《My first love - jimin》-11-
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It's been 8 month and jimin still not awake from his coma .
I miss him , I miss to talk with him . I miss to seeing him smile him . But now I just looking at him in coma . Not doing anything
I always pray to God , hope jimin awake from his coma .
Everytime I look at him my heart really hurt . Every night i cry .
I always talk to him . I was like crazy people talk to jimin while he is in coma for 8 month .
I always sleep with him . I always change his clothes .
I still remembered when I was almost give up . I am tired waiting jimin . And that night I dreaming about jimin . He said that please waiting for him .
And that day I'm not giving up .
Seokjin Oppa and other always visiting jimin , seulgi also come and said that she really sorry bout what happened . She said that she just being selfish and use jimin .
I forgive her . That's all I can do , I just missing jimin. I want him waking up from his coma .
8 a.m at hospital
As usual I waking up . I turn and look at jimin . I touch his cheek .
"Jimin I love you , I love you more than yesterday but less than tomorrow" I mumbled while touching his puffy cheek .
I'm not going to school because I want to stay with jimin .
My teacher know about it and he give me permission .
"Jimin I wish you will awake from your coma" that's the only word I can say every morning, every night . I just wishing .
I am hungry now , so I want to go the cafeteria (hospital cafeteria) .
When I was about to go out from the room. Someone grab my hand .
Jimin . Jimin is awake .
"Jimin ! You awake ! Oh god thank you ! Jimin I miss you sooo much" I said happily . I hug jimin tightly.
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"Miss , I can't breathe" jimin said .
"Miss , what do mean ?" I said to jimin . Jimin just give me his blank face .
"Ermm I don't know who you are" he said .
My heart broke into million pieces . Jimin don't remember me ? What ? Auch
Tear flowed from my eye slowly .
"Miss why are you crying?" Jimin said in worries .
"Ahh nothing , I'm okey " I said while wipe my tear . I just smile pretend to be okey . My heart auchhh , I always care about him and sleep with him every night in this hospital . But when jimin awake he don't even remember me .
"Miss , am i know you?" Jimin asked me .
"Yes you are, call me y/n , please don't call me miss" I said while nodding .
"Okey mis- I mean y/n" he just chuckled .
Taehyung and Jennie come to the room .
"Taehyung ! Jennie!" Jimin shouted .
Taehyung and Jennie run to jimin and hugging jimin .
"Jiminie we miss you so much" taehyung said .
I confuse why he can remember taehyung and Jennie but not me ?
"Taehyung can I talk to you personally?" I said and taehyung nod . We walk out from jimin room .
"Taehyung....jimin don't remember me" I said to taehyung . Taehyung shock .
"W-what!? Are you serious?" Taehyung ask to many question.
And I just nodding .
Taehyung hug me . "It's sokey , one day maybe he will remember you" taehyung said while wipe my tear away from my eye . I didn't realise that I was crying .
"Let's just go inside" taehyung said and I nodded.
"So we want to leave right now , take care jimin" Jennie said while holding taehyung hand .
They left the room and just me and jimin .
Awkward silence but then jimin break it .
"How did you know me y/n??" Jimin ask me .
"Owh , you want to know?" I said and he slightly nodding his head.
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"Well actually we are best friends , but yeah looks like you don't remember me" I said and sigh .
"Sorry" jimin mumbled .
"Pardon?" I ask again because I can't hear clearly
"I'm sorry because don't remember you" he sad while pouring.
"Hey it's sokey " I said while giggles .
I am so happy that he awake . I really miss his voice , his eye , his laugh and everything about him .
But I little bit broke because he didn't know who I am actually .
It's sokey , I will make him know who I am . I will make him mine .
"Jimin , do you remember who is your ex?" I asked jimin . His smiling faded .
"Don't talk about that bitch" he said and just looking down .
"Ohhhh ermm I'm sorry" I said.
"Sokey , I deserve this" he said and smile back .
"You know what y/n , I actually miss Someone . A girl , but I don't remember her name , its you maybe?" He said nervously .
"I don't know , you should fine yourself" I said while chuckled .
Cute jiminie .
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