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it has been a year since i opened this shop and served everyone the best possible critique i could offer. it has been a journey, i learned a lot from this as much as my clients have learned. and now it has come to an end:)
yes, you've read it right. i am ending the journey here. it's about time to close the shop. i won't be accepting any clients anymore. but will i open another critique shop? well, i'm not quite sure. the thought hasn't crossed my mind yet. oh, and i think i've waited enough for the two pending clients. i can't possibly wait forever. so... yeah.
to all of my clients, i hope you learned something from my critiques. goodluck on your journey as a writer. i wish you all the best!
thank you once again for trusting this shop:)
forever thankful,
ethereal_solare
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Zero Fate against the world (An Isekai Story)
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How could I, Guizou, perish under your blade? Do you believe this old master to be a pushover? Then watch! Watch how I regain a foothold in the world with only my soul! Nine Skies Great Emperor Guizou, a peerless master of the legendary Fairy Land, had his fleshly vessel destroyed under an assassin's blade.Who could assassinate this mighty figure? Guizou is perplexed and confused. In the world, who could even stand a single strike from him, let alone kill him?However, this mystery will not be uncovered for a very long time.Having sealed his own soul inside a jade pendant to protect it, Guizou must wait.Wait for a worthy heir and tool for his revenge. ----- Update Schedule : None, this story will receive random updates. I will start writing it seriously when my other story's (Celestial Journey) second volume has been completed. The main character of this story is Guizou, but a second main character will be introduced later. This story contains : -POV (1rst Person / 3rd Person) is not determined-Two Main Characters-Romance is not determined ----- Cover Art : AI Generated by WOMBO Dream, edited in paint.net.If WOMBO Dream demands it to be put down, please message me on ROYAL ROAD.
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She was destined to die for her people. He was born to end lives. With just a touch of his bare hands. ----------Xemein has known nothing but distress, for the last six years. And now, to end her anguish and that of her people, she was given the task to murder a man that had proven countless times, that he couldn't be killed easily. The Dark Lord. And so, she was wedded to him, with a mission. Kill the Dark Lord and your family and people will be safe forever. And now, she has been given to him in marriage. What will happen now that she's confined in his lair and completely unprotected against his charms? Will she fulfil her mission and save her people? Or will she choose winning the Dark Lord's heart over everyone she's ever known and loved?
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