《Divine Creatures》Re write
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When I left you last, I was working on the next major arc. I *had* quite a few chapters written, but the size of the arc was getting away from me, and then my inner critic came out and dumped all over the way the plot was developing. My own dissatisfaction with realizing how much of the story was resonating with the Ten Horizons when I started with the idea of something that was more homage than fanfic has also only been growing, and the very legitimate points made about how the MC is OP by super friends just gave fuel to my inner critic.
Worse, all of that negativity circling through my brain then spilled over to my original (unposted) story that got derailed by "Divine Creatures". The world my MC came from has been hung up as I wrestle with what kind of stories I want to tell.
I wanted to explore some ideas related to the social nature of humanity with "Divine Creatures", and those ideas are still ones I want to dive into. However, there are a lot of basic flaws that I need to address with the current incarnation of "Divine Creatures". Thus, I have decided to take the premises back to the drawing board.
Whatever the next incarnation of "Divine Creatures" looks like, it won't be anything that can be labeled fanfic. Right now that's about all I know.
I'll leave this incarnation up as it is until then, and just mark it as dropped.
The spoiler is just here to hit the posting word count.
When I left you last, I was working on the next major arc. I *had* quite a few chapters written, but the size of the arc was getting away from me, and then my inner critic came out and dumped all over the way the plot was developing. My own dissatisfaction with realizing how much of the story was resonating with the Ten Horizons when I started with the idea of something that was more homage than fanfic has also only been growing, and the very legitimate points made about how the MC is OP by super friends just gave fuel to my inner critic.
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Worse, all of that negativity circling through my brain then spilled over to my original (unposted) story that got derailed by "Divine Creatures". The world my MC came from has been hung up as I wrestle with what kind of stories I want to tell.
I wanted to explore some ideas related to the social nature of humanity with "Divine Creatures", and those ideas are still ones I want to dive into. However, there are a lot of basic flaws that I need to address with the current incarnation of "Divine Creatures". Thus, I have decided to take the premises back to the drawing board.
Whatever the next incarnation of "Divine Creatures" looks like, it won't be anything that can be labeled fanfic. Right now that's about all I know.
I'll leave this incarnation up as it is until then, and just mark it as dropped.
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The Bloodline System
In a future timeline, the earth was visited by a species known as the Slarkovs.Having lost their home planet and in search of a new one, earth was the next habitable planet for them.Humans and Slarkovs made a deal with each other in return for the Slarkovs living on earth.The Slarkovs traded their technology and knowledge for a new home.They were similar to humans except for some of them who had slight differences so fitting into the society wasn’t a problem.Over the years Slarkovs and humans began to mate with one another and reproduce offsprings.This in turn created a new species known as the mixed-blood.Centuries later mixedbloods could tap into their bloodline and perform unimaginable feats.Gustav born into an age where bloodline determines everything, struggles to fit with a useless bloodline.His bloodline only grants him the ability to change his hair color, destroying his hopes and dreams for a great future.His fate is turned around when an unexpected situation leads to him finding a system that grants him the power to unlock and upgrade bloodlines by completing quests but he’s baffled by two quests with a five-year deadline. Success will grant him unimaginable rewards…But only one thing awaits him if he fails… Death!Follow Gustav on his interesting journey filled with unprecedented adventures, danger and death, maybe?
8 9021Construct Your Fate
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8 223Asteris
Galen, a being of magic, has grown tired of his lonely life. His species is scattered around the planet, and while it is no longer dangerous for them to associate, he thinks it might be time for him to make a human friend. When he meets Severin, he doesn't expect for everything to change.
8 136Humanity? HELL YEAH!!
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8 1222Lord Universe Creator
Before the beginning of time there was the creator who wandered the void for eons. The Creator created the universe with a simple wave of his hand. With a thought, created life. He was the beginning. Once the seed of life was planted and in motion the Creator went into slumber. Hundreds of millions of years have past; the Creator has awoken.
8 661The Lost City of Maeros (Working title)
Fen and her sister are orphans. A dead mother, a missing father. They make due. While her sister works to support them, Fen dreams of adventure, to board one of the great, flying ships and explore the world. But her birthday is coming, and the time for dreaming will come to an end. A special necklace, a map and a message will soon send Fen out into the world in hopes of finding her father and healing her family. It seems however, that she isn't the only one looking for him. NOTE - This is a Work in Progress/Early draft. I try to catch errors as I type, but more than likely I will miss some things at this stage. The primary focus is plot and story. (Credit for Cover Placeholder: Artem Chebokha. Artstation)
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