《Jin the Devil of Remnant》Bonus Chapter Part 2/2! Kid Jin
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Third POV
Kid Jin: "Otou-san!" He said as he points at Tai.
Everyone was shocked, but the most shocked were Raven and Summer as they fell to the ground on their Knees. As they do this their mini souls came out of their mouths and Tai was in shocked.
Tai: "WHAT!?"
Qrow: "That's wild! why the heck does he like you Tai!?"
Tai: "How should I know!?"
Ozpin: "Okay! I think the conclusion has been concluded! I have a idea for you all. Tai I want you take Jin with as his first step is for one week with you or any other joining you taking care of Jin until we find a way to turn him back if that doesn't work well. *sighs* Give Jin to Raven and she'll take care of him for one week and as these two weeks end then I have no other choice, but to make him stay at Beacon until then. So do we all have a deal?(mind) Please Oum above let these people or even these two women accept idea!"
It took about a few moments until Tai goes to Ruby and picks up Jin and looks at Ozpin and said.
Tai: "If it saves the school then it's okay with me lets go girls! its time to go home and you can bring your friends to! the more we can get the better we can take care of this guy" Tai said as he moved Jin a bit.
Kid Jin: "?"
Kid Jin POV
I don't know what's happening... this girl that I recently know says she's my sister!? I never had a sister and how!? moments later she took me somewhere. Once there I have another sister!? and she does look like the girl that I'm being held right now. There was two other girls two one look like a black cat that I saw yesterday with mom and a Kureijina shiroi kami no shojo the cat girl is fine, but that crazy white hair girl I don't like her, but I had to be nice. Moments later two more girls and finally! some boys for a change came in and they were making some clothes. The girls were going to give me clothes that are nasty, but the one boy that looks like he's from China gave me underwear and some black pants. I liked them so I picked them. After some time later a bunch of adults came in and everything went crazy! both two craziest bunch of the adults were these two ladies. They were like my mom, but in separate forms and they act differently and they were crazy over me crazy bunch!? and after a while of them talking they wanted me to pick who should I go. The lady that looked that girl that I first met or that lady that looked like that girl that got me into that bathroom. So I made another choice in mind so I picked the mad with blond hair he seems like a nice guy to be with. After that I got picked up him, but I didn't know that I was with the husband with those two women! ...I'm now worried for my life now.
Some time later the the team that I now know is team JNPR couldn't come, but the two girls, two of my new sisters, one uncle that I can tel is a drunk, my self-pro-claimed father, and... one of the crazy ladies that is my mom, but my one out of three or two, but I don't know. After sometime later we got to a house, but I would say a house that made of logs. Once we made the I got out of the car and started to look around the whole place as it was grassy and stuff.
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Tai: "Like it here Jin?"
Kid JIn: "*nod*"
I then started to explore the area it was great until I see a god house and when I got close a type of dog came out of it. I looked at it until the Dog came running at me like a missile and making fall, but the dog started to lick me all over my face. I couldn't help, but started to laugh and everyone was looking at me and I for embarrassed. I pushed off the dog and got back to my normal standers.
Kid Jin: "Hmph!" He said as he turns his head away from the dog, but the dog was running around me.
Yang: "Aw~ look at him trying be all that tough!"
Summer: "It is! *takes a pic* going to save this for the books."
Ruby: "Anyways! welcome to your home Jin! let me show you around Jin." She said as she takes my hand.
Once she took my hand she brought me in it was quite big. Inside the house contain some stairs to go up, a living room, kitchen, a dining room, and I think up stairs is where everyone bedroom or room in this house. Once she took me in she took me into the Living room and place me onto the couch and in a split second she disappear into roses!? and back again with some books. Once she for those things she got to my level and looked at me.
Ruby: "Okay big- I mean little bro! I'm going to teach you some English! so lets begin!" She said as she jumps up from the ground with a book.
As she jumps in mid air and slams onto the sofa and I bounce up a bit and lands back onto my stop as I have a dead-pan expression. The girl name Ruby pulls me closer to her and shows me some words. She began to teach me this language called English to small and to middle words. As she was teaching me I see that the women named Summer now know she looks over to then to Ruby.
Summer: "I see that your teaching your brother very well my little rose."
Ruby: "Oh mom! I'm just teaching him as he doesn't know any English I still remember when the first time he came. But, this time he doesn't know how to write the English words this is kinda fun... I mean.. I really feel like a big sister." She said with a soft smile.
Both girls smile until a drunk man ruins the moment.
Qrow: "You two do know that this might be a temporary effect. He won't be like this for long until Jin goes back to normal."
Summer: "Oh hush you!"
Ruby: "UNCLE QROW!!" She winy tone.
I look at him and he does look like dad, but different he has one red eye not two also not a drunk. He then looks at me so he towards me and starts rubbing my hair, but I didn't like it so I grab to of his hand by using mine.
Qrow: "Oh~ look at this! trying to act tough huh? nice try kid, but now I'm tougher then you. Heh." He said as he kept on petting me also having a strong grip.
Kid Jin: "Dow't louk down on me! I'm more strowg then you!" I said as I try to fight back to that arm of his.
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As I kept on fighting with this guys arm plus hand I look to the women who have weird faces and started to shriek in happiness?
Summer: "OH MY OUM! THAT WAS SO ADORABLE!!~"
Ruby: "YOU SAY IT MOM!!~"
Qrow: "*Looks at me* Your going to make every girl again crazy for you. You know that?"
Kid Jin: "?"
Qrow: "Your going to gave a crazy day, but before that happens lets *picks me up* do what we do back when you were like this." He said in a smile.
He was going to take me somewhere, but I was taken away from him by the lady who is my mother for some reason and being Summer.
Summer: "Oh no you don't Qrow! *brings me closer to her chest as I still have dead-pan expression* your not bringing him to one of many bars you go to show off the women over there!" She said in a pouty tone.
Ruby: "Ew! that's gross uncle Qrow!"
Qrow: "Oh come on Sun! i-"
Summer: "Nope! and that's my final answer! but, now I think he's hungry."
A minute later my stomach started to growl and I started to turn red and started to get angry as I let this happen to me. I could see Ruby started to laugh, Qrow sighing, and the women whose holding me smiles... like mom..
Summer(smiles): "Looks like someones hungry~ lets go get you mister something to eat."
Kid Jin: "*Tusndere angry noises*"
Summer: "Lets go then!" She said as she took me into the kitchen and I see the two Blondes the girl and man.
Yang: "I see that you brought the little man here Aunt Summer." She said as she looks at me.
Kid Jin: "Hmph!" I said as I turn my head away from her, but I hear her giggle.
Tai: "What's going on with Jin?"
Summer: "Nothing he's just hungry! so I'm just going to make a meal for him just a small one nothing more." She said to the man name Tai.
She then place me onto some chair and the two blondes looked at me, but came Ruby and the drunk.
Ruby: "Hi Dad! Hi sis!"
Qrow: "Sup Tai! Hi firecracker!"
Yang/Tai: "Hi! Qrow! Ruby!"
Yang: "So how was being a big sister for the first feel like?"
Ruby: "Great! *sits down* it made me feel like a real protector to a younger sibling... now I get what's the feeling you get Yang towards me."
Yang: "See!? what I told ya! when you become the older sibling you get that feeling very well."
Tai or Dad? I don't know anymore he looked at me and started to talk to me.
Tai: "So how are you son? are you doing well? are you hungry?"
Kid Jin: "Wes a little bit... not rewlly hungry, but a wittle."
Tai: "I see! that's good." He said as he reached to my head and patted it.
I was going to move it away, but it felt right..... I don't know why? but... I liked it.. a moment left I see something. The woman name Summer came back with a bowl with a spoon in the bowl I smelled the food and knew that. It's a beef bowl I could see tiny green onion slices, beef, and white rice this woman knew about what I like and its smells like mothers!? how!?
Summer: "Come on now Jin! eat up son." She smiles at me.
I don't know what's going on, but.... its smells so good! and it makes me want to remember mom.. I miss her. This women remind me of mom and her kindness. I got my spoon and I felt something between both of my cheeks... those were tears... with full heartedly began to eat the food as tears began to left down my cheeks.
No one POV
As the the whole family see the young boy Jin started to eat his food as he started to cry with no words were spoken. They were for a lost for words as no one in of Jin old years before he was even turn back years saw him crying better yet see him crying in tears coming down.
Ruby(mind): "This might be the first time.. no might be the first ever seen him crying since I was a little girl."
Tai(mind): "Holy Oum! this might be the first! this is going to be one in the new finding of Jin."
Qrow(mind): "Wow..... never seen this coming.."
Yang(mind): "I know that this might be rude and being an ass, but... I need to take c picture as this a super new thing here! also WOW.... never saw this coming.."
Summer: "I see you like it Jin..(mind) Maybe those times with cooking with Jin and when he was teaching me when he was young his mother made this meal.
Kid Jin(crying): "Wes! *sniff* very good!" Jin said as he kept on crying in joy, sadness, and mix emotions.
Everyone smile as this is the first time as they ever saw Jin crying with such emotions.
(Time Skip to a week of the Rose/Xiao Long family having fun with Kid Jin in his new form)
Summer POV
It has been one week.. I had a blast with Jin he was so cute in many ways! since he was turn into a kid. We all learned that Jin memories of us don't exist so we recreated some of them into his tiny head, but that doesn't mean that he has other memories. We had fun and teaching him a lot of things looks like this time Jin doesn't remember any of the Martial Arts that he taught to Raven, her goons of bandits, Tai, Ruby, Yang, and pretty much anyone who came to his aid for teachings. One good thing is that Raven won't be forcing him to teach her goons, but now... let see what he can do.. against Raven now. Because Raven is coming to pick him up so... I wish for him to be safe and be careful for him to be at her area.
Right now I'm waiting for Raven to come with my son Jin as I'm carrying him in my arms. I then see my old partner Raven walking confidently.
Summer: "Raven..." I said as I held Jin close.
Raven: "Summer..."
Summer: "I know, I know..... let me have these few seconds."
Raven: "Make it quick."
I turn away from Raven and I look at Jin who seems confused.
Summer: "Okay Jin mommy is going to leave you with your other "mom" okay."
Jin: "Other mom?"
Summer: "Yes, but it only going to be one week like me and everyone back in the house alright."
Jin: "*nods*"
I smile and turn back to my old teammate Raven and walks towards her and before I give Jin to her I talked to her face to face.
Summer: "Know this! Jin doesn't have any memories of anything of training, Martial Arts, and nothing to the point that he can teach. So.... don't push him!" I said as I put into a bit of rage into the last part.
Raven: "I see... but I'll still take him! and I'll show him the world once more." She said as she shows a true smile.
I hesitated it at first as my mother instincts kick and I knew that right now I felt like I'm giving away my child. It hurts like a bitch, but its his aunt/mother as we both have legal papers to be his mother. I gave in a grave sigh and handed her Jin.
Raven: "Why *holds Jin in her arms* hello my son welcome back to mamas arms. *looks at me* Don't worry Sun.. I'll take care of him as he's one of my own."
Summer: "Alright.... remember when this week passes you'll have to give him back to Ozpin after this."
Raven: "Yes, yes Sun I'll do that for now... let me spend some time with my ."
Raven opens a portal and walks through it as she leaves me with that remark... you damn sure I was pissed!
Summer(angry): "" I yelled in rage as I got my weapon out and slice about four grimm behind me and started to walk away.
Raven POV
FINALLY!!!! ....today.... today I'm holding my child... no! my true and one and only child. As I walked through my portal to my camp I see Vernal waiting for me and to her shock she asks.
Vernal: "Um... boss is that your... new son?"
Raven: "I wish, but this here is Jin and as you can see he reverted back to being a child, but his memories has changed. Do to this he can't remember any of the teachings that he was teaching you and your squad."
Vernal looks at Jin as he looks at her in all confusion.
Vernal: "Can I... pet his head?" She asks nervously.
Raven: "Yes you can, but you hurt him you loose a finger."
Vernal sweated as he carefully ruffles my sons head and I see that he was just confused and that was fine with me. It was a few seconds later I started to walk towards to my tent and place my son onto my bed and he looks at me.
Raven: "Okay Jin as you already been told or learned that I and Summer have the papers that her and I are your mommies. Do you understand?"
Kid Jin: "Yes... mama?"
I could tell he questioning how would he address me and what he said made my heart hurt from how he says it. It made my heart flutter as he said it in such a child like away that made my heart struck as if an arrow was shot at me.
Raven: "Yes.. yes my little prince... *hugs Jin* I'm your mama.(mind): To think a woman like me saying this to my new son... a woman that killed so many and now... a caring mother. But, the real question here is that... I like it."
As I gave him a hug he hugs back and that made it so nice from a few moments pass. My son aka Jin Branwen is on my bad confused into what to do and I'm stuck as he doesn't know what to do at this point. So good thing that I got a few toys for him one being a tiny punching bag, two toy cars, a video game that's a fighting game and its called The King of Remnant XIII, and finally a Beowolf plush. For now I look at my right hand Vernal to know if this was enough or do I need more?
Raven: "Vernal do you think this will stall him as I do my work and come back to play with him?"
Vernal: "Do you want me to be straight forward or not?"
Raven: "Vernal spit it out already the more you stall the more and less time I spend with my son."
Vernal: "Well.. *looks at Jin whose looks at the things in such confusion and curiosity to the stuff that Raven brought for him* if you asking me well it looks like your son will have a lot of free time trying to figure these items out."
Raven: "That's good, but I want you to guard him." I said as Vernal was in utter shock.
Vernal: "BOSS! YOU-"
Raven: "He's my son Vernal! if anyone know about my son he will be a big and huge target! so I need some people to guard him. Find people in the camp that you can trust! no better then that MY TRUST. If you *stares at Vernal with cold eyes and with dread of a killer* don't do this I'll make you regret it to the rest of your days and even the afterlife. Do I make myself clear?"
Vernal(scared): "Yes.... yes boss."
Raven: "Good now go and find some guard in the camp as I entertain my son. Go!"
Vernal runs off and for the time being and sit down to see Jin looking at the grimm plush toy as well holding it. I put his close to my side and pet him on his head.
Raven: "You know Jin... sometimes I think that these people or to say my bandits are so trouble some. Don't you think?"
Kid Jin: "....Trouble... yes.. big trouble."
Raven: "And this is why your my little prince." I said as kept on petting his head and hugged him as his in my left side.
(Time Skip to kid Jin wearing a kid version of Raven armor and Raven takes a pic and shed a tear as this is the greatest day ever)
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Ozpin POV
It has been two weeks and no progress with Jin and to revert his body back. Until something hit my mine. If Jin has his will power in him still that means doesn't it mean he can break this? how can I bring his will power out...
Ozpin(mind): "This is just an attempt, but lets see if this brings out his will power or what to what force he need to break out."
Right now Jin is sitting in my office as I stand up from my chair and walk towards him and said what I think that can bring out his will power to break this cause.
Ozpin: "You know Jin.. *shows a picture of Penny* she's entering the Vytal Festival tournament and right now you can't get to meet her because do to your age. So if-"
In a clear minute or second a big puff of smoke emerged from where Jin was sitting and back away quick. Once the smoke disappeared I see Jin in... back in his normal state! he was back to normal. Who would of think that showing the picture of their girlfriend going to the tournament will do this.
Suddenly a door opens from behind the screen and Wrath19 appears and looks at the reader.
Wrath19: "That's not true to what Ozpin said he just brought up tournament and Penny being there. So if you can put two in two together yeah.... Jin didn't want her to go through what he went through back where he was from. So many damn tournaments he took in. Anyways! thank you for listing to what I explain how did Jin return back." He said as he closes the door and the book starts back up again.
But, as Ozpin was glad he sees that the clothes that were made for him were destroyed and in his office is a naked Jin.
Jin: "Headmaster....*looks around and to himself* what in the hell happen to me."
Ozpin: "Oh Jin... you been through a lot so before we begin lets get you some clothes."
From that moment I started to explain to Jin what happen also asking Glynda for help to get Jin some clothes from that Jin was more confused then ever.
Because he now has the memories of them back in his world now. Reason behind that is that that young Jin is like the Jin back at his world so with the Rose family, Xiao Long, and the Branwen tribe this was more shocking. From this Jin brain overloaded with what has happen to him.
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