Simply put: there are a ton of plot holes, logic inconsistencies, and generally I think part of this story is to rushed and confusing. Also, I plan to do something completely different for the end of the book, but I think I need to make the ending smoother by adding foreshadowing and other things, which a huge stretch, and the story just falls apart if I try to jam them in rn

Ive reading the comments a little and thinking on how I could fix those issues, while keeping the story generally the same. even though I watched, read, and played pokemon a lot, I still have way more I have to research about typing, lore, etc. (Seriously how did I miss some of these things also I can't stand it when the story is not written to the best of my ability)

Idk if ill finish the ending then rewrite or just rewrite now, we'll see. Thanks for reading