《Melody of Time -Naruto-》Chapter 47 - A little Behind the Scene Stuff ^.-
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And fair warning, this chapter is written slightly different the usual, so it might be a bit off. It's also a little AU, but not too much.
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Chapter 47-
Behind-The-Scenes Torture Bonus!!!!!
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Ahhh.... Oww... " Kotori moaned as he groggily woke up. He lifted his head to look around, but not seeing anything. He blinked a couple of times, seeing as it was a dream but was still unable to see anything, so he lifted his hands up to rub his eyes, only to find out that he couldn't move his arms, that they were tied tightly behind his back to something.. Only when he realized this did a searing pain appear on the back of his head. Like he had been hit hard. "Where am I..? ... What happened to me?" He asked no one in general, trying to remember what happened to him, but was pulling up nothing. All he could remember was working on the fighting scene that he had with Harmony/Suteki, and then walking off stage to Writer-sama, asking if it the shot was okay, and then... Nothing.
"Dammit.... What the hell is going on? ... Ow... My head...." He lowered his head back down, the back throbbing in pain.
"Can I please kill him now?" He jumped back up when a voice spoke in the darkness.
"No." A new voice said, close to where the first voice said. The sound of something scratching softly and rapidly against something was also heard, like someone writing something rapidly on paper.
'Who would be able to write in a place like this!? They wouldn't be able to see anything!"
"Why not. He's a bastard and many people want him dead. So why can't I do it now?" The first voice said, clearly angry and impatient, and also female.
"Humph. Did you not you not read the comments? They didn't ask to kill him, they asked to torture him! HehehehehahahahahahahahHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" A third voice shirked, scaring him. It was closer than the other two, and he swore he felt the air around him move, like someone had walked past him. He didn't know the first two, but he really didn't want to know the third. But he could tell that it was a she and that she sounded older then the first and maybe even the second.
'Kill me? Torture me? Comments? Who in the hell are these people?!' His thoughts raced as a forth, more quiet and more collected voice was heard.
'Must you laugh like that all the time? It's really annoying. And it's starting to give me a headache. And can we please turn the lights on? I can't see a thing." Another female commented in the dark.
"I agree... It is much too dark in here. Lights." The second voice commanded, and in less than a second the room he was being held in was flooded with brightness, making him close his eyes from the sudden lightness. After a few seconds he lifted his head up and blinked a few times, adjusting to the light, and seeing four people in front of him. Four people the he knew all too well, at least he though.
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"Looks like he is already awake." Harmony said when they all saw that he was looking at them. He looked at them in shock as Harmony picked an imaginary piece of lint off her light purple t-shirt and pale blue jeans with her wig off, making her hair a little past her shoulders. When she was done she looked up and glared at him with her contactless emerald eyes.
"He was probably awake the whole time." Katherine, A.K.A. the voice of Nala said from besides her and flipped some of her long blonde hair over her shoulder. She was wearing a simple dark green tank and dark blue jean shorts that went along with her cat ear headband that she wore all the time, saying it helps her get into character. Her bright blues eyes somehow looked bored but also happy for some reason.
" Hehe... Just look at his frighten face.... Hehehehe." Kotori jumped when the third voice spoke and jerked his head to the left where Suteki was standing nearby with her permanent smirk on her face that went along with her blood red hair and midnight black eyes. She was leaning on a wall closer to Kotori then the rest, but then began walking over to him, making her three quarter length black skirt and flowly bright red long sleeve shirt sway and her long brown leather heals click on the ground. She came right up to him and leaned on his shoulder, her hand cradling his face. "I think the only thing that looks better on this face is pain though." She said, examining him. Before what she had just said register in his mind she stood up abruptly and slammed him hard, making his face snap to the right, his cheek stinging and now slightly wet. He couldn't only guess that her long nails had caught his face when she hit him.
"Suteki. You know the rules. No injuring any of the... Visible parts." The last person said as she pushed up her glasses and continued writing furiously. Kotori was shocked the most when he saw the glasses, sweater and jean wearing, blonde hair that was all ways up in a ponytail 16-year old girl who never told him her name, or anyone her name. Writer-san. "I still need him for later shoots and I can't have it delayed so all his wounds have a chance to heal."
"It's sucks who medical-ninjustu does really exist in this world Director. If it did we could beat him as much as our hearts desire and then have him perfect in time for tomorrows shoot." Harmony said as she crossed her arms and gave him a scowl. "At least he gets what he deserves."
"What did I do?" Kotori asked, fear creeping though his entire body, but he knew better then to show it. In a way he was almost exactly like the character that he played and shared a name. Cocky, smartass, playboy, and also cunning with a hint of obsession for a certain red head. Actually, every actor that Writer-san had casted has all most exactly like the characters they played, even their names, besides Katherine, but even she admit that if she had the choice she would rather have the name Nala, so that's what most people called her.
"Don't act like you don't know!" Harmony said as she began walking over to him, something she held in her hand flashed when it caught some light. Something metal. "You fucking psychopathic stalker!!! " She yelled and lunged at him, only to be held back by Nala. Okay, maybe he was a little too much like his character when it came to Harmony... He just could never figure out why she cared about the little bitch, Rin, so much, and not him, so he often followed her to find out.
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"Calm down Harmony. You don't want to do anything that angers Director-chan. Besides, we already have every planned out for this creep. Heheheh... Oh I can't wait for it.... I want to paint this room red with his blood... Hehehehehe."
"I think you are going a bit too far, Suteki-san. He only way to paint this room was to spill all of his blood, and then he would be dead, and Writer-sama had just told you that she still needs him" Nala the turned to Writer-san, who was still writing something on her paper like she all ways did. "So, Writer-sama, what should we start with?"
She stopped writing and placed a finger to her chin like she was thinking and then pulled out a needle syringe and a vial filled with some pale green liquid. Kotori could see Harmony's eyes light up when she saw it and when Writer-san walked over and handed the two things to her. "Let’s start with this. I believe I told you Harmony that you could do the honors." Harmony nodded with a sadist smile before facing him and placing the needle into the vial, letting it fill with whatever was it before throwing the vial to the ground, smashing it to pieces.
"I'm just going to say this now. This isn't going to hurt a little... it's going to hurt A LOT!" Harmony said as she walking over to Kotori and stabbed it quiet violently into his left arm, pressing down the other end of the needle so the liquid would flow into my ar. Almost instantly he felt like a fire had started under his skin and was pacing its way rapidly to the rest of his body. Kotori tried to get out of his restraints to see if he could stop it, but every little move he made intensified the flames even more.
"Oh stop your pathetic whining, you bustard." Harmony said when Kotori let a small wince out from the burning. She walked right up to him when he let another wince out and punched him right in the gut, making him double over, increasing the flames, and having the wind knocked out of him. 'They are going to kill me!! They're really going to kill me!' Kotori realized when he tried to sit back up, only to have someone kick the chair he was sitting on so I fell to the side, his head bashing painfully on the ground, making his vision double for a little bit. 'I got to get out of here!!!!'
"Don't even think you'll be able to get away. Writer-sama made sure of that." Nala said before she too walked over to Kotori and bent down, looking straight into his eyes. "It's painful, nee? I don't think you should be worried by the pain you feel right now, because this is nothing!!" She spat right in his face, making me anger. No one spits in his face!
"You fucking bitch! Wait till I get out of here! When I go I'm going to kill you, every last one of you!!! Fucking fake cat!!!!!" he yelled at her. She glared at him before standing up briskly.
"I don’t think you should have done that." Nala said ramming her foot into his gut that Harmony had punched, making the air Kotori had just regained wheeze out of him. Nala squatted down to look at me when he coughing. "You better hope that you pass out soon. Or else you'll be in a whole new world of pain."
"Couch.... Go to... Cough... Hell." Nala sighed at his response and then stood up again.
"Fine I give up. Suteki. Your turn." '... Fuck...'
"No... Hehehe... Just looking at Harmony I don't think she is satisfied with just a single punch... I think I should let her have her fin first before I get some in. Is that alright, Director-chan?"
"Yeah... I guess so. I can't think of anything else, so I'll let you three have free reign... Just make sure that he is alive for the next part and able to move on his own." Writer-san said before he heard some feet move till they reached a door of some sort and slip past, closing behind itself, letting him know he was left with these three. 'Fuck.... I'm really going to die now...'
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Harmony smirked when the door that the girl that many called either Director or Writer-san, disappeared behind before looking over to Katherine (Nala) and Suteki.
"Get him up." She said, nodding over to the worthless thing on the ground that was wriggling in pain from whatever was in the injection they gave him. They both looked at her for a few seconds before walking over to him. Nala picking him up so he was sitting up now as Suteki worked on the rope that was binding his legs, torso, arms, and hands, a few times tightening them 'accidently' making a few more colourful words spew from Kotori. When the two of them finally did get him standing they stood on each side of him, Nala this time holding his arms painfully behind his back.
"What you got in store for him?" She asked, twisting his arms.
"Fuck!! Let go of me you crazy bitch!!" Kotori yelled at her, making Suteki punch him across the face, letting a satisfying crack sound erupt, telling them all that his nose was now broken as some red liquid from it.
"I'm pretty sure I'm the crazy bitch... It's in my name, not that I would want it to be heard coming out of you.' Suteki said, examining her newly sharpened bloody ruby red nails before looking at Harmony, one eyebrow raised, silently asking the same question.
"Not too much.” Harmony answered as she cracked a few knuckles. "Not too much to push the boundary Director placed, but enough to satisfice me. Besides, it's funnier when it's a fight." She nodded her head to the right, telling Nala to let go and step away from him. When she did Harmony clenched her fist and punched his gut again, making double over and then kneeing him in the face, sending him sprawling to the floor, all limbs spread.
"Get up." She growled and kicked him near the waist. When Kotori didn't stand up, from the pain and loose of breath again Suteki walked over and pulled him up by one arm, before pushing him back to Harmony, who round-house kicked him when he got close enough, sending him to Nala, who in turn pushed him back to the floor hard, laughing when he fell against the cold cement with a bash. After that all three of them walked up to him, all laughing before they all began kicking him, calling him names, giving him reasons to why he deserved this, mostly for stalking Harmony, kidnapping Rin, for being an ass, for being an annoying person, and even trying to kill the actor Harmony's and even Nala's real families when she turned him down numerous times.
"We better stop or else Writer-sama will have our asses.' Nala said as she wiped some sweat from her brow, looking down at the bruised, bloody, and broken body on the floor.
"Hmmm... I wish we could do some more. There wasn't enough blood for my liking."
"Suteki, you really should be in a metal hospital, but I do think we should go. Come on, let’s get out of here." Harmony said before turning around to walk to the only door and pulled out her cell phone, dialing 911, letting the hospital know that they had just found somebody beaten up horrible, finding it hard to not let the smile on her face show in her voice before snapping it close and looking on last time over her should at the person on the floor, not looking fully human any more. "He got what he deserved.
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So that is chapter 47... I don't like it.... Well I like it in the sense that I get to torture Kotori a little bit, but I can't kill him, and writing a torture scene in first person is a little hard.... But you guys got what you wanted, even though it made Kotori seem like the good guy and Harmony, Nala and Suteki as the bad guys... Oh well.
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