《Her Terrifying Love》Part 68
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The following morning, in Chem class, Lyla checked her phone.
8:16.
She let out a long sigh. Prepared to spend the day with Jack, she was neatly dressed and had even gone so far as to wear makeup. She hoped she hadn't overdone it.
A young teacher, Mr. Haskins, stood at the whiteboard. His preferred method of engaging his students involved pacing energetically and speaking with far more enthusiasm than was appreciated, especially so early in the morning.
"How do we make the atoms for each side of the equation the same?" he asked.
Alison's hand went up. "By assigning coefficients."
"That's right." He wrote a Chem equation on the board.
Lyla glanced at her phone.
8:17.
The teacher grinned and said cheerfully, "Don't forget that the total charge has to be the same for both sides of the equation, too. They need to be balanced atomically and electrically, right?"
Students mumbled in agreement.
She checked her phone.
8:19.
She groaned.
For twenty minutes, she suffered through the remainder of Chem class. There wasn't the slightest chance that she could concentrate on endothermic and exothermic chemical processes when her thoughts were miles away on a rural two-lane road. And of course on Jack.
When first period finally ended at 8:40 A.M., Lyla raced out of the classroom, down the hall, and ducked into the empty bathroom. On the mirror was written HIDE N SEEK in lettering that looked like blood. Hopefully, it was lipstick.
Before she could catch her breath, Darcy entered.
"Jumpy much?"
She replied with a polite grin.
"You want my notes from The Awakening?"
"Uh, not right now." She combed her hair at the mirror. The taunting message had disappeared. She glanced at her neck and found no visible traces of a burrowing snake or of a blue tattoo.
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"I'm not sure what's happening here. I mean, you got a date or something?"
"What?!"
"You're wearing makeup and everything."
Lyla deflected with a fake smile. "Just trying to keep up appearances."
"Keep up appearances? Sounds like something my grandma would say."
Two girls from the dance team waltzed in, scowling as they walked past. Darcy stuck her tongue out at them. One of the girls flipped her off.
When the class bell rang, she shouldered her bag and exited, Darcy by her side.
Richie waited for them in the hallway.
"Well, what a shock!" Richie arched his sculpted eyebrows in mock amazement. "Ms. Okumura let us in on her little secret today. She's pregnant!" He gasped dramatically.
Darcy chuckled.
"Like everybody in the world didn't know that her eggo was preggo since February." He rolled his eyes. "How you gonna hide a baby bump when you only weigh sixty-five pounds?"
Lyla didn't even smile at his quip.
As Richie and Darcy began walking down the hall, she remained in place glancing at the exit door at the opposite end of the hallway.
"C'mon, girl." Darcy waved. "We're gonna be late."
"Go on. I'll catch up."
Darcy whispered something to Richie. He looked over his shoulder at Lyla as she made her move toward the exit.
Once outside the building, she checked her phone.
9:02.
She ran. She turned the corner and picked up the pace when she saw Jack's car parked at the bagel shop.
He got out of his car and noticed her racing toward him.
"Sorry I'm late," she panted.
"You're not late."
"Well, I couldn't... I didn't wanna be... late."
"You hungry? You wanna get something?"
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"I already had breakfast. Maybe just a coffee."
They went inside.
She caught herself staring at Jack when he placed his order. He was picture-perfect with his strong jawline, chiseled features, dimples, and of course, those warm brown eyes. Her heart pounded but not from running. She diverted her attention elsewhere. She didn't want to hear the I'm-madly-in-love-with-Carissa speech again.
And then the sharp blade of reality sliced through Lyla's romantic haze. She and Jack weren't going to enjoy the afternoon making out on a blanket amidst a meadow of wildflowers. They weren't planning to sneak off into the woods for an afternoon of lovemaking. There was only reason Lyla and Jack were spending the day together. To find the remains of the decomposing corpse of Keenan Ames. Nothing romantic about that.
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I've spent a lot of time recently trying to understand the self-publishing industry, and I'm pretty sure I can make some money by using short-term strategies with my current amateur skill level. But I've seen too many authors come and go/burnout, and really, the only way that I think I can enjoy writing and still make money on a long-term basis is to become a better writer. And the next step for me, which I haven't done much before, is to spend more time on rewriting and outlines. That is pretty much antithetical to the way SSA is developing. I've always been kind of 20/80 plotting/pantsing, but I want to spend a lot more time outlining before I even start writing. SSA jam sessions don't really fit my goal anymore. If you're curious about what's next, read on... Among other regrets, I regret not finishing SSA. It's the first story I've dropped, but then again, it's the first web novel I've attempted, so I suppose that's not a surprise. I don't think traditional web novel formats suit me that well. The whole SSA story I had loosely planned (beyond a first book or major arc) is way too large as well. Big story = good for neverending webnovel with Patreons, bad for penniless and fickle writer like me. I am currently outlining a complete trilogy to another story in great detail. I want the story to end concisely, and I also want the chance to really spend a lot of time on the full outline to spot pacing problems, character issues, lost themes, and so on. I'll still share this story on RR. What I intend to do is finish book 1, flash-publish the whole thing here for a few weeks, then publish on the big Zon. Repeat for books 2 and 3. The upcoming story will be about crafting heroes. The backdrop is an isekai-like setting, where elves will summon humans to their world as heroes, but the whole hero crafting business is still in its infancy. 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Ita kaddarace abace wacce bata tsallake kan kowani bawaba, rayuwarta tazo cikeda Qaddara kala-kala, rayuwace mai cikeda qunci, baqin ciki da jarabawa iri-iri."Kuka takeyi kamar ranta zai fita, tana fadin mama nikuma Qaddarar rayuwata kennan, na kwammaci mutuwata da irin wannan rayuwar, rayuwata batada amfani."
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