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it has been a year since i opened this shop and served everyone the best possible critique i could offer. it has been a journey, i learned a lot from this as much as my clients have learned. and now it has come to an end:)
yes, you've read it right. i am ending the journey here. it's about time to close the shop. i won't be accepting any clients anymore. but will i open another critique shop? well, i'm not quite sure. the thought hasn't crossed my mind yet. oh, and i think i've waited enough for the two pending clients. i can't possibly wait forever. so... yeah.
to all of my clients, i hope you learned something from my critiques. goodluck on your journey as a writer. i wish you all the best!
thank you once again for trusting this shop:)
forever thankful,
ethereal_solare
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Draugr Cell //Layer 01-- Investiture:
With the end of the only war to ever reach mainland Australia I found myself living out of a small room in an old military compound that had been handed over to the jurisdiction of the Department of Veterans Affairs. The end of the war, unfortunately, didn't mean the end of hostilities. The terrorism trend that had started back in the early 2000's with the attack on the world trade center over in America, had spread to just about every country on the face of the planet. Over time the constant threat from various groups meant the civilian police force was quickly undermanned, under equipped, and overwhelmed. They were simply unable to respond to the daily threats in any reasonable time frame, and in many situations lacked the both the skills and equipment required to deal with the threats to put them down in a 'safe' and expedient manner. Veterans of the war that were being reintegrated into society however, were just about everywhere, all the time. We have the training and the skills required to deal with just about any threat you care to mention, all we needed was access to the equipment to do so. In a world first, under the new Veterans program, the Australian government had taken the rather controversial step of allowing specifically selected veterans to go armed in public. Sure, with Australian weapons laws being very, very strict there were a number of hurdles to get over first, but that's where the selection part comes in. Tangentially that's actually how I met Brianna, my current partner. We work as ringers in Victory City, I thought being thrown into imptomtu combat operations and risking my life on a daily basis for barely livable wages was excitement enough. Then I met her... it... I don't know. An AI unlike anything else out there has wedged itself into my life and decided it needs to... look after me. What could possibly go wrong? **** This is the first book I have released, and my first entry into a cyberpunk universe. There is minimal drug use, a fair amount of sex, a bit of gory violence, and a sultry AI that has decided the main character needs a harem.
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Stormstruck
Just out of college with no job and no useful connections, Ashwyn Fleetwood's not far off from having to move back in with her oppressive mother. So when she finds out that Elizabeth Jonathen Butler--the most renowned businesswoman and inventor alive--is hiring an assistant, she jumps at the chance to interview. But E.J. Butler is more than Ash ever could have expected or imagined.More brilliant. More beautiful.More than human. From the day of the interview forward, Ashwyn's irrevocably locked in E.J's increasingly perilous orbit. And the deeper in love she falls, the clearer it becomes that to survive in her love's monstrous world, she will have to become more than human herself.
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Dragonhearts: The Redeemer
After generations of mankind suffering from a draconic curse, William Kingsfeld, a daydreaming youth in a small village is revealed to be the prophesied Redeemer who will restore mankind from its bonds. But not all want the curse to end. A secret cult are hunting the Redeemer in order to end the prophesy and bring about an age of darkness in this Fantasy web serial releasing chapters every Thursday!
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It Isn't Easy Being Human
Ren-Shai the Supreme God of Time, Fate, and Luck - has grown curious. After billions of years a race has arisen that constantly and consistently tries to defy him and his two brothers. Humans.Watching them through their history was like watching a theater performance. So Ren-Shai has decided to find what drives these fragile, short-lived beings to such feats of arrogance. With the aid of his brothers, he has taken the place of a comatose elementary school student so he may have the full experience of being a human.Will Ren-Shai deem them worthy of existence or remove them with his brother Lan-Shai like he did the dinosaurs? Conflicting with the lesser gods he created and the ties of mortality, will he finally be able to understand his own creations as he grows up among them?Worst of all, what happens when he changes Fate for a young girl for the first time in history and his creations curse her to forever be near him for safety?
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SAMSARA :The Journey Of NEELKNATH
Life was normal on Earth but one day 90% of population in earth died because of an unknown pandemic. Mysterious Black Mist appeared all around the globe. The boundaries of worlds are faded. Two siblings got separated. An unknown whisper stated the indomitable fate. What is the truth of NEELKNATH..? Will he be able to comprehend his fate.?The unknown journey to greatness awaits for our hero. *This is my first writing. Not a professional writer. Please be patient enough and read it till the end. I hope you will enjoy this story.*
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in the near future people can be perminatly implanted in a game like world as many races. matthew became a dungeon. but for how long will he stay a mere dungeon? ill post more chapters if people like it so comment your opinion.
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