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The Summoner is Going
I went into rehabilitation.Would you skip the tutorial when playing a new game?I had a strong inclination to do so.After the Beta test phase ended, the main character joined the MMORPG during its Public Release.He likes to go with the flow and enjoy playing the game. This is a story of his adventures.
8 639 - In Serial85 Chapters
Soul of ether/Frozen road odyssey
The world is full of unknowns, whether dark chasms, secluded areas, abandoned cities, or desolate islands. It contains beasts and creatures yet seen by man, both horrific and spectacular. Long forgotten treasure, buried deep and waiting to be discovered. All of which lie beneath the countless veil of stars, ready to be found by the daring and heroic. Many have taken as their goal to search the world, few have succeeded, but those who do, become legends themselves. The world offers boundless rewards for those who search and follow through and horrible fates worse than death delivered with the unknown hands of destiny. During peaceful times like these, many find it the right time to explore once more. This story is the start of one of those journeys, the tale of a boy named Orel Eislandr, who, with glistening eyes, ventured off to become the first adventurer to have traveled to all of the world's hidden wonders.
8 139 - In Serial17 Chapters
SCION OF EVIL
Human beings since the dawn of civilization have always been the top of the food chain. With our wits and knowledge, we have dominated the Land, ruled the Sky, and roamed the Ocean, we are the only species that have dared to ventured into the space and explore the new horizon. Since time immemorial we humans have dominated the world around us with our technology. But what if one day all our technology becomes useless and monsters beyond and from our imagination comes alive. What if humanity suddenly is toppled from the top of the food chain. What if our myths and legend come alive into the reality one day? HOW WILL HUMAN SURVIVE THEN??? . . . . ' Among the trouble that humanity faced it also gained newfound powers and blessing in it. Follow the life of Our protagonist Rudra who will go through many hardships with his newfound powers in this era to kill slay his enemy take revenge and become the emperor extreme. I dont own the cover picture.. It was taken from the website below https://wallpaperplay.com/walls/full/5/a/0/190375.jpg or go to https://www.desktopbackground.org
8 195 - In Serial84 Chapters
Wake now in the fire.
Book 2 in the Fire Series. Centuries ago she fell to Earth in a land of deserts. She lay in pools of molten glass where the sand had melted beneath her, with no understanding of what she was or from where she had come.
8 154 - In Serial52 Chapters
Dsmp x reader ig
❤️Cover Art not mine❤️I will be writing forDreamGeorgenotfound SapnapBadboyhaloWilbur sootNiki nihachuKarl jacobsTommyinnitAwsamdudeQuackitity Jack manifoldFundy-No smutsNothing sexual of any kind actually Also I will not be writing for people in an actual relationship (I.e Philza,Charlie slimecicle) unless it's platonic
8 153 - In Serial8 Chapters
Michael Fassbender & Characters One-Shots
A book of 'x fem!reader' One-Shots for Michael Fassbender and his characters, namely Erik Lehnsherr (Magneto) and Mr. Rochester.I do not write smut!Each character belongs to the original author and of course Michael Fassbender's performance.
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