer like me. I am currently outlining a complete trilogy to another story in great detail. I want the story to end concisely, and I also want the chance to really spend a lot of time on the full outline to spot pacing problems, character issues, lost themes, and so on. I'll still share this story on RR. What I intend to do is finish book 1, flash-publish the whole thing here for a few weeks, then publish on the big Zon. Repeat for books 2 and 3. The upcoming story will be about crafting heroes. The backdrop is an isekai-like setting, where elves will summon humans to their world as heroes, but the whole hero crafting business is still in its infancy. The elven mage researchers are figuring out how to imbue heroes with power, while the heroes are trying to figure out how to use the powers that they gain. Humans are the best hero templates because they are blank and have no intrinsic magic. Or at least that what the elves thought. The human MC has his own secrets... There will be some similarities with litrpgs, but I would call it more a progression fantasy or gamelit story. For example, the stats are very low, at least initially. Say we have a stat called Str. Going from Str = 1 to Str = 2 is a huge deal. Also, going from Dex = 0 to Dex = 1 is an even bigger deal. I guess you could call it a "low-stat litrpg", haha. Also, the heroes won't be gaining stats simply by killing things or leveling up. You can't increase stats arbitrarily, either. There will be rules to how stats can increase, and how they work with each other. The elven mages will be figuring out these rules in order to craft stronger and stronger heroes. Some inspiration will be from cultivation magic systems, but there won't be overt cultivation, at least for now. A theme I really want to explore is the idea of interactions. That includes things like hero crafter vs hero, tactics vs strategy, skill synergies, racial interactions (dwarves, elves, etc), and son. Yeah, so hero crafting. I'm super excited about this project and venturing into publishing. If you want to check out the upcoming story, you can follow my RR author profile to see when it drops here. Finally... THANK YOU TO EVERYONE! I'm very sorry that SSA is stopping, but I hope at least some of you will find the next story at least as enjoyable, if not more. Thanks to all the readers who gave SSA a shot. Big hug or solid fistbump to all of you, whichever you prefer! I hope this message is not a downer but an upper, because I am psyched!! -purlcray -------------- BLURB: Talen, youngest Master of the Koroi, makes his way to the Empire's capital to salvage his clan's fate. But the bustling city has few opportunities for the traditionalist. For the old sword clans are fading. With the rise of alchemy, gold can purchase strength that ordinarily took years of training to cultivate. Sword artists, once rare and accomplished, are quickly growing in number, especially among the wealthy noble class. Even with such alchemy, though, no one has advanced to the rank of Grandmaster in countless years. Talen's true dream is to walk the path of a sword artist to the very end while fulfilling his clan duties. And then the Swordgeists return, fabled founders of all sword arts, gods who had touched the world long ago and vanished. These myths turned into reality warn of a coming threat. Alongside this warning, they issue an invitation to the Sword System Academy, a path to power beyond the mortal realm. But first, they will hold an entrance exam... Story notes:Sword System Academia blends elements of western and asian fantasy such as xianxia and litrpg. I took parts from different genres I enjoyed and twisted them into my own creation. There will be an explicit system, both of the litrpg kind and the hard(ish) magic kind, but it is embedded within an academic structure that will develop over the course of the story. This is my attempt to design a unique type of system, the System Academia.
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