《Kidnapped for a good reason || Choi San FF ღ ✔️》╰┈➤ Chapter 5
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**Choi San's POV**
You tried to open Y/N's door but it wouldnt work.. so you decided to go downstairs.
Mom : ARE YOU CRAZY? WHAT DID YOU DO?
Choi San : mom.. stop it
Mom : WHY ARE YOU GUYS SO MEAN TO HER? ACTING LIKE SHE IS A ANIMAL OR SOMETHING.. NOT ALLOWING HER TO GO DOWNSTAIRS AND HURT HER?
Ha-joon : Mom.. San is kinda right but you are right with hurting her.. you could've done it different San
San : i know but..
Dad : NOTHING BUT.. YOU TWO DONT KNOW WHAT SHE HAS BEEN TROUGH.. CANT YOU SEE SHE IS TRAUMATIZED?
Ha-joon : dad are you seriously defending her?
Dad : she has no one else Ha-joon.. and you Choi San, you better make it up with her or it will end up bad
Yeona : because of you two my friend is sad!
Choi San : what do you mean she has no one else?
Dad : none of your business..
Ha-joon : San im upstairs okay?
Choi San : okay
Then Ha-joon went upstairs and Dad went back to the livingroom.
Mom : come with me San
Then you followed your mom and yeona to the kitchen.
Mom : look san.. you dont have to act super friendly but just act normal around her.. i dont know why but you can tell she isnt feeling herself..
Choi San : okay...
20 minutes later
Mom : dinner is ready, San bring this to Y/N so you to can also talk and make it up
Choi San : okay
Then you went upstairs to Y/N's room but it was still locked.
Choi San : Y/N open the door
But she didnt answered, something didnt feel right.
Choi San : Y/N? hello?
But she still didnt answered.
Then you remembered you still had the keys, so you put the plate down and opened the door.
When you opened the door, Y/N was laying down on the floor with a box of medicine next to her.
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So many thoughts as going trough your head.
*you in your mind* no.. did she.. did she commit suicide?
Then you got on your knees and tried to wake her up but she wasnt waking up.
*you in your mind* please Y/N.. dont do this to me..
You didnt knew what to do, so yo called Ha-joon.
Choi San : HA-JOON COME FAST
Then Ha-joon came
Ha-joon : Whats wro- what happend to Y/N?
Choi San : i- i dont know but she isnt waking up
Then tears slowly started to fall down your eyes.
Ha-joon : why are the medicine net to he- no way.. dont tell me tried to..
Choi San : yes..
Ha-joon : wait let me check if she is still breathing.. yes she is still breathing but we need to go to the hospital fast..
You felt relieve when Ha-joon said she was still breathing, then you picked her up and went downstairs with Ha-joon.
Mom : What is happening? where are you guys going?
Choi San : To the hospital
Dad : what?
But you and Ha-joon didnt answered and left the house, got in the car and drove away to the hospital.
30 minutes later
You and Ha-joon brought Y/N to the hospital, the doctors are helping Y/N right now.. you and Ha-joon were waiting infront of the room for the doctors to say something..
Ha-joon : it is my fault..
Choi San : no its mine hyung.. i shouldnt yelled at her like that.. maybe mom was right..
Ha-joon : what do you mean?
Choi San : she said she had a feeling that Y/N didnt feel herself really.. it is all my fault
Ha-joon : dont worry little brother.. everything will be alright i promise
Choi San : i hope so..
Then the doctor came
Ha-joon : and?
Doctor : the girl is alright
Choi San : thankgod
You felt happy as the doctor said that
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Doctor : but she cant do anything, we saw her bruises and it had affect on her if she goes home she needs to take rest for two or three weeks she will be fully recovered
Choi San : Thankyou doctor
Doctor : but.. there is one thing
Choi San : what?
Doctor : did you two knew she was pregnant?
You and Ha-joon were in shock, she was pregnant?
Choi San : n-no
Doctor : because of the amount of medicine she took.. the baby died so we removed the baby in the operation
Choi San : Thankyou doctor
Doctor : you can go inside now and see her
Then the doctor left and you and Ha-joon went inside Y/N's room here you saw she was still in coma.
Ha-joon : mom is calling me, be right back
Choi San : okay
Then Ha-joon left the room.
you couldn't do anything but feel guilty.
Then you decided to sit down ont he chair right next to her and wait until she wakes up.
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