《Amethyst Reviews ❦》𝚛𝚎𝚟𝚒𝚎𝚠 𝚏𝚘𝚛𝚖𝚊𝚝 ❦
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before i publish the first review, let me just take some time to let you guys know how your reviews are going to be structured.
1: i will provide an in-depth, multi-paragraph review based on what i read in the first five chapters of your book, including the prologue of applicable (so either chapters 1-5 or prologue-4). this means what i say is completely opinion-based, unless i talk about grammar, and is
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- plot development: x/10.
- character development: x/10.
- dialogue & description: x/10
- creativity: x/10
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Loveless Marriage
He did not love her. It was a loveless marriage to him. In his eyes, she is just a burden who cooks food for him. And in return, he will earn money and place it in her bank account. But she fell for him the moment she had laid eyes on him. It was love at first sight. She would lovingly cook him breakfast, but he would not even glance at her in the morning. In attempts to get him to glance at her, she fooled and embarrassed herself in front of him. She was close to giving up. A small part of her had hoped someday he would change the way he views her. But the fragment of hope diminishes very quickly. Little did she know that one simple action will cause everything to change. That one day he going to start feeling something for her, when her heart is broken. That he is going to start feeling something for her, with a dark past.Will she have to continue to wonder whether it will always be a loveless marriage or a new journey where they fall in love with each other together instead of one-sided love. Will he be able to love her like she loves him?
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What I Want ✔
*****CURRENTLY EDITING*****Aubrey Evans is married to the love of her life,Haden Vanderbilt. However, Haden loathes Aubrey because he is in love with Ivory, his previous girlfriend. He cannot divorce Aubrey because the contract states that they have to be married for atleast three years before they can divorce.What will happen when Ivory suddenly shows up and claims she is pregnant. How will Aubrey feel when Haden decides to spend time with Ivory?But Ivory has a dark secret of her own. Will she tell Haden the truth?Will Haden ever see Aubrey differently and love her?~Aubrey is a kind, helpful,sweet girl. She is 22 years of age. She has black hair that reaches midback and beautiful grey eyes with hues of smokey blue and green. She has pink plump lips and freckles on her nose. Haden is arrogant and cold, mostly towards Aubrey. He is 24 years of age.He has dark brown hair and piercing green eyes. He has toned abs and looks like a Greek God or a model. Girls are captivated by his amazing looks and are desperate for him. He is cocky and not to mention he is a billionaire. Who wouldn't want him?Embark on this story and see if Aubrey will get what she wants or will she forever be heartbroken.'What I Want' is the story of a woman who struggles to find love and with that struggle she becomes stronger.*******Disclaimer: This is my original story and it can only be found on Wattpad!
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The Villainess Wants to Make Her Husband Slim Down
A Count's Daughter who lost in the running to become the Second Prince's fianceé, Camilla. The Prince chose a Baron's daughter as his fianceé, and the world blessed the two's love as fated. On the other hand, Camilla who was tailored and elevated as the love's villain, in the end, as punished she was made to marry a terribly fat and ugly man――called『Toad of the Swamp』from his appearance, a lord of a remote region named Alois.As an ugly toad-man's plaything, the noble villainess girl walks along the road of her wretched last days――as if I'll let that happen! I won't just get married meekly like this. I'll definitely make him diet and polish him into a good man and show them good――!A romance story between a girl who isn't discouraged and an intellectual man who's different from his appearance, a diet and their meals, coaxing the other yet sometimes being played themselves.Book: Not MineAuthor: HaiakaBook Cover Artist: KurodekoTags: Completed!
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Enamoured
[[No Longer a Paid Stories, you can read it for FREE]] BOOK TWO. After discovering she's a descendant of Hades, Avery must find a way to escape those hunting her and ultimately choose between her two opposing soulmates. *****Once Avery Stavros kissed her best friend's older brother Vladimir, she knew there was no turning back. But as the only living Stavros left, she needs to make a careful decision between him and Adrian despite being able to read both of their minds - something that should only be possible between her and her one soulmate. Love or life? Which one is more important? Loving someone or saving your own life? When the Greek gods and goddesses start meddling with the life of humans, everything's doomed to crash and burn. What will Avery do to protect the one - or ones - she loves?[[word count: 70,000-80,000 words]][[ Wattpad Picks: Saturn Needs Sequels]]
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The Mistake
Jonah Lewis Chambers, a multi-billion dollar CEO, has only one objective on his mind - REVENGE.Mindy Ivory Young, your average hardworking, innocent and feisty woman falls prey to his revenge.When a mistake causes Jonah to seek revenge against Mindy and her family to the point of even kidnapping her, he never expected the plan to backfire on him causing him to create even more mistakes. He doesn't know when it happen but he has fallen hard for the girl. Will he ever be able to see past all the hate and revenge? And will she ever be able to forgive him?*Excerpt*Jonah wasn't going to stop. He was enjoying himself too much. Mindy shuts her eyes tightly and her body tense readying herself for his kiss. He smiled at her actions before ever so lightly placing a kiss on her soft cheek closing his eyes as well. A less than appropriate sigh escape from Mindy's mouth. Jonah's eyes snaps open. He lets go of her and shoves her aside. "Hurry and come out!" Then he storms out of the room not looking back.Mindy clutches her towel to her chest breathing heavily. She was so confused as to what just happen. She slowly takes her left hand and touch her cheek where he had kiss so gently. The feeling was still there. That kiss was not of an ogre, but of a prince to his princess. Why would he had kiss her like that? Still confuse she tries her best to forget the thought as she dresses. **Book 1 in Kidnapped Series**FYI: Mild laugange and sexual contents throughout.
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Falling for you
"Why can't you both realise your love for each other before spoiling someone else life" sri asked us.Rishi was looking at ground without saying anything "Falling for your best friend is not a crime" raj said to us.Rishi didn't said anything and start walking past me without giving a glance at me I felt my heart broken."Why are you so silent go stop him pooja before everything will be late" sri said but my eyes were on the person who is leaving me in tears.She doesn't know that it was already late....They didn't know i already fall for him madly without being his friend....My rishi, my bestie, my love Today i lost him... because of my love....Is it wrong to fall for best friend???????~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Pooja loves rishi so much but rishi will love pooja??Will their friendship broke because of this love??Do you want to know more about this?Then go don't waste a single second!!!!
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