《Claiming of the Demon King (ICS Book One)》Revision Notes
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Hi Immortal Readers!
I've made the final revisions to Claiming of the Demon King. Below is a list of changes in case you don't feel like re-reading the book.
1.) New fancy book cover!
2.) More chapters and content.
3.) Brief peek at Vincent Shaw's wolf transformation. (Chapter Four)
4.) Vincent Shaw POV chapters. I did this to build up his character, leading into Book Two. (Chapters 6, 20, and 28.)
5.) Nicholas has been changed from a shifter to human. He bares a curse from a young age of immortality and is stronger than a normal human due to his age. I switched back and forth on this, but the more I planned out his plot line I realized the shifter aspect just wouldn't work. Trust me, this change is good. He has some epic shit coming his way in Book Three.
So that's it! The final revisions. Thank you all for supporting me on this! I can't believe I started this story nearly two years ago!! But I am so happy with the final product and I hope you are too.
Love,
Winter
10/17/2015
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