《straight line//Dolan Twins》say good bye
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"Dustin wake up." Cameron said.
I got up & put on my clothes on.
A baby blue tank top,black shorts & black vans. I put on my glasses & fixed my hair into a braid. I put all of my shirts in a box, followed by my shoes & pants.
Leeuh-im on my way
Me-ok.
I put my laptop in my bookbag. I took down my posters.
"Hey."
"Hi." We just stood there looking at each other. We finally ran to each other, crying.
"Thanks for helping me."I said.
"It is the less thing I could do. My bestie is moving......I dont know what Im going to do without you."
I started crying worse.
"The worst part is that....you will be missing the Christmas ball."
"Im glade im going to miss it......last year Grayson poured kool-aid all over my white dress."
"I remember that." She said looking down at her phone.
"My mom wants me......ill be back. "
I did not hear the front door open, I walked over to my door & there she was with Cameron.
"What are you doing!"I yelled.
"She had something on her lip." Said Cam.
She blushed
"Just go back to what you were doing."I said walking back into my room.
I heard the door open, It slammed shut. I ran in took me a quick shower & got ready for the day.
GRAYSON pov.
I walked into 1st hour did not see Dustin. That made my day.
2nd hour was good but I was wondering were she was so I texted Cameron.
Me-were is Dustin?
Cam-dude I forgot to tell you. We are moving.
Me-k bro.
I put my phone away & took the notes our teacher wrote on the board.
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I was walking home & I saw Dustin outside.
"Hey stupid, how are you?"I asked
"Just go away."
I walked off & a tear fell down her face. I dont fell that bad.
"Hey wait up."said Ethan.
"Yo man."
"Was Dustin crying?"Asked Ethan
"Yeah."
"Nice, do you know why."
"Because of me."
"She deserves it."
We keep walking & when I got home, I ate some ice cream & thought about what I did. I felt extremely tired so I took a nap, but I was woken up by Cameron telling me its dinner time.
I got up & sat beside Ethan. My mom made us homemade pineapple pizza.
"Thanks mom, that was really good."
"You're welcome honey."
I walk back upstairs & laid in bed listening to Drake. I fell asleep & thinking about how could I treat someone like that.
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