《Unwillingly, Unprotected Heart | ✔》A/N: Characters.
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Ok, so I got a comment from @LetsBeFriends the other day and she said that I was using too many characters. I personally think its fine and even my plans for this book involve about five or six more characters coming in but I want your feedback.
Am I using too much characters or is it fine with you guys?
If I am, then I'll try to tone it down on the extra POVs but I only feel the need to do that for some of the readers/fans who want to hear about them and also because I'm trying to decide some of the characters that would be in a sequel.
Would really like your feedback so please comment.
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