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Deadlier of the Species - Book 2 of Descendants of a Dead Earth
(The second book in the Descendants of a Dead Earth series, taking place immediately after the events of A Tinker's Damn, which can be found here: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/30309/a-tinkers-damn-book-1-of-descendants-of-a-dead) Deadlier of the Species turns its attention to Samara, of the Protean Clan. Recruited and trained by the clandestine Wetworks organization, Samara has left a long and bloody trail of bodies in her wake. But natural born killers are rare, rather they are created, molded by powerful entities to do their bidding in a shadow war where there are no borders, and everything comes with a price...including your soul. But now that she has been freed from her chains, Samara has a few old scores of her own to settle...and perhaps a new cause to fight for as well.
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INFINITE SCHOLAR
A retired military major got transmigrated to become a scholar! Witness how he used his wit and knowledge to create a legend!
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The Harvester
Rakna was not normal. No, unmistakably not. Whether it was his appearance, his personality, his abilities, his identity, nothing about him had ever been banal. Was it his choice? No. He was merely but a tormented soul doing its utmost to live the life it had learned to never enjoy. Would being picked by a glorified universal abductor calling itself a system bring something out of him? Would he finally learn to breathe in the pool of blood that suffocated him? The Harvester does not sow, he only collects. All he has ever known to feel was loss and the only thing he can do is take. He will devour their hearts and drink their blood if it is what it takes. --- Update Schedule: In Flux (6 PM UTC)
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Chronicles of Kyr
Volume one: In the world of Imala, on a continent known as Goskin, homeland of the orcs. In a small feudal kingdom called Limguard, Kyrion, a young farmer's son, looks at the clouds and dreams of a world bigger than the family farm. A world beyond the horizon, a life of adventure, would bring light to a dark place. An elderly spirit master of the Limguard has come for the Biennial awakening. A chance to live and change his fate has arrived, and he will take it. Volume 2: Kyrion has arrived at his academy, a place aiming to groom a powerful spirit master. Follow Kyrion as he grows into a young man and becomes a pillar for his generation. Chapters are back over the weekend
8 145 - In Serial9 Chapters
Impossible Dream
Seventeen-year-old Aleck is a Borg, part human, part machine. She and her younger twin brothers, Shem and Payton, were the only children to survive an invasion of their home planet by the Sharlakar, savage aliens who eat other sentient beings. Their bodies were nearly destroyed in the attack, and the children were changed, along with other survivors into cyborgs in order to survive the Sharlakar raids. The evil General Wallock is sent to "help" them but finds out the colonists' terrible secret of all being turned into cyborgs so they could survive the Sharlakar's brutal raids. The general uses their Borg programming to maintain complete control over them, forcing them to not only fight in the war but also commit horrible atrocities.
8 135 - In Serial99 Chapters
The New World Rising : How to Build a Dungeon Kingdom
He found himself in the middle of an unnamed forest. Now he has to survive! Join Echo in his adventures of building anew civilization of fantastic creatures and exploring this magical world! He was summoned to this magical world, and started to develop his small tribe with his new friends. But, soon, it all ended with a mystical mist, leaking from behind a mysterious gate. Now reborn as a dungeon master, Echo strives to build the first kingdom of the underworld. Join him in his adventures of building the biggest dungeon and the only underground city of the world, thriving! MC is building a dungeon kingdom in a world with RPG-like features
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