《Lakshmila TS Collection》INNOCENT URMILA-3
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URMILA: Jiji aaj qa banaya h apne.. Rasoi ki sugandh se sampoorna bhawan chahak utha h..
SHATRUGHAN: Haan bhabhi baat to satya keh rhi h... Dekhiye na bhabhi aaj ki sugandh se vatavaran itna sugandhit ho gya ki mera thatha bharata shree ka kisi b karya m mann hi nhi lgra tha..
KAIKEYI: Ohho... To iska arth yah h.. ki aaj mere putron ne apna sampoorna dhyaan idhr kendrit kr rakha tha... To y Raj bhawan thatha praja k karya kon sambhaal rha tha bolo??
SHATRUGHAN: Aree mata uske liye Ram thatha Bharat bhaiya h na... Wo sambhaal rhe the...
LAKSHMAN: Haan mata aur raha Saha karya mein kar rha tha..
As this was going on.. Bharat and Ram also came and joined the conversation..
BHARAT: Mata Lakshman poorna satya bol rha h.. Yadi kiska dhyaan kitna kendrit tha use ankon m aanke to..
LAKSHMAN: To sarvapratham Ram bhaiya uske pashchaat Bhrata Bharat thatha
SHATRUGHAN: Uske pashchaat Lakshman bhaiya..
BHARAT: Haan aur antim sthaan tha aapke lalla ka bhabhi...
With this all of them giggled as Shatrughan was making faces and rest others were teasing him for his deeds..
SITA: Qa aap sab b.. ate hi humare pyaare lalla ko chidhane lage..
URMILA: Aur nhi to qa Arya.. ab yadi Bhrata shree ko bhojan priya h to wah.. usi k sammukh apna dhyaan lagayenge na... Aur Arya waise b sabki... Suppriye vastu bhinna bhinna hoti h na...
All others were smiling seeing Shatrughan who was looking towards his bhabhis supporting him..
SHATRUGHAN: (with puppy eyes) dekhiye Bhrata aap nhi smjhe kintu meri pyaari bhabhiyon ne mujhe bhali bhaanti bhaanp liya...
LAKSHMAN and BHARAT: Ahha... Bhaanp liya... Sabse chhote ho na.. matra isi karan se itna prem nyochavar krri h tumpar..
RAM: Devar bada ho athwa chhota, natkhat ho athwa samajhdaar... Bhabhiyon ka prem sada hi unki aur rehta h...
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URMILA: Bhrata shree kitni der se sabhi vartalaap m magan h... Yadi aise hi rahe to bhojan kis prakar hoga... Tatha sabhi ko Grahan krne m... Der b ho jayegi... Aur bhojan m deri swasthya k liye hanikarak h...
As Urmila was giving them a piece of mind.. Suddenly she stopped due to the interference of... Lakshman's bua ji... Yes, the sister of Maharaja Dashrath..
THIS IS A FICTIONAL STORY... KINDLY DO NOT MATCH THE CHARACTERS WITH THE ORIGINAL ONE...
BUA JI: Bss ab isi chan k darshan hone bache the... Haan bss isi karan wash to hum jeevit h... Jis bhawan m aaj tak ek patni ne apne pati ko sada dev mana h... Kabhi usse ueenchi tatha teekshna vaani m apne netra mila kr vartalaap tak nhi ki...
RAM: Kintu bua ji... Wo...
BUA JI: Ram abhi humne apne varno ko viraam nhi diya h...
RAM: Ji bua ji... Mujhe chana kre..
BUA JI: Haan to... Us ghar ki... Manjhli bahu ne apne... Jethtatha devar ko gyaan is avsar m diya...
URMILA: Kintu bua ji... M to matra...
LAKSHMAN: Bua ji aap dekhiye na... Urmil hume us chan... Bhojan grahan ki aur prasthan kre ... Aisa bolri thi...
BUA JI: Ab matra isi k darshan hone the... Samasta parivaar is kl ki aayi Hui... Bahu ki baat to maan rha h...
All of them were about to say something when... Kaikeyi hussed them...
KAIKEYI: Chama kijiye jiji... Wo abhi tak sab isi prakar se vaas krte aa rhe h.. Kisi ko b.. Kisi b prakar ki... Koi peeda athwa aapatti nhi hui... Isi karan wash humne b.. Urmila ko is niyam k baare m suchit nhi kiya...
All the mothers together..
ALL: Hum sab yahan aapke samaksh aapse.. chama maangte h.. Isi asha k saath ki aap bss hume Shama krde..
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BUA JI: Are tum q chama ki prathana kr rhi ho... Acchan hnn.. Wo stree jisko rasoi ghr ka koi karya tak nhi ata.. Tatha jo.. astra shastra k koi aur bhasha nhi jaanti wah.. in saare karam jo ghr k liye ek bahu krti h... Nitya unke baare m qa jaanti hogi??
All knew that Urmila had no other intention despite... She wanted everyone to have their food together and on time... They were all sad to see... Their bua Ji's reaction.. And deep down everyone knew that... She would be very upset...
KAUSHALYA: Jiji chaliye na bhojan grahan kr lete h.. Aao putron virajo...
BUA JI: Kaushalya, Kaikeyi thatha Sumitra.. Aao aakr sthaan grahan karo..
ALL 3: Ji... Ji.. jiji... aaaye.. Tabtak.. nirvillambh aap apna sthaan grahan kijiye na..
All this while.. Bua ji was giving glares to Urmila... All the while.. Lakshman trying to catch her or was trying to identify the look in her eyes...
URMILA: Lijiye sabhi.. Bhojan kijiye..
SITA (to Lakshman): Wo Urmila....
LAKSHMAN: jaanta hun bhabhi tatha.. aap dhairya rakhe... Chintit na ho... Mein Urmi ka vishesh dhyaan rakhunga..
At the gents and their mothers completed their part..
RAM: Aaiye ab aap sab bhojan kr lijiye..
SITA: Ji arya..
Here Urmila was ugly so she was the first one to sit and after sitting in no time she started eating..
Other than bua ji everyone else was admiring her..
BUA JI: Waah.. Kaisi bahu dhoondhi h tumne Sumitra... Jo apni jethani tak k virajne ki raah nhi dekh skti...
SHATRUGHAN: Kintu bua ji... Isme galat hi qa h... Bhabhi ko bhookh lagi thi... Isi karan se wah sarva pratham Viraj kr... Bhojan grahan krne lagi.. tatha bhookh to sabhi ko lagti h na... To??
BUA JI: Bas kr lalla... Tumhe in rishte naaton k baare m... Atirikt kuch b gyaat nhi... Isiliye tum mat hi bolo...
Here Urmila was teary eyed... And Lakshman and others noticed this...
KAUSHALYA: Jiji chaliye na... Vishraam kr lete h... Ab to ratri b kaafi ho gyi h...
Here as she left Urmila left the food and ran to her room... As such harsh lines were enough for her...
Seeing her Lakshman too ran after her...
LAKSHMAN: Urmi... Urmi... Kidhr ho.. mere samaksh to aao...
URMILA: Ji arya...
Even a layman can understand that she was crying... But the incident was disturbing in real sense...
LAKSHMAN: Urmiiii.... Idhr aao... Mere samaksh..
URMILA: Ji arya...
With this he held her hand in his and kept one on her shoulder (side hugging her),
With this Urmila began crying...
URMILA: Arya... Mera vivaah ho gya... Tatha mera hriday bhawan k karyon se adhik astra shastra m dhyaan deta h... To mujhe qa... Kisi b chiz ka dhyaan nhi... Dena ata... Aree aap hi bataiyea kya yah satya h..
LAKSHMAN: Nhi Urmila... Tum to varan sabse samajhdaar ho... Kintu hum har kisi ko to... prasann nhi kr skti... Tatha na hi... Sab pr apna hak dikha sakti ho...
URMILA: Kintu aapko qa lgta h?? Qa mein b... Us prakar ki streeyon m se ek hun??
LAKSHMAN: Kadapi nhi... Tum sabse priye ho mere liye... Tatha un sabke liye b... Aur chalo ab is varta ko chodo...
With this he selpt nicely hugging her...
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