《Break Me {Book one}Bwwm (Editing)》The Balaur
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We stood before a large medieval castle. The stonewalls were
covered with thick green vines that crept up to the roof. The old grey walls
that surrounded the entrance were beginning to crack from old age. I stared at
the old crimson colored roof that adorned the castle towers. Stain glass windows
were a jaded yellow and blue caked with age-old dust. The trees surrounded the
castle barely letting in the light of the moon. "The scent of decay is still
strong here." My mother whispered almost to herself. She strode forward
breaking through the covers of the trees, Brian right on her heels. He towered
over my mother's slim frame easily, his black hair shining silver in the moon
light. Charity and I walked behind them both. "My sister, have you gotten over
her?" "What makes you say that?"I whispered. "Last month you were a complete
wreck, this month it's like she never died." I clenched my teeth before looking
at him. "Are you implying that I am over her? I am just trying..." I made my
voice crack "To cope with it. I promised I would see this through to the end,
and I will." "What are you going to do later, after all of this?" "I am not
sure."I whispered. "I will follow her in death." "Your mother and your ex
subjects would not like that." "It is
not for them to decide." "Death is not something that should be discussed
here." My mother whispered. I watched her hand tighten around Brian's shirt.
"Do you not smell it? The decay, the dust of vampire remains. The scent is
almost maddening, yet you continue to ignore it as if it is not there."
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"Elizabeth, please-" "They speak as if they do not comprehend what is going on.
Quickly enter the gate while the moon is high." We came upon a large wrought
iron gate. Even in age the gate was
looming and threatening it towered over us by many feet. My mother went first
jumping over the gate with ease, Brian followed. My feet hit the ground with an
audible thud. "Careful." She whispered. She stood deathly still her hair
blowing fiercely in the wind. Her skin glowed an ominous white as the wind
began to pick up around us. Leaves whipped wildly through the air as sand began
to blow in all directions. "What the hell?" Charity whispered. I squinted
seeing glowing red eyes appear in the sands.
A low growl shook the ground. "So it's still here." My mother whispered.
I stared at her mystified was this woman truly my mother. The woman that was the
image of pure royalty, I had to question her for a moment. She stood her legs
firmly apart with her hands on her hips. I watched her eyes glow a lovely
crimson. The strength that radiated from her was impossible to doubt. I had
never seen this woman before. "Elizabeth where is Esmerelda?" The creature
growled its large red eyes blinking. "Esmerelda
is dead." A loud agonizing roar echoed
through the castle. The sound was a loud ear spitting noise. "Who did this!" It growled. "I did." My
mother admitted. "Treason, how dare you kill royalty! Little girl you have no
idea what you have done!" "The damage is done Armaretti! I know what I have
done it has been centuries since Esmerelda and I have walked this place. Give
me entrance!" "No!" The thing boomed. " I will die before I willingly let you
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in traitor!" "So be it Armaretti." I put
my hand on my mother's shoulder, her eyes never swayed from the large eyes in
front of her. "Let us handle this." She snorted through her nose I looked at
her in shock. Could she handle this? I hadn't seen her lift anything heavier
than a plate. "I will handle this; it
has been a long time since I have fought." "It's a Balaur." Brian growled. I
glanced at the thing once more its eyes had risen well above our heads. I could
see twelve starting to appear out of the dust. Its body was like a dragon with
small fins and feet. "Son of a bitch, I thought they were-" Charity started. "They
are very much alive; Magic was band here under Edward' rule. That didn't mean
others didn't practice it secretly." "Little hybrid." The monster growled. Its
body stretched over the yard as it finally appeared. Its skin was scaly and
sickening, its eyes glowed a treacherous yellow. It moved. It moved almost too
fast to be caught by even vampire eyes. It moved in front of my mother she dodged
smoothly her eyes glowed a deep violet.
What was going on here! She stared at the beast her fangs bared. "Funny
how things have turned." She whispered. She jumped higher than I had ever seen
her she was in front of the beast as it swung its huge tail wildly. Rocks flew up
as they dodged and attacked each other. I sent my fist through a large rock as
it came towards me.
Elizabeth P.o.v
I whispered an old incantation as I struck the beast with my
nails. I could feel its hard skin cracking under my fingertips. Its gooey blood sticking to my fingers. I could feel my blood stirring with in me, as
my sealed powers were finally breaking loose. It had been a while since I had
fought and gosh, it felt great. My skin hummed with power as I charged
Armaretti. He would not let me in without a fight; I would have wished it would
be easier to get in. My fang pricked my lips. This would not be easy with
vampire blood weighing me down. "Elizabeth." Armaretti growled in pain. Its
twelve heads winced in pain as I was about to deliever the last blow. "Taste
the dust from which you came. I cast thee into eternal flame!" I growled .Lunging
downward straight into the main head of the Balaur. Its eyes glance at me once
more before its entire body was engulfed by blue flames; Its deafening roar
shook through the castle. "Traitor." He whispered once more before his body
went up in smoke. I fell downward head first. I welcome the pain that landing
on my head would bring. I could already foretell that the rest of my existence
would be covered in bloodshed. There were things that my son and the entire
vampire kingdom should not know about the royal family. How their past riddled
with lies, deceit, and bloodshed. I landed on my feet turning right side up at
the last second. Secrets lie within the castle walls and I knew from more than
a hunch it would lead straight to Charles.
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