《Mistake is mine》Chapter 8
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*Amala Pov* (Bhabhi of Sneha)
I can't believe this!
They already planned to not take her with them and they left her to feel excited for two days.
And now telling this news like unexpected thing just happened.
She is such a sweet heart. She didn't even understand their plan. Leave her, I too don't know about it.
I am going to talk to them now itself. I ignored everything but now I can't.
When I entered Samrat's house, everyone are talking normally except Samrat. He looked lost in his thoughts.
Imran saw me and said "Bhabhi come and sit."
"First I will ask you a question and you all need to reply honestly." I told them.
They all nodded.
"Now tell me. Do you guys even thought to take her with us to the tour?" I asked them hoping that their reply is not what I am thinking.
They just shook their heads.
"Why? What did she do to you guys?" I asked them.
"She didn't do anything Bhabhi. We kind of got used to not let any other person enter our lives." Sushi said.
"But she has only us guys. What do you expect her to do?" I asked them.
"That's what we are saying. She doesn't have her own life. Always spends time with kids or us. We are not used to it." Mehtab said.
"I didn't expect this from you guys. She was just helping us by taking care of the kids and for us, she is helping us in the huge cooking." I said shaking my head.
"But she must have her own life too Bhabhi. She doesn't have any friends. Look at her brother, he has like six friends who will give their life to him. What about her? She is just non-friend girl." Ramesh said.
"I didn't expect this from you Ramesh." I said.
"Guys stop it." Nag shouted.
I felt happy that he will now defend her.
But when he opened his mouth I literally wanted to search for a knife now.
Because he said "She is my responsibility. If you guys think that she is disturbing your life, I am sorry. After she completes her studies I will search some good guy for her and conduct her marriage."
Immediately Samrat frowned at him. Maybe he will help them understand.
"Samrat! What do you want to say about it?" I asked him.
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"Why? Just because she likes him?" Eswar said.
I looked at all of them shocked.
"We all know about that Bhabhi. Tell her Samrat what you think about her now." Eswar said.
He looked directly at Nag and said "Uhmm.. She is just a kid. And... little immature."
Even though he said those words, he looked like he wanted to kill himself. But that doesn't make him right person.
"Just shut up all of you. I am just disappointed in each and every one of you. For the first time I wish I am not in this group." I shouted and left his house leaving them in shock.
But when I went outside it is my time to feel shock.
Because the person standing infront of me with tears falling from the eyes with a hand on the mouth looked so broken.
"Did you heard everything?" I asked.
"Everything!" that reply made me regret for conducting this discussion with them.
"I am sorry Sneha." I said and took her inside our house.
After controlling herself, she asked "Did I do anything wrong?"
I shook my head thinking how they can hurt a girl like her. I so want to slap them all.
"You didn't do anything wrong dear. Don't worry." I said hugging her.
"Bhabhi when I heard the way you were fighting with them for me, I felt like I didn't lose my mom at all." She said still hugging me.
"I am so sorry Sneha. I could have stopped this hurt for you." I said crying.
"No Bhabhi. You actually helped me. Now I need not stay in some happy bubble. Now I can decide about my life and I am sure you will be there for me at every step." She said.
"I will always." I replied honestly.
"You are my support Bhabhi. And don't tell them that I heard everything." She requested me.
I nodded and she went inside her room to freshen up.
After sometime everyone entered my home along with the kids.
"Where is Sneha?" Nag asked.
I just glared at him and started bringing the bags.
Sneha came out of her room and helped everyone. We all are going in the same vehicle which is as big as a bus so that it will be comfortable.
I hugged her again and said "Be strong Sneha. I know you are."
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"I will be Bhabhi. Don't worry about me. Have fun." She said giving me true smile.
They all bid their 'Bye' to her and she gave everyone true sendoff and not some fake.
In sometime we reached airport. We were actually getting late so we rushed towards the counter.
Then we all remembered about the kids and turned to saw them coming near us holding each other's hand.
How did they know that?
When they reached us they hold their parents hands and we boarded the plane.
When we landed in our destination and coming out of the airport kids did the same.
We all are actually surprised because of this behavior from them.
After few hours we reached the resort and went near the reception to take our rooms keys and again surprised by the kids behavior.
While we were going to our rooms, Sushi asked "Bhabhi did you teach them to behave like this?"
"No I didn't." I replied.
I kneeled down near the kids and asked "Who told you to hold your hands like this and hold ours in the airport and outside the resort?"
"Aunty told us to do like this. And she said that when it is time for us to play we will get little more time if we do this." Ajay said.
"And also that we will be safe." Vijay added.
I hugged all of them and thanking Sneha in my heart.
I turned back and saw twelve guilty faces. I just gave them a disgusted look and went to my room with the kids.
Don't worry Sneha. They will know your worth very soon...
*Sneha Pov*
I controlled my tears infront of Bhabhi but after they left I couldn't anymore.
Because of which I am suffering with this headache.
I definitely want some fresh air and a coffee. So I left my room and went to a coffee shop.
While taking a sip of it, I couldn't help but think about what everyone said about me.
And that Samrat thinks that I am kid and immature.
I am more hurt with Bhai's words. I am just a responsibility for him.
Tears started falling again because of this pain.
Then I heard someone calling me "Sneha!"
I rubbed my eyes and saw Suresh and the group standing near me and looking at me with concern.
Suresh sat beside me and asked "Are you ok?"
I don't know why I did it but I just placed my head on his shoulder and cried.
He rubbed my back and started saying soothing words.
After sometime I composed myself and said "I am sorry."
"Don't say that Sneha. We are getting worry about you here. What happened?" he asked.
I shook my head and said "Nothing just so called family."
"Hey you said you are going to a tour right?" Arun asked.
"Idiot!" everyone scolded him.
I couldn't help but smile at him. Then I came to a decision.
"Guys can I request you something?" I asked them.
"Ofcourse you can." Suresh replied immediately.
"Can I join your group?" I asked them nervously.
"Thank god! We are more than happy to have a sweet girl like you in our group." Suresh said making me blush a little.
"One more thing! Where can I find part time job?" I asked them.
"Do you have to?" Ram asked.
"I need to." I replied.
"Why don't you work here with me in this coffee shop?" Suresh asked.
"You work here?" I asked him in shock.
"Duh! What else did I just said now?" he asked teasing me.
"Good come back. I will definitely." I replied.
I spend some more time with them after asking the owner for my job.
We actually celebrated for my new job.
While going home I bought a two wheeler using the money my parents left me.
I still have some more money but I want to save that. Now I need not ask anyone for lift and it will be safe for me too.
They just cut the last thread by their words.
Today onwards I am going to live my life in my way and I am sure I will be happy....
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i actually started this story thinking to write a sad one now after "Mr.Stone" which was a funny one. But along with the readers i too felt too bad for Sneha so i am going to end her suffer with this chap and next chap onwards i think you will be happy.....
i thought to update this chap tomorrow afternoon but i am doing it today itself for my special reader :)
Comment plz and vote............
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