《Mistake is mine》Chapter 7
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*Sneha Pov*
Life is just going on and on. In few days first semester for this final year will start.
I am okay with that because every day I completed my work in college itself to spend some time with everyone.
So I think I will do fine in these exams.
At present we all are having dinner in Imran's house.
Everyone is making small conversations with each other.
Then Bhai said to no one in particular "We got big deal sign today."
I think it is good news so I clapped and said "Well done Bhai."
He nodded and then continued to talk about the deal. I too bent forward to hear everything.
In the middle he looked at me and said "What are you doing?"
"I am listening about what you are saying." I replied.
"You don't have to Sneha. This is our business." Imran said rolling his eyes.
Then I saw all their wives are listening to them so I asked "But your wife is listening too about the business right."
"They can because they are our family." Dinesh said and everyone nodded to it except Bhabhi.
And immediately my eyes widened.
"Guys stop it." Bhabhi said to everyone.
I calmly ate my food and returned to my room with the kids.
I am just thinking overly. They don't mean it like that.
Yeah! That's it. They think me too as their family. Maybe they just thought I won't understand and that's why they talked like that.
I thought like these many reasons for their behavior.
I forgot about that incident and concentrated about my studies.
Finally my exams started and today I am going to write my first exam.
And the weird thing is no one knows this even though I told everyone except Bhabhi.
I shrugged it off thinking that maybe they are busy.
I did well in this exam. After finishing it when I came outside the exam hall I saw Suresh and remaining looking dull.
I went near them and asked "What happened?"
"Did you write your exam well?" Suresh asked.
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"I did. What about you?" I asked.
"Don't ask me about that. I will pass for sure but good marks I don't know." He replied.
"Same here." Ram said and remaining agreed.
"Guys don't get disappointed. I will help you all." I said.
"But how can you? You too should prepare for them right?" Ankitha asked.
"Don't worry. If we explain to others then we will remember the topics even more clearly." I replied.
They all immediately smiled and said ok.
That's how my exams completed. I helped them in the gap between each exam.
Because of which I had to go to college every day. Few days back Samrat said that he can't drop me anymore.
So I am actually taking bus to reach college and to return home.
This group is actually kind of sharp because they understood everything within seconds.
They are good people too. I want to be in contact with all of these even after we graduate.
Today final exam is over and we all left the exam hall with happy faces.
"Sneha! Thank you so much. You just saved us all." Arun said.
"Hey please don't say that. I didn't help you all that much. I am glad that you did good in remaining exams." I said.
"So.. Are you going home now?" Suresh asked.
"Yeah! I am." I replied and left to go to my home.
When I went inside Bhai's house I shouted to Bhabhi saying "My exams are over Bhabhi."
I didn't saw everyone sitting in the living room and after shouting I saw them.
"You have been writing exams?" Samrat asked.
"Yeah! They are over now." I replied.
"You didn't tell anyone of us." Ramesh said.
"She told each and one of you. You guys didn't remember." Bhabhi answered.
"We didn't saw you opening your books at all. You will get passed right." Imran said.
"Ofcourse." I replied immediately.
"Anyway what is special today? All of you returned from office so early today." I asked them.
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"We need to go to goa for an important meeting with our top client. The problem is there will be lot of meetings so they may take atleast ten days. All seven of us need to be there compulsorily." Bhai said rubbing his temple.
"Then what will happen to the company?" I asked them.
"Nothing after two days we are giving ten days holidays to all the workers in the company. So we decided to plan this as a trip too for these seven families." Bhai said.
"Yeah! Even kids have holidays so we all decided that." Dinesh added.
"Really? That's great. I am so excited." I said.
"Why?" Feroz asked frowning.
"Because it has been so long that I have went to any tour. Now I can and I am sure I will enjoy it with all of you guys." I replied.
Bhabhi smiled at my excitement.
"Look.." Bhai started saying but I cut him off and said "I will go and pack my things and I will make a list for our needs."
Next day I just started my packing and helped Bhabhi in her packing and also children's stuff.
I started teaching all the kids about how they should be careful in the new places. And how they must not leave their parents and go anywhere alone.
They all learned these with lot of concentration.
We are going to leave today night.
So I went to buy small groceries to take with us.
Then I saw Suresh and remaining group.
They all saw me and came near me smiling.
Then I said "Now don't ask me what I am doing here Suresh."
He immediately blushed and scratched his neck saying "I will not."
"Hey Sneha! Will you hang out with us today evening?" Arun asked.
"I would love to but I am going on a tour with my family members for few days." I replied.
"Oh! Then Ok enjoy your tour." Suresh said.
"Thanks guys." I said leaving the store.
It is already afternoon when I returned to my room.
I checked my packing again and went inside the house to ask Bhabhi if she need any more help.
But I saw everyone sitting in the living room and Bhabhi looking at me like she is sorry.
"What happened?" I asked no one in particular.
"Tell her Samrat." Imran nudged him.
"Yeah! About the booking.." he started saying.
"You and Imran went for them yesterday right?" I asked him cutting him off.
He nodded and said "Actually we didn't book for you."
"What?" I asked him shocked.
"Why did you not? Did you forgot or is there any mistake?" I asked all of them with a little breaking voice.
They all didn't meet my eyes but Bhai said "There has been a mistake and we can't correct it."
I looked at them for some time and said "It's ok. You all go and I will be fine here."
"But Sneha, how can you stay here alone?" Bhabhi asked.
"I already talked to watchmen two days back and he said it is safe for a person to stay here." Imran said.
Fathimah hit his shoulder like he said something wrong and when I think about what he said then I too understand it.
"What do you mean by.." I started asking him.
But everyone suddenly stood up and Dinesh said "We will stay for some time in Samrat's house and then we will leave."
And immediately everyone went outside Bhai's house along with him.
"I will talk to them." Bhabhi said who is standing beside me and she looked like she is angry.
I tried to stop her but she already left.
I just hope that some quarrel will not take place.
So I started going towards Samrat's house to stop anything big that will happen now.
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guys i know there must be confusion with all the characters sorry about that. But i tried to reduce your confusion a little by writing the character names and added as a photo. I will do it for all the chapters.
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