《Fifty Shades Alternative | ✔》Chapter 10: Deeper Secrets
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I'm using the 'Grey Sloan Memorial Hospital' from Grey's Anatomy in this story. I love Grey's Anatomy and its based in Seattle, where Fifty Shades is based too. So I wondered, why not use it? I'm not going to make anything big from it. I mean sure there will be names here but that's all. Hope you enjoy the chapter! It's my favorite one so far!❤
"Luke, this isn't necessary at all!", I whine. The last thing i want right now is to go to a hospital.
"The reports you showed me were from a local clinic. We can't rely on it only."
"So what do you want me to do? Go to a big fancy hospital for tests again?!"
"Exactly."
"You are being delusional! I don't understand what is wrong with these reports!", I put the reports in front of his face. He shoves my hand away.
"Ana i'm driving! Jeez! Last thing I want is Mr. Grey finding out we were in a car accident."
"Shut up!", I whine like a baby. Mila watches our banter in amusement. She doesn't know these kind of banters were on regular basis 6 years back. Luke is still the same, too stubborn.
Luke pulls into the parking lot of 'Grey Sloan Memorial Hospital'. Sudden anxiety kicks in.. I'm in a hospital. Everything seems so official now. I hate hospitals. Even the mere thought about them makes me nauseous.
We go inside and we are greeted with strong smell of medicines. The smell when you open the bottle of Acetone? Imagine that smell multiplied into 100 mixed with another I-don't-know-what liquids. Call me a baby but this is making me feel dizzy right now. I'm not ready for this.
"I'm not having a good feeling about this, lets go Luke, we'll come tomorrow.", I whisper to Luke but he ignores me. "You cannot ignore me!", I whisper - shout and jerk his shoulder back.
"We've been through this Ana!", he shoots back in a low voice. "If you tell Mr. Grey about this i'm sure he'll have a second opinion too. So lets get a confirmation beforehand." As much as I would love to not admit, he is being rational here. Sooner rather than later.
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Luke talks to some of the nurses who take us to general ward which has a lot beds together. She instructs me to lay down on one of them and says a doctor should attend us soon.
We wait for half an hour but there was no sign of any doctor. Just when Luke couldn't wait anymore and got up to call the doctor, a female voice interrupts him.
"Hello, my name is Dr. Gerald," she says brightly as she picks up the card attached to our bed that the nurse put there earlier. She is wearing dark blue scrubs and I assume she must be an attendant here. She then proceeds to examine me, and I move according to her instructions.. or at least i'm trying to do so. My palms are sweaty and my face looks like i've just eaten a piece of lime.
"Relax", she laughs lightly. I focus on Dr. Gerald's face instead. She must be in her early thirties I guess and she has such a pleasant voice. I could feel Luke's and Mila's eyes boring behind us and I blush so hard. Well, this is awkward. "I need to run some tests and then only I can give you accurate results.", she says.
"Oh.. does it.. like.. seem serious to you now?", I ask, trying my best to keep my voice from quivering.
"I can tell you best when the test results come", she smiles, giving nothing away. I swear I can never be a doctor. Whatever I feel always gets reflected on my facial expressions. But her, her face seems like one that has just come from a bubble bath after a long tiring day. I need to work on that.
"A nurse will take you to the second floor, i'll meet you there." she says and interrupts my train of thoughts.
"Umm.. can my friend come along?", I say and look towards Sawyer.
"Sure, he can wait outside. But i'm sorry the kid can't.", she looks at Mila.
"I'll wait with her", Luke offers and I make a face. He dragged me into this, he will be the one to stick with me through this.
"No, i need someone Luke.."
"Its okay", Dr. Gerald says. "She can go to our play area and wait there."
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"That'll be cool, i guess", I tell her.
"Dr. Claire?", Dr. Gerald calls at a passing doctor with light blue scrubs. Intern. I see Luke stiffen and moves away to receive a call, facing away from us.
"Yes, Dr. Gerald?", she says as she comes to us.
"Can you take this kid to the play area?"
"What..? Me..?", Dr. Claire stammers and I rethink my decision of leaving Mila alone.
"Yes, Dr. Claire is there a problem?"
"No.. Yes, yes.. I was going to call Dr. Pierce. Dr. Karev needs her assistance on a case."
"You are assigned into Peds this week?"
"Yes.."
"Great then. Tell a nurse to page Dr. Pierce and switch your duties with another intern for today. I want you with me.", she instructs her and turns towards me. "She is one of the best interns here. Your daughter is in best hands.", she reassures.
Sure, I think sarcastically.
"C'mon little girl.", she tells Mila with forced enthusiasm. Mila looks at me with confusion.
"Its okay.. Go, i'll be there in sometime", I tell her with best reassuring face I can. She comes towards me and kisses my cheek and leaves with Dr. Claire.
Luke comes back just as both the doctors leave. "Mila?"
"With Dr. Claire. I don't trust that doctor.", I state. She looked so uncertain.
"Me neither", Luke says distractedly as he watches the retreating figure of Mila & Dr. Claire.
I hate everything about Sabrina. Even the things I liked before, I hate them now. She is never, Never with an underline, on time. I can't wait for tonight, i'm finally breaking up with her and nothing feels more right.
A man accidentally bumps into me. "What the fuck dude?", I shout, not intending to actually. Sabrina has me this level of fucked up.
"This is a hospital Mister, watch out you language and voice", he shoots back and leaves. I'm currently sitting in the waiting area of Sabrina's workplace and I hate it. I hate every bit of the hospitals. It just opens the doors of dark memories which I don't want to visit now and never. She is never not busy, I have to come here daily just to meet her. And meeting in a place with thousands of patients around? Not my ideal place i'd like to say.
A call from Ava's school distracts me. Oh shoot! I had to go pick up Ava today from school! Its Saturday today how dumb am I?! Kate and Elliot are going to kill me for this.
"Hello?"
"Uncle Chris where are you?!", Ava shouts at me and I hear murmurs from behind.
"I'm so sorry sweetie i'm caught up in work today! I'm sending Taylor in 10 minutes!"
"You said that last week too! You never come pick me up nowadays!", she whines. True. Dating Sabrina also will make my niece hate me.
"Next week I promise, babygirl! Taylor will take you to Escala and today, we'll watch a movie and food of your choice!" Every Saturday is Ava & my movie night. Kate and Elliot want a night to themselves, they say, so they drop Ava at Escala. And I love Ava's company, she is so lively!
"Pizza!", she shouts. Obviously.
"Something healthy?", I try to compromise.
"No", and I know she'll eat junk today.
"No telling Mom & Dad."
"Deal!", she squeals. "Also we'll watch Frozen." and I make a face.
"How about Moana?"
"No! Frozen. I want to see Olaf."
"Ava we've seen Frozen 8 times this year! Moana is better."
"I don't understand Moana!"
Like you understand Frozen, I say in my mind. "Okay.."
"Yay! Tell Taylor to bring candy also!"
"Don't push the boundaries Ava" but obviously, she disconnects the call by now.
I quickly dial Taylor's number and tell him to pick Ava up from school. Just as I put down my phone, I see Sabrina running towards me.
"Hey i'm Really very sorry I was caught up with work!", she says as she pecks my lips. I deepen the kiss but she pulls away. What?
"We have a company today", she says with a face and look down at the girl. I didn't see her before.
"Who is she?", I ask Sabrina but the girl beats her to it.
"Hello, I'm Mila", says the girl.
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Until we meet again, Xoxo ~ Ava❤
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