《The Unseen》Author's Intro

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I post this with some trepidation, although less as the chapters grow. I have never uploaded an unfinished work. My goal is to elicit comments and corrections that will help me perfect this story.

If you have time and the inclination, let me know what you think. Constructive criticism is most welcome. I rarely write in third-person and suspect I may have botched it up in some places.

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