《O RE PIYA... (OH MY LOVE / BELOVED)》PART 21 A
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His scream was loud enough to be heard till the ground floor. Ridzy who was seated in the hall almost fell on the ground..hearing Geet's name taken so loud and echoing the entire Villa. It took few seconds for Ridzy to think in track about what just happened.
That was Maan's voice...what happened to Geet? The next moment, she makes her way to the terrace Garden.
At Terrace Garden...
Maan gets terrified seeing Geet unconscious...he pats on her cheeks.(Open your eyes)...He again pats on her cheeks softly but no response...
he pulls her gently and lies her down to the near by Garden Sofa....removes her footwear and rubs on her feet and then rubs her palm..and comes close to her and cups her face gently with his palms...
He is going restless and checks the surroundings if he finds some water..but he is so terrified that he is not willing to leave her hold even for a second. He screams out...(IS SOMEONE THERE?)
And Right at that time Ridzy appears in front of him... and she is completely taken back with Geet's unconscious condition..
R: Ridzy kneels down and holds Geet's hand.
M: That's all he could answer as he doesnt know anything beyond it as of now.
Ridzy shouts for her maid and she is here with a glass of water..Maan sprinkles some water on her face and that just helps her jerk a little bit but still she is in unconscious mode.
M: Maan pleads her helplessly patting her cheeks gently again.
He looks at Ridzy now who has taken her mobile and trying someone's number.
M:
R:
The maid guides him towards Dr. Soni's room... and in meantime, Ridzy calls Dr. Saritha who is a senior general practitioner in her dad's hospital.
Dr. Saritha:
Ridzy:
Dr. Saritha knows that Dr. Soni is in Delhi at the moment and she is worried for Ridzy now..
Dr. Saritha:
R:
Dr. S:
R:
Dr S:
Dr. Saritha leaves from the clinic and before that she informs her receptionist to cancel all the appointments or fix it up with other doctors... She has met Geet 2-3 times but that was almost a year before...i.e when Ridzy would get Geet along with her sometimes during her visit to the hospital. Ridzy and Geet would chitchat with her non-stop and the entire hospital will get alive in both's presence. And during Geet's one such visit to that hospital, Ridzy had put a word to Dr. Saritha to have a secret check up on Geet due to some incident that had happened in college where she screemed and started throwing things at one of Ridzy's other friend and Geet went into a web of her own and it took moments for her to get back.. Dr. Saritha examined Geet and concluded that Geet was right in her place but she got highly impulsive and it could harm her normal mindset if similar incidences repeats and she would get disturbed psychologically. Otherwise, she found Geet to be a very nice natured girl.. and one way amused to see a girl who has such high values and respect for her family. Coming to present she is worried for Geet. What could have happened to her?
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Ridzy makes her move to her dad's bedroom... and just then Arman calls her.
Arman:
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Arman recalls what Ridzy was mentioning about the tiff between Geet and Ahana and what all followed.
A:
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Arman knows that Ridzy and Geet are very good friends..and he could understand how tensed Ridzy would be at this point of time.
A:
R:
A: He pauses for a second and continues...
R:
Ridzy cuts the call and immediately instructs her maid to keep all the necessary stuffs ready...this maid of hers has been working in this villa for these many years and she knows the medical stuffs that needs to be kept ready.
Now, she moves to her Dad's room.. and she stops with what she gets to see.
She turns to look at Maan. He is holding on Geet's hand...tension is written all over his face. He is still rubbing on her palm and feet every now and then to get some response... At the same time Ridzi looks at Geet and its really pityful to see her like this. But still Ridzy finds there is something more to their relationship ...even though they apper in public like an Ideal couple and they are no way acting for sure. But something serious is hidden...Hope she gets to know it soon.
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M:
Just then, the door bell rings...
R:
And in meantime, Geet gives in to some movements..She holds on to Maan's hand...
G: she whispers softly as she calls out his name...
Maan smiles with joy seeing the development of this moment...Inspite of all what she has got from him, she still calls out for him... He really wonders why she trusts him so much..He looks at her hold on his hand and let it be...and he gently caresses her head and calls out her name softly...
She gradually opens her eyes blinking continuously and her vision got stuck on Maan...
her eyes slowly got to get wide and moist once again and she takes gradual efforts to get up and about to move back so that she can position herself away from him... but she is unable to do it as her head aches and spins and she holds on to it.. Then her attention drawn to the surrounding. Everything appears to be blurry as if she has landed in a different world... She is too confused where she is at the moment... her curiosity reflexes towards her feet and she stands up and tries to walk...doesnt know where to though...and again she holds on her head as it spins.. and he moved towards her and hold her..
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M:
Geet jerks with the pitch of his voice and he tries to calm himself and talk...
M:
He holds her back and helps her sit down...
is it a reality or a dream that she and Maan all alone in one room... and what is this? Why is he so concerned about her? and just then there's a knock at the door and Ridzy walks in followed by Dr Saritha. Ridzy rushes to Geet and hugs her
R: Ridzy breaks from the hug and cups her face...you really scared us today...aur yeh kya? Please lie down properly...I could see you are not yet stable.
R..she takes her name in broken word...
Dont think much yaar..anyways, this is Dad's room..
She feels kind of embarrassed to be here in Dr. Soni's room..
She again gets up and Ridzy pulls her back to bed.
R: (Now lie down quitely).
Geet looks at Ridzy with a paut..and a smile escapes Maan's lips looking at her kiddish pauting face...He really wish that she could open her mind and express her self to him in a same manner but that seems to be a long way to go for the time being.
Ridzy:
Geet got to see Dr. Saritha..
Geet: That's how she adresses Saritha..
Dr. Saritha is literally taken back looking at Geet..she doesnt look the same girl whom she met a year ago...what has happened? Why she seems to have lost so much weight and looks completely pale?
Dr S:
Geet happens to look at Maan...and then looks back at Dr. ..
Dr. S:
Ridzy:
Ridzy turns towards Maan and introduces him to the Dr...And that's when Dr. Got to notice Maan and she exchange a formal
Dr S:
Maan interfears and Dr. tells him.
She took the help of the maid to arrange few medical related stuff from Dr. Soni's room where Geet was present and then she asked the maid to leave as well.
Over to hall...Maan has been restlessly waiting to know what has been happening to Geet..In meantime, Ridzy finds this to be the right time to confess her mistake..she gulps her saliva, clears her throat and talks to him...
R:
He just looks at her..
R:
Maan looks at her confusingly..he was about to answer Ridzy but she took the lead and continued.
R:
Maan has witnessed it on the previous day. Geet's family in HP is way too conservative. He is lost in the thoughts while Ridzy continues further...
R: She takes a pause and continues..
Maan ST:
He calms himself and continues..
Maan:
R:
Ridzy had just heard about it...but he got to see it LIVE... and only he knows how he felt during the entire interview process...Maan shuts his eyes as deep within he is still fuming on himself and Sasha on what happened during the interview.
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Now Maan's thoughts gets halted listening to the word "AGAIN"...he knots his brows and holds on to Ridzy's shoulder...
Ridzy is not able to understand now...
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