《Bliss》Not such a mystery person anymore.
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When that door flew open, I'm not gonna lie at first I was scared and now I'm happy. I'm finally gonna be set free from my misery no offense to Isabella but I'm done with her now.
The person's voice I heard talking made me even more happy. She came back, she kept her promise to save me. I know y'all are probably who tf is this girl talking about. I'm talking about my ex girlfriend, the one that actually cared about me.
I'm not so sure if she's gonna be okay with Valentina being her girlfriend too. But whatever she's just gonna have to deal with it. I'm not gonna leave Valentina alone, I become way too attached to her and I love her a lot.
Lina-Papì?! Help us she's trying to seduce us into being back with her crazy ass.
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Caramela-We can do this the hard way or the easy way. Hand over the girls and you won't die, and if you don't cooperate I'll have my girls come and take you out.
Isabella-U think ur so tough don't you? Haha I don't think so sweetheart.
Caramela-You know damn well that I didn't even mention anything about being tough. You worry about the wrong shit, but that's too bad cause your not gonna live for too long.
Isabella-Ha-ahhh boom!. Isabella falls and hits the floor from a stray bullet that came threw the window. *She soon starts choking on her blood and no one helps her*.
Caramela-Lets get you two outta here. Why exactly did she even do this to you both?
Valentina-Look I know you saved us and all but please can you not bring her up right now. Maybe one day when I'm in a happier stable place in life, I'll explain it to you.
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Caramela-Alright, girls clean it up and head back to warehouse. Lina and Valentina follow me please. Its gonna be okay, your safe now.
She says while pulling both of them into a tight hug. We continue walking to my car, I open the door for the girls.
Caramela-This is gonna be a long ass ride so if you need anything feel free to tell me. Also there's blankets, snacks and drinks in the back.
Lina and Valentina both give their thanks to caramela.
Valentina-You still have love for her don't you? It's okay if you do, just know you'll always have a soft spot in my heart.
Lina-Babygirl look when me and Isabella use to argue, remember how I would leave the house for a long time. Well I was with caramela, she was my outlet from my pain. She knew how to heal me up perfectly and I'm not talking about sex. She understands me mentality.
Valentina- wells that's different for a change. It's better than arguing and physical fighting. Cause after you would leave, girl I'd lock myself in our room just to avoid her ass.
Caramela looks inside of the rear view mirror at Lina and Valentina. She pulls over to a rest stop.
Caramela-If y'all have to use the bathroom now or anything else, please do so because we're only like 10 mins away from home.
Lina-Okay.
Valentina-okay.
The girls both go grab coffee's and some doughnuts, and heads back to the car.
Caramela-Aye.
Valentina-Me?
Caramela-Yes you, now where's my coffee and doughnuts at, huh?.
Valentina-Umm👀.
Caramela-I'm just fucking with you, ion do sweets. So since I don't know much about you tell me about yourself hermosa.
Valentina-Well most of all I am 19 years old. I work in the medical field as a pediatric nurse, and I have a passion for writing. I can be shy but confident sometimes. And lastly, I always believed that I was different from everyone else because the way I think. I don't wanna tell you too much cause the more I open up to you, the more my personality will come out. I'm afraid of revealing myself to people now.
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Caramela-Hmm🤔 that's actually very interesting. You and Lina are both very well defined two different people and I like that a lot. She says licking her lips.
Valentina-Aha, she's says laughing nervously.
Lina-Caramela! Don't do that to her, we just got out of an verbally abusive relationship with some psycho ass bitch.
Valentina-It's fine Lina calm down.
Caramela- Alright we're here. She's says pulling into this huge mansion stopping at the gate, that's surrounded with hella security.
Security #1-The boss is here, everybody stand down let her in.
A sound buzz's on caramela's phone letting her know that the gate has opened for her. She drives forward inside of a shady loop around, she gets out and opens the door for the girls again.
Caramela-Come I'll show you both around so you can learn to not get lost. Alright the first thing your gonna see when you walk inside of the building is a front desk. I have a front desk so I can keep track of everyone who has entered this building.
There will be no undercover feds allowed here at all. Now once you sign in, walk to your right it should be an elevator. Now I'm not gonna show you the whole building because I gotta go to work.
Now you both will be working at my club as bartenders only. If you wanna apply for a private showgirl then you can.
Valentina- what exactly is a private showgirl?
Caramela-To be exact a private showgirl is a female who teases another person during a lap dance just the naked way tho. The area that your dancing inside of will be closed off, and guarded by security. You don't have to worry about crazy men because the club is strictly for females only.
Valentina-Ohhh wow I wanna apply for that.
Lina-Ohh hell no! I don't think so, the only person you'll be dancing naked on is me.
Valentina-Why tf can't I make my own decisions. Your not my damn family.
Lina-Idgaf about your attitude but lose it before I fix it. She says getting all in Valentina's face.
Caramela-Chill out, she says standing in front of Valentina blocking her from Lina.
Lina-*Scoffs* wow really?!
Caramela-Yes really, move your ass before I move you myself.
The elevator dings, everyone gets off on floor 4.
Valentina-Um thank you. Growing up I never could defend myself and now that I'm older, I try to and it just doesn't work well.
Caramela-Well ladies this is where your rooms are located at, some of my girls that's apart of the cartel lives here so you'll be safe. My bedroom is all the way down the hallway to the left.
Lina-Thanks, she says with a blank face.
Caramela-Beautiful, Fix your face, now go to your room and relax.
Lina-Caramela can I go to the pool with Valentina?.
Caramela-Sure I'll notify one of my girls to go with y'all, matter fact on floor 3 there's an private indoor pool. It's closed off the only person who can see inside of the area, is me😈.
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