《Break Me {Book one}Bwwm (Editing)》The battle
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"Open the door!" My father growled as he shoved the door with his shoulder. I watched as it splintered underneath him. The calmness i felt was weird as it swirled within my body. It was almost as if i were at an unatural high. The emotions i felt were not my own, it was my Angel's calmness i was feeling. What could she possibly be so calm about with my father breaking down the door. Then again why was she not answering the door? My father slammed against it once more, his eyes glowing a deep crimson and with his teeth bared. I slipped myself into the bond my Angel and I shared. Open the door I said to her. I waited for her sweet voice to fill my head, only it didn't. I glared at the door with a fierce intensity. Angel. H I tried again. No answer. My teeth sharpened as my temper rose. Angel I growled. My temper flared as i touched my fathers shoulder to stop his useless banging. Weak ass old man.
He looked at me fury in his eyes, i pushed him away. My fingers slid on the cream colored wooden door. With a smalll excert of energy i turned it to dust. I stepped in going over the body of my mother. Harmony was no where in sight our room lay in ruins at my feet. "Lance call the doctor!" My father shouted. I glared at him as he sat by my mothers side as she began to come around. Her scent still strong in the room she hadn't left that long ago. I clenched my jaw trying to calm myself before i totally lost control. She was trying to get this reaction out me, i knew she was. "Lance?" My father called again. I could barely hear him i was to busy pacing the room.
Those f~cking wolves were in on this, i knew they were up to somthing. What wolf would give in so willlingly? This had to be the work of him. Always so f~cking thorough about everything. Even in death he was still taking my love away from me, my sweet Angel. She was brainwashed into thinking that life was better out of the castle away from me. Away from the same person who kept her out of trouble for centuries. The same man who rescued her from death. The one who loved her instantly and in her human form. She was gone threatening to leave me empty again. Threatening to destroy all the hope i had for a happy life with her. A vicious growl escaped my lips. This wasnt good.This was not good at all.
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I stopped, placing my hands on the wall on the picture of us. "Lance, calm yourself we will find her. The wolves could not have taken her far" She smiled brightly in this picture. She had her arms around my neck pulling me closer to her. The sweet floral scent my angel had. It was enough to drive any man insane. The softness of her pale brown skin. The flawlessness of her face. Her breathtaking hazel eyes. I'd laid my head ontop of hers taking in her sweet scent forgeting that the photographer was in the room. I loved the way she giggled as she said my breath tickled her hair. We were happy then, when he had left for France. She had forgoten him and i had her heart. "Angel" I whispered my voice cracking. I broked the picture i didn't want to see it. I didn't want this room to exist without her. I didn't want to exist. I would find her.
I would bring her back. I would make love to her until her body gave out. I would be the only one to love her. The only one to see her. The only one to touch her. The only one that she would ever rely on. I smiled at the thought of having her in my arms. A laugh filled the room low and full of malice. It took me a moment to figure out it had been my own. She wanted to run i would let her. I would find her by any means necessary. All the people envolved in her escape were as good as dead. I glance at the spot where my parents had been. No doubt they were cowardly hiding some where.
My hands were full of the fur from the wolf i clung to. His earthy scent mixed with wet dog stunning my senses. Silently i cursed myself for not spraying perfume on my clothes. Lance's anger shot through my body making my muscles flex from the tension. My fangs were bared as i gritted my teeth trying to supress the anger that wasn't my own. Angel he growled. I tried to block his entrance into my head, if he got through me my entire escape would be meaningless. From the way he attacked me mentally, Lance was completely livid. Forcefully i tried to calm him down with my own emotions, letting them leak from the bond.
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He stopped growling in my head probably turning to something else to be violent towards. "Where are you taking me?" These wolves had known Eric, that much was clear. As to where they were taking me i had no idea. Eric only said that he had friends that would help. My cold heart twisted in knots i hated to use someone, but of course the whole fiend behind this was to close for comfort. Only that person would make me turn my world enitirely upside down, and destroy his. The wolf ignored me just as i assumed he would, i snuggled my head into the warm fur of the wolf, as he shot through the barrier of the castle. Almost imediately i felt the chill of the snowy Romanian winter.
Shit, i had forgotten what month it was seeing as the barrier only provided summer weather. My face brushed the dogs fur once more trying to keep warm.Eric had brought me this far, he'd let me toy with his emotions so that i could use them to my advantage. It was not planned for Lance to come that night. I could have gotten away with the alabi of simply being murdered, but somehow it had all gone wrong. A small laugh escaped my lips as i remebered the shocked face on Lances face. The heart breaking look in his midnight eyes as he stared at Eric and I by the window locked in an psuedo embrace. Erics arms had shivered in my coat as he felt the anger radiate from his best friend. Though his fear could not have matched mine.
I had not wanted him to see such a scene i did not want to break him as i did. My hands ran through my hair as my eyes began to leak with tears. I could only hope that he forgave me, though i knew now that my hopes were in vain. Eric was gone because of my perfect plan going wrong. He had played his part to faithfully, he at one point almost made me believe that he loved me. For breaking Lances heart Eric's death would be forever on my head seeing as though i had thrushed forward my best night in this chest game. A mistake that I was not likely to make any time soon. I could only thank him for sacraficing his life for me and delivering the pawns as i wished. My acting had to continue at this point so that this game would end. It was the enemies move now.
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