《Casual Heroing》Looking for Harsh Beta Readers for Casual Heroing's rewrite
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Yep, that's why I haven't been posting. I currently have 55k words in the backlog, and I'm writing 2-3k more every day.
The rewrite is going to be substantially different from the first version. With a lot of additional content, including new characters, you'll see an improved version of Casual Heroing like never before. I like to think that this one is the outline, and that I finally got around writing the new novel: trust me, it does feel like until the rewrite the book had been clouded by thick mist, and only now I'm clearing it up.
Plus, I'm drawing a map of Amorium, Epretos, and more.
So far, the new volumes will be around 2.5-3 times longer than the original version. The story's timeline has been dilated as well. After the current volume 1, the storyline will change as well.
So, if you want to be my beta reader and promise that you will be harsh with me, leave me your email HERE and I'll send you the first 14-15 edited chapters in a few days.
Peace!
I'll come back with the third's volume chapters in a few days.
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