《CRIMSON MOON (SHORT CHAPTERS)》Chapter 183: El Charro Negro vs. Quetzalcoatl
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During the age of the Gods, in Mesoamerica, powerful beings ruled over the earth. Creatures with the shape of animals ruled the lands with an iron fist. Their powerful mana made them Gods. These Gods destroyed civilizations and created new ones. Among them, the one known as the leader of the Gods. The creator of life for the Ancient Olmecs and Aztecs, the one who was previously known as Kukulkan. The Feathered Serpent; Quetzalcoatl. It is said that when the Conquistadors (Conquerors) invaded the lands, the Gods disappeared and marked the end of their era. People believed that Quetszalcoatl was just a legend and that he never existed…but they were wrong…
Present…
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“¡CORRAN POR SUS VIDAS!” (Run for your life) Chaos spreads around the area of Xochimilco as people run for their lives. Others film on what’s going on and make a live stream over the Social Media platforms. Others kneel down and pray for their lives on what they were seeing.
Everyone sees the silhouette of a Giant Serpent. The Feathered Serpent; the serpent’s belly is orange, the head of the serpent has a pattern of red and blue feathers. It has blue eyes, fangs, and a serpent’s tongue slithering. The body has green and red scales covering it all around until its tail. The wings inside have white feathers with the side being red. The outside of the feathers are green as well. The size of the God extends two kilometers of length.
“The Guardian God: QUETZALCOATL” Ahide chants completing the transformation. Uriel looks with shock, he looks at everyone frightened; “Damn it, why now? I have to move now!”
Uriel looks at the Cortes and LeFleur; “Angel and Crespo listen to me, grab the twins and get out of here…run as fast as you can!”
Angel and Crespo look at the God with shock and didn’t listen. -TCH- Uriel raises his voice; “ANGEL…CRESPO…NOW!” The guys finally listen and each of them grab a twin and run away. Uriel looks at Alejandro; "Alejandro we must…”
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Quetzalcoatl attacks Uriel, he manages to dodge his face. However, Quetzalcoatl's attack creates a huge shockwave blowing everyone away.
“DON’T LET GO!” Angel grabs Madeleine and Crepos grabs Marinette. Marinette looks at a black portal appearing before them; “What’s that?”
“Oh no!” Crespo tries to stop, suddenly specter hands grab the four of them and pull them into the portal.
As the shockwave ends, Alejandro holds Marjorie; “Are you alright?” Alejandro asks Marjorie who is bleeding from her forehead.
“Y-Y-Yes it’s just a scratch. But where are the others?” Marjorie answers, searching for the others who disappear.
Alejandro looks everywhere; “I don’t know, maybe they escaped safely…”
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Quetzalcoatl tries to get Uriel however he keeps up dodging him. Adihee and Xochitl are below Quetzalcoatl.
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“Damn it, even though it’s huge, that serpent is still fast…”
“Uriel…” Uriel gets distracted by seeing Alejandro and Marjorie, Quetzalcoatl hits Uriel with his tail.
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Uriel falls into the river, Marjorie and Alejandro are shocked and Marjorie screams:
“UUUURRRRRRIIIIIEEEELLLL!!!!!!”
Marjorie screams at the river as she desperately tries to find Uriel. Alejandro pulls her away and says with tears in his eyes:
“Believe in him. Right now I must keep you safe, it was an order!!”
Marjorie with tears in her eyes nods and they both begin to run away from Quetzalcoatl.
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Adihe notices Uriel’s aura in Marjorie and Alejandro as well;
“They are evil as well, killed them”
“Wait brother, they are nice people” Xochitl tries to stop him. Adihe gets angry:
“Cortes seemed like a nice person but he betrayed everyone”
Xochitl has a flashback of events from the past where flames and blood were present. She lets go of Adihe’s hand and agrees: “Very well brother”
Quetzalcoatl charges straight at Marjorie and Alejandro, Alejandro notices that; “Damn it, I won’t make it…”
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Uriel comes out of the river and punches Quetzalcoatl forcing it to back off. Marjorie and Alejandro see Uriel and scream his name. Uriel sees them and shouts:
“YOU FOOLS, RUN!!!”
The serpent once again charges towards them and begins to gather mana in his mouth. Uriel notices and thinks:
“I must do it, I have no choice...otherwise, they will die!”
Uriel screams at both of them as he faces forward looking at Quetzalcoatl:
“LISTEN TO ME! I’M SORRY FOR DRAGGING YOU INTO THIS! BUT PLEASE STAY ALIVE!”
Uriel closes his eyes as he remembers Juan’s warning:
“Listen muchacho, nobody needs to see you, those who discover your identity will be in danger...you will have no choice but to kill them... however if something were to threaten your loved ones then...don’t hold back muchacho!”
“Sorry Viejo, it seems they already knew about it and I have no choice right now.” Uriel begins to walk forward; “Alejandro...take care of Marjorie…” Alejandro nods in agreement.
Uriel releases mana as he walks forward with a determined look. He lifts his arm as he looks at the Feathered serpent:
“Get ready...you damned serpent...this is now personal…”
Uriel extends his right arm to the side, holds it with his left arm and begins to chant:
“YO SOY EL JINETE, YO SOY INICIO, YO SOY EL FINAL. ¡YO SOY EL CHARRO NEGRO!” (Translates: I am the horsemen, I am the beginning. I am the end, I am El Charro Negro).
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Quetzalcoatl roars releasing a huge energy beam directly at Uriel. Uriel transforms revealing his Charro form and pulls out his sword: “Cuarto Cresciente” (Translates: Crescent Moon)
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Uriel swings his sword, repelling the Serpent´s attack to another area causing a huge explosion.
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Reminder; Uriel is wearing a special charro suit, which consists of long, tight black colored pants covered with decoration on the sides. He has a long bolero coat with golden buttons white gloves, and a special pitea belt made of silk. He had a white button shirt with a black vest, a silk tie and a large round sombrero hanging from his neck.
“Is that really Uriel?” Marjorie looks surprised to see him in that form and blushes; “He looks so dreamy”
Alejandro who is holding her cheers for him:
“THAT´S AWESOME!!!! WAY TO GO URIEL!!!!”
“IDIOT! WE’RE IN A MIDDLE OF A DANGEROUS SITUATION! DON´T MOVE!!” Uriel screams to both of them and extends his index finger pointing at them and chants: “Barrera de Viento” (Wind Barrier)
A wind barrier forms surrounding both of them. Uriel turns his head; “I will not let you die here…”
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Marjorie feels as if her heart just skipped a beat.
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Quetzalcoatl charges at him, Uriel runs towards him as well and stops near the river. Rain starts falling. Uriel smiles and thinks: “Perfect Timing” Uriel swings his sword upward in the water and chants:
“Arte del Mariachi: Canción del Agua, Primera Estrofa: Ola” (Translates: Mariachi Art: Water Song, First stanza: Wave)
A giant wave forms in the river and hits Quetzalcoatl forcing him to fly backwards. Uriel takes a deep breath and hears the rhythm of the rain. Uriel swings his sword horizontally before the raindrops hit the ground. Water fuses with his manna creating a blade.
“Canción del Agua, Segunda Estrofa: Cuchilla de Agua” (Translates: Water Song, Second Stanza: Water Blade.)
Uriel swings his sword multiple times creating several blades attacking Quetzalcoatl.
“Don´t stop, if you stop now the serpent will counterattack.” Uriel thinks to himself as he begins to feel pain in his body. Uriel swings the sword downward:
“Tercera Estrofa: Catarata” (Third stanza: Waterfall)
Water accumulates in the sky and pours down like a waterfall hitting Quetzalcoatl. Uriel once again swings the sword with force horizontally causing the wáter in the river to rise.
“Cuarta Estrofa: Corriente” (Fourth stanza: stream)
Water hits Quetzalcoatl horizontally causing him to fall to the ground.
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“This is the final move, Serpent.” Uriel screams as he releases mana to the air,water rises forming a small vortex:
“Quinta Estrofa: Vórtice” (Fifth Stanza: Voxtex)
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A vortex forms hitting Quetzalcoatl pushing him back at a great distance. Adihe and Xochitl surprise run to aid Quetzalcoatl.
Uriel breathes heavily, he dispels the barrier. Alejandro looks at him and shouts; “YOU DID IT MAN! YOU TOOK DOWN A GOD!”
Uriel chuckles; “You idiot…I didn’t defeat him, I only push him back, that thing is not the same as a Sombra…that thing is an Ancient God, it won't be that easy!”
“So, what is our next plan Uriel?” Uriel looks at Alejandro and Marjorie; “I don’t know why, but Quetzalcoatl only wants me…you two must get out of here quick…run to the upper grounds and regroup with the others…”
Alejandro gets angry; “Huh…what the hell man…we’re in this together…I can help you! We can…”
“ALEJANDRO! PLEASE!” Uriel looks at Alejandro with determined eyes. Alejandro notices that and sighs; “I understand, we will only be a burden…”
Uriel takes a deep breath and stands straight again. Marjorie gets closer to Uriel; “Uriel, let’s run away, you’re no match for that monster…”
“If I run now…Quetzalcoatl will only chase after me…everyone will be in danger…”
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“He’s coming…you two go, you’ll only get in my way…”
“But Uriel…I can…” Alejandro interrupts Marjorie by carrying her; “We need to go now!”
“Gyyahh, Alejandro if you do that my panties will be seen!”
“Shut up Marjorie, this isn’t the time for that!” Alejandro begins to run as fast as he can; “Good luck, Uriel!”
“Alejandro, what are you doing? Why are you running?” Marjorie tries to break free. -DRIP DROP- Marjorie feels water fall into her cheek, she notices Alejandro crying; “It’s frustrating not having the power to help my friend…but all I can do right now is to protect you…”
Marjorie stops struggling and holds tighter; “I see now…Uriel will…”
“Are you okay Quetzi?” Xochitl asks Quetzalcoatl who is knocked out. Adihe sees Quetzalcoatl down and expresses rage:
“Outrages! El Charro Negro is strong…however, he is no match for a God!”
Xochitl looks at Adihe furious and gets scared, she holds her brother’s hand:
“Let´s go Adihe, I don't want to do this anymore, besides Uriel is not evil”
Adihe looks at his sister and feels bad, he then smiles at her;“Let's go then”
“So that is how your mother is going to be avenged? You are a pathetic kid.” El Muerto appears from a black portal.
“Remember those who killed your mother, those who destroyed your lives…those who betrayed you…The Cortes.” El Muerto provokes Adihe who remembers the events of a certain night. Adihe lets go of Xochitl’s hand; “The Cortes…”
Adihe turns around and screams:
“Get up Quetzalcoatl we must avenge our mother!”
Xochitl feels frightened but she stays by her brother´s side. Quetzalcoatl rises up once more, and flies towards Uriel. Adihe and Xochitl follow Quetzalcoatl. El Muerto opens the portal as he slowly walks towards it he thinks:
“Excellent, now for the second stage…it’s time to revive the Guardian Jaguar…”
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