《Mistake is mine》Chapter 16
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*Sneha Pov*
When I heard someone calling me "Beautiful?" I just shouted and immediately recognized him.
He is my special friend from back home until he left the town to join in a college like me. We both are of same age.
He is Samrat's brother Virat!
He is kind of this very sweet boy before he left to college but now he seems like a cool person.
When I rushed to him he lifted me up and started spin me around like always.
He finally put me down and said "Beautiful! You are definitely looking beautiful."
"Still using my nickname?" I asked him laughing.
"Who is this?" I heard Suresh asking me after reaching near me.
"Suresh come here. Meet Virat." I said introducing them.
"I think I got his name when you shouted." Suresh said.
"Hey once I told you right you are the third person who called me beautiful. This Virat is the second person. He even made that word nickname for me." I said smiling.
"Why wouldn't I? You are beautiful." Virat said smiling.
"Virat! Come on let's get you settled." Samrat said out of nowhere and dragged Virat to his house.
"I will talk to you later Beautiful!" Virat said while leaving.
I laughed again and turned around to see Bhabhi and Suresh looking at me with raise brows.
"What?" I asked them confused.
"You didn't tell me about him at all?" Both accused me at the same time.
"Now you both became best friends or what?" I asked them trying to change the subject.
"Neha!" I heard my name called.
"Yes?" I said looking at Suresh.
"What I didn't called you." he said.
"Then who did?" I asked confused.
"Neha!" I heard again and turned around to see Bhai standing there smiling.
"You are calling me "Neha!"?" I asked him in surprise.
"Yes! I am and I will from now on." He said smiling.
I gave him a big smile and hugged him.
"So what's happening?" He asked after we all sat down.
"Beautiful? Beautiful?" we heard someone calling while entering.
"That's what happening!" Bhabhi said smiling.
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Virat came inside and settled beside me and said "Beautiful! It is so boring there. How did you even have a crush on him in the first place?"
"Virat! You came here to make your bond strong with your brother. Just go and spend time with him." I said rolling my eyes.
"Nah! It's ok. We were never close. The indifference between us is not just because of him. I too have half blame." He said looking down.
"What?" we three asked him.
"Yeah! He always talked to me still before coming here. I kind of pushed him away because I was angry on him. He tried so much but I didn't budged. So he gave up and that's why I thought it was a prank call when he called me." He replied.
"Why were you angry on him?" I asked him confused.
"Because the girl I have crush on have a crush on my brother instead. Now I just feel guilty that I pushed him away like that. And here he is saying Sorry to Me." he replied looking at me.
"Where is he now?" I asked him.
"I don't know." He replied.
I nodded and kept quite. After some time we decided to call it a day.
I am also tired so Virat bid his bye and went inside Samrat's house.
*Samrat Pov* (Finally!)
He likes her! He actually likes her.
But I love her. Yes! I love her. We would have been together too if I was not this stupid that day.
I regret saying those words to the core. But if I had said I too like her that day then I am sure Nag would have not allowed me to come even near to her.
He is that kind of protective brother. This is the main reason but I couldn't say this because they just got close again. I didn't want to create more problems.
Now my brother entered. I missed him, I really missed him but I didn't understand before why he hates me.
Now I definitely can. I don't want to lose her at all.
I should have told my feelings before. I didn't try but now she is not even giving me a chance.
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And the Mistake is mine.
I closed my eyes and tried to sleep but nope it is miles away from me. I need to do something to make her accept me.
With that thought I slept.
Next day I tried to talk with Virat again but he said "Look Bhai I know we should get back together but it may never happen. Maybe some relations are just not meant to be."
I know what he is talking about but I didn't know he knows about that. I am not his real brother, I am just his cousin.
And that's a long story which I don't want to memorize now.
When Sneha will return I will talk to her and tell my feelings definitely, I just need a chance.
In the evening everyone decided to go Rome around the city. Sneha was actually taking rest at that time.
"Let her sleep for some more time. We will just get ready in the mean time." Bhabhi said.
After getting ready, Virat said "I will go and wake her up."
"I will go." I said calmly and went towards her room without waiting for their reply.
I slowly knocked and entered when she said "Come in."
She was sleeping but mumbling in her sleep.
I shook her up and she immediately got up.
"What are you doing here?" She asked.
"You said 'Come in' right." I replied.
"I thought it was Bhabhi. Anyway what are you doing here?" she asked me again.
"We all decided to go inside the city and Rome around. We are waiting for you." I replied.
"Oh! Give me ten minutes." She said and dashed inside the washroom.
I sat on the bed and thought of a plan to spend some time with her.
I called Nag and said "She is still sleeping. Why don't you guys go? I will bring her with me."
"Ok. Just give us a call when you will leave the house." He said.
After few minutes I saw everyone leaving and at the same time Sneha came outside ready.
"So shall we go? They must be waiting." She said.
"They have left already." I replied.
But I then saw Virat still standing there with Nag and Bhabhi. Didn't they left?
Sneha was about to open the door. I immediately closed the door and said "Wait!"
She turned and looked at me wide eyed. Then I saw that I pushed her little to close the door and now she is between me and the door.
"Why?" she asked me.
"Just like that!" I replied not looking at her.
"Move Samrat." She said.
"Nope!"
She struggled for some time and just stood there calmly.
"Is everything ok now between you both?" She asked me after few minutes.
I sighed and replied "It will take time." Then I saw those three leaving in a car.
"Don't worry! You both will be back together." She said placing a hand on my shoulder.
"Then what about us?" I asked.
She didn't meet my eyes and said "What is there between us?"
"You will never forgive me right!" I said.
"How can I Samrat? I mean the reason is so silly. I couldn't forget any word said by anyone of you guys." She replied looking at me.
"But you are ok with the remaining." I said.
"I am ok with you too."
"Not like before." I said releasing her a little.
"I will be not like before with the remaining too. I tried to but I can't. As for Bhai I am trying a little more because he is the only one family I got." She said and went outside the room opening the door.
I just stood there dumbstruck.
Just give me a chance Sneha, just give me a chance I thought repeatedly.
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Samrat's pov is there.....
I never got this much confused in any story about what should i write next.
At present i kind of got an idea but i just hope no reader will get dissapointed with this.
I want to know one thing guys, Did you got the connection with Samrat character before or now after reading his pov.
I need your answer to get an idea plz let me know.
Comment plz and vote.....................
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