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PathOgen [Forge Your Own Path] Reader Interactive
This is a 100% reader-interactive, game-like book, based on my novel Technomagica. It is written in collaboration with the readers - every comment drives it forward. Once there are enough interesting or fun comments on each chapter, various paths forward begin to manifest that you can [choose] to follow. Summary: Soviet bio-weapons designer Vladislav Kerenski died in 1992. Upon meeting "god" he rejects a continuation of his narrative. It's up to you to help him survive the darkness of the Astral Ocean. This is the only book on Royal Road where your choice can make the MC become a villain or a hero, to die horribly and quickly, or slowly and painfully, to live out an interesting life, to become god, or to be trapped in a nightmarish loop without an end!
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The Cursed Witch (Book One)
PREVIOUSLY KNOWN AS "THE FORBIDDEN PRINCESS" Book One Synopsis Updates weekly In a world of magic, there are those that embrace it and those that vilify it. Cateline Bennett, a princess from the Kingdom of Axulran who has concealed her magic her entire life, is thrust into the world her lineage has spent centuries slandering. Forced to adapt to a new reality far from the royal palace, she must learn how to cooperate with peasants, how to survive a world full of magic, and how to fight in order to live. As she traverses the Kingdom of Traburg, her newfound friends dig up a darker secret resting beneath their feet that threatens the world as they knew it. Together, they must discover a way to counter these threats; lest they, and all they know, will crumble to ruin.
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The Divine Path
A game that boasts about having the perfect combination of realism and fantasy, becoming the leading game with over 2 Billion players worldwide. "The Divine Path". Follow the story of this games epic adventure through the eyes of Sora Yazuki, a man who is reborn 10 years before a tragic accident, leading him to start the game anew with years of experience under his belt. What tricks will he play to repave his path to eternal glory and smash those who opposed him in his previous life? Release Schedule: 1 chapter every day at 6 PM PST Will occasionally take days off
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Kingdom of Mallic
The Kingdom of Mallic is a land of magic, border wars, and new frontiers. To the north are the Cold Lands, ruled by cruel isolationist dwarves. They raid for supplies continually. Every effort to remove them has failed. No army that has marched north ever returns. To the south are the vast Jungles of Terror, which are home to barbaric elves. Every elf that is facing their Coming of Age ritual or seeks further status requires the torture and sacrifice of an elf from another tribe, a human, or a dwarf. Their numbers are staggering, causing great fear of them becoming more organized. The Kingdom settled on the west coast of a vast continent between the waring dwarves and elves. It has slowly grown eastward into a land of unexplored and dangerous frontiers. Those forces are always pushing the Kingdom back. Within this Kingdom, a boy seeks to master magic and become a great mage, but others are not so willing to let him rise. What lengths will he have to go to survive?
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My Subliminal Journey
This story is just an update on the Subliminals I use. I use pictures for updates too!! I've been updating for two years now :)
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Boxer Girl
I lived with my father and four brothers my entire life. My mother died when I was two, but my brothers took the best care of me.I loved my brothers, I still do. But living with lots of testosterones had had its affect. I'm not a tomboy, not that I'm against it, but I'm a boxer like all of them. Even if I'm still in high school. And there lies the problem. I will not mix my school-life with the arina-life. That's my biggest fear, not a broken nose or bruised limb.Until I met the nerd, and had to keep a secret I feared sharing.----(UNEDITED)This is my second story, I hope you like it. Please Vote and Share.
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