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Nightcrawler
Something stirs in the darkness of a rainy city, creeping through the gutters and hiding in the shadows.Branded and abandoned, she crawls through the alleyways of the forgotten streets, looking for life and meaning in a city given shape by a spiderweb of competing interests and the lingering legacy of a long-distant tragedy. This story is set in the Parahumans universe, created by John C. McCrae, though no prior familiarity with the setting is needed.
8 100 - In Serial165 Chapters
Pandemonium of a Lazy Soul
A Soul who became lazy over time has to now try and not die for 25 years before he can go back to his home, where he can be as lazy and not be subjected to more tests and trials.-----------------------------------------------Tags: No harem(harem sect please go away), System/LitRPG, Slow start.-----------------------------------------------Please do advise me if you find any logical mistakes, but don't try to enforce your idea into my novel. I appreciate good feedback as all of you can guess English is not my first language and this is my first time writing a novel.This novel is aimed at a certain target audience.Try to observe and interpret, very closely for any foreshadowing or clues I leave about many things in this novel and connect them like a puzzle before I reveal it to truly enjoy my novel.But do ask me questions and I will answer them. I like people who ask question and talk in my comment section.---------------------------------------------- A big thanks to dragozx1 for drawing me the cover picture.Check out his page:https://www.fiverr.com/dragozx1/draw-character-designs-in-my-art-style----------------------------------------------- Check out the wiki for my novel. Note it was recently created any almost all information is missing from it. I would be glad if some of you could assist me in adding in info.https://pandemonium-of-a-lazy-soul.fandom.com/wiki/Pandemonium_of_a_Lazy_Soul_Wiki
8 597 - In Serial9 Chapters
Yokai Wars
Red Sky Continent.In this land full of prosperity, the human race is now facing extinction against a powerful enemy - the Yokai race.The last humans were able to obtain a truce after many battles, but for how long can this period of peace continue?Read the chronicles of Souma, a young onmyoji who will end up being caught in this massive conflict.Will he be able to save the human race or will he perish alongside all the other humans?
8 179 - In Serial46 Chapters
The Banshee (Jasper Hale x OC)
Emma Marshall, lost her mother at the age of 15 and her father tried to kill her at the age of 16.She moves to Forks with her foster sister Bella Swan. But when she meets the Cullens she can only think of 2 questions: "Why do all the Cullens feel like death?"And "Why does she only feel calm around the mystery called Jasper Hale?"Twilight: Chapter 1-13New Moon: Chapter 14-24Eclipse: Chapter 25-31Breaking Dawn Part 1: Chapter 32-36Breaking Dawn Part 2: Chapter 37-Epilogue
8 72 - In Serial19 Chapters
Cultivator's Fantasy
A former Immortal died in a great heavenly war, but when he expected death to wipe his memories he woke up in the body of an infant. However instead of getting reborn back into a world he knew, he found himself in a world of swords, magic, and fantasy! Join the newly reborn Glen on his new journey to defy the heavens and reach the apex! And maybe learn a few new things in the process. ** There will be some profanity, but not much however you have been warned **
8 209 - In Serial94 Chapters
Lessons in Devotion
Bonnie Bennett believed she'd finally discovered her good enough ending. Yet, like most things in her life good enough goes left and leaves her with another ending. Or, perhaps a fire beginning. Journey with everyone's favorite Bennett Witch to the Viking Era for much needed lessons in devotion, courtesy of the Lothbrok brothers.
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