《Critique And Editing Info》Critique: The Life of Cassander Stoutsworth
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The Life of Cassander Stoutsworth
ILikeCrabs
Fantasy, Drama, Adventure?
Cover needed. {New cover I like because it's original, but not really telling me much}
That was amazing. It has me at my edge of my seat wanting more.
It was amazing, great details and reactions between the characters. There are some things I suggest you fix (I commented them on your book)
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I actually really enjoyed reading this. I do have one question though. Is this in our world, but the past (Historical Fiction) or a different world (Like Lord of the Rings). Also because of the language, you need to switch this to mature. Don't get me wrong I LOVE it. It gives depth to your character. Editing wise I suggest you re read the chapters. I found a few missing words; simple words, in Chapter 2.
Somewhere in this book, I have instructions how to get a cover, but I'm not sure which one. I'll probably make a chapter for it since I suggest new covers a lot. If I have the time I will definitely read on. Keep Writing.
When I read about the Tavern all I could think about was 'Master Of The House'-Les Miserables
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1: Poor/Needs MAJOR editing
2: Almost there/ needs fixing/need practice
3: Good/Needs a little editing
4: Good/Needs a little editing/may recommend/may read on
5: EXCELLENT/will recommend to followers, friends/may read on
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- In Serial22 Chapters
TO WHOM IT MAY CONCERN, I HAD A TERRIBLE TIME ON YOUR PLANET
Powerful beings outside the scope of one's comprehension can be real assholes. Hot example, in an effort to slow the total destruction of everything that exists, Karen's universe was was tied together with countless others. Forced to flee the chaos that followed, join her as she spreads her message of insecurity, petty revenge, greed, and conceit to any who will listen, and many who won't.
8 84 - In Serial26 Chapters
A Journey With Gods and Monsters
An outcasted High School boy, Cody, is always stuck in his friend's shadow. He wished he could stand alone, but feels indebted to his friend, John, for his kindness to him. He goes on sullenly until suddenly he is pulled into the world of Gods and Monsters of human mythology and lore. Why was he brought there? Who is he really? Will he be able to go back home or want to go back home? A tale of Fantasy, Romance, and finding Self-worth, journey along with Cody in the land of Gods and Monsters.
8 153 - In Serial31 Chapters
Ant Lord: Monsters in the Fog
Marcus was living the good life until the day the fog rolled in. Now he has to battle against impossible odds to save the ones he loves. Can he stand in the face enemies who have a serious leg up-or a few legs up- on him? Or will he lose his humanity to monsters even worse than the creepy crawlies?
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Warlord of Winslow
Karl Brunett leads a mediocre life and yearns for the opportunity to be something greater. Though never quite mustering the motivation to seize his place in the world. That's until the system decends on Earth and throws the old world into chaos. Having been somewhat prepared for a catastrophe he finds himself uniquely position to take the things he has always wanted. In doing so he might just save more people than he kills on his path to greatness. ***This is my first attempt at writing here... or anywhere, might start a little slow though I hope those who read it at least find it entertaining.***
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Bottom Wilbur Soot Extras
Extras for my other book.This will be where I post a/ns and ideas.
8 131 - In Serial369 Chapters
Silent Poetry
(#1 in metaphor)At late nights, I could see those choked words rushing out of my throat-shouting their presence in the ink of the broken pen. They are awake to be in my heart and on this paper. In the soft yellow light of the lamp, I'm weaving them again, breaking the captivity of time. Oh, I'm still writing.
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