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Tim the Engineer
Summoned against his will to a world of swords and magic, an engineering student struggles to find a way home under the shadow of a world devouring threat. ***************************** Updates: 5/13/19: Revisions to several chapters for clarity, grammar, and style. 4/29/19: A short side story and artwork has been added to the blog. 4/8/19: A Side Story has been updated on my new blog (every writer is required to have one). https://talesfromliahar.wordpress.com/ ***************************** “The summoning scenarios are broken down into groups of ten.” Emi Ito stated. “Don’t, don’t you dare say another word.” Muttered Genzo Uchida. His eyes had turned bloodshot and his hands shook with rage. “The first thirty…” “Shut up!” Genzo bellowed “How dare you help these disrespectful gaijin?” Flecks of spit and madness flew from his face, his fist raised ready to strike. But Emi did not flinch, instead she was about ready to continue when Yuma Takeuchi interrupted her. “Uchida, please,” her sweet sounding words could melt ice. “I think we will have a better chance of getting home if we all work together.” When she glanced up with her sleepy looking eyes at Genzo Uchida he deflated visibly. “Were not getting home.” Uchida said coolly. “Group summoning, large, that puts us in the 60 series. No one came to greet us after five minutes of arrival. That leaves scenarios 68 and 69. In scenario 68 there is something that binds the large group together; they are all classmates or a single family. But thanks to the gaijin” he spit out the word “I think we are scenario 69 with no way home.” Ikko Inoue’s eyes went wide, while Katsukno and Hayata started muttering to themselves. Tim took on a serious look and rubbed his scruffy chin. Emi maintained her stoic expression while trying to find something to refute. McKenzie glanced at Randall and giggled. Randall took the prompting of his teammate and followed up by approaching Genzo. “Uh, so we are in a sixty-nine?” “Yes.” Replied Genzo with the seriousness of someone who’s life was about to end. McKenzie covered her mouth and snickered. “You and me, were stuck in a sixty-nine situation?” Randall pushed with a grin. “Yes, we are all stuck in a sixty-nine scenario together!” Genzo retorted in anger. McKenzie fell on her butt laughing. “What the hell is so funny?” Demanded Genzo, whose face had turned red. “It’s a problem with the automatic translation.” Retorted Tim. Randall, who seemed unable to quit started in again “So, about this sixty-ni…” Genzo interrupted Randall with a swift punch to the face. But, because of their height difference it was a bit of an uppercut that left Randall rattled. Tim and Ikko moved to step in between the two, but Genzo showed no further hostility. Instead he just stared at his clenched fist with such intensity it grabbed the attention of the room. “I unlocked a skill.” He said bluntly. ***************************** This is not a light novel, but people who like light novels should enjoy the themes of this book. ***************************** A Map of the Region
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The Outside world Survival Game
In a parallel world filled with magical beasts and statuses, people compete against each other for power using magic and other fighting skills. Studies are almost all about magic and swordsmanship, archery, and even martial arts. This story will be about a child who has an exceedingly high amount of skill in swords, just like his father, even though he has an average amount of magic. He wants to pursue his dreams in becoming the strongest swords man in the kindom. Fighting monsters and registering as an adventurer. 1 chapter per day and hope all of you enjoy it!
8 220 - In Serial43 Chapters
The Last Space King
Born into a cruel and bloodthirsty world, a young man seeks to avenge his family and find justice. Join him as he gains the strength to conquer kings and defy fate. - - - - - - Bloodline: Crappy Human bloodline (50%) Space King bloodline (50%) 'Did you really have to transmit that my human bloodline made me weaker??' 'Yep! I can't help myself. I see something weak, and I just have to point it out.' The cover art isn't mine. All credits go to the artist.
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The War of Cinders - (Broken World)
"This world is as much the end of us, as it is the beginning of something completely new." - Unkown "My dear colleagues, esteemed thaumaturges and students, for over three thousand years we have endured the superstition of religious men, praying to so called gods, and calling us heretics. But today I am proud to tell you no more, because I will prove to all of you that these gods are nothing more than men with too much power!" This opening to a speech of the powerful Magi Suralzar was chiselled into the front gates of the greatest Thaumaturgical University of its time, for they have led to the most horrible and devastating catastrophe in human history.Now almost one-hundred years later the remnants of this world are thrown into another calamity, as the Sibalien Empire, led by Emperor Angus Bloomest the Third, seeks to subjugate each and every other nation for their almighty god. Follow a myriad of distinct individuals: A genderfluid Magi having lost their ambition, a steadfast Palladin who has only corruption on her mind, a lesbian Acolyte with more than a handfull of dirty secrets, a morally questionable Smith teaching a Golem? about life, a speach impaired assassin with out memory, . . .Each one of them has their own desires and motives, as they try to survive in these troubling times. They may have no knowledge of each other but their fates are about to intertwine in an epic world spanning adventure of love, hate, magic and the occasional murder.
8 71 - In Serial50 Chapters
[BHTT] Thôi Miên Trên Đầu Lưỡi - Diệp Sáp !!!
Tên gốc: 舌尖上的催眠 Tác giả: Diệp Sáp - 葉澀.Thể loại: đô thị tình duyên, mưa dầm thấm lâu, tình hữu độc chung, báo thù ngược ngẫuTình trạng bản raw: Hoàn (50 chương: 49 chương + 1 chương ngoại truyện về Hạ Dĩnh)Nhân vật chính: Trầm Thước Hi-Hạ NhânNhân vật phụ: Hạ Dĩnh, Tống Niên Niên, Tiêu Bảo BốiVăn án: Một nhà tâm lý chững chạc có thể đoán hết tâm tư bệnh nhân gặp gỡ một nữ nhân xấu xa, xảo quyệt như hồ ly.Trốn không khỏi vận mệnh.Thứ thôi miên không phải là lòng người, mà chính là tình yêu, là dục vọng cuối cùng, chính là đầu lưỡi.------------**Nguồn: https://wtulip01.wordpress.com/2016/09/10/dau-luoi-thuong-thoi-mien-diep-sap/!! LƯU Ý !!-TRUYỆN NÀY LÀ REUP. -Tôi lưu lại để dễ xem và tiện cho việc tìm kiếm khi bản thân muốn xem lại .
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Shawn mendes ddm imagines
Shawn can be however old you want in these. Camila cabello will probably be in most of these so if you don't ship them then this won't be for you. Some won't be ddm imagines. Requests are open
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