《Lakshmila TS Collection》INNOCENT URMILA-1
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Sita (Urmila's elder sister) was about to get married. As for that a family from Ayodhya visited to see her.
Kaushlya: Maharaj ab humari iksha h ki hum kanya ko dekhle..
Sumitra: Yadi koi apatti na ho to bina vilambh k ab.. Rajkumari ko bula lijiye..
Kaikeyi: Haan hum b to dekhe ki maharaj ne humare Ram k liye kis suyogya kanya ko nishchit kiya h..
Raja Janak: Awashya maharani aapki is iksha ka maan rkhte h hum.. Vilambh ka koi vishesh karan nhi h.. Apitu aap sab vishraam krle yahi ek matra dhyay tha humara..
He later calls out Sita's mother to bring Sita downstairs..
Here she comes with her sisters n aunt..
Kaikeyi: Idhar aao Sita mere paas virajo.. Tabhi to hume b gyaat hoga.. Ki aisi konsi sundari h jiske liye maharaj apne sarvapriya putra ka haath maangne atyadhik utsuk ho rhe h..
Sita: Ji.. Jaisi aapki agya..
All the three rani's after seeing her face: Vastav m.. Divya sundari ho tum..
Sumitra: Dekhiye na.. Raja Janak ki sabhi kanyaion k mukh mantra mugha krte h.. Aisi sundarta to humne aajtk dekhi hi nhi..
Kaushalya: Sach keh rhi ho Sumitra... Dekho to in sabhi k mukh se sanskar ki kirnein kaise apna tez dikha rhi h..
All this while the parents of thses girls were really happy.. And were feeling proud on themselves for raising such gems..
But then..
Dasis: Maharaj ki jai ho.. Chama kijiye Maharaj..
Raja Janak: Kaho kis avashyak krya hetu aai ho yaha..
Dasi 1: Maharaj.. Aapko ek atyadhik avashyak samachaar dena h..
Raja Janak: Haan to kaho.. Qa karan h.. Is tarah yaha upasthit hone ka..
Dasi 2: Maharaj Rajkumari Urmila aur Rajkumar Lakshan kisi baat p behes kr rhe h.. Yadi wo ruke nhi to hume dar h.. Kahi stithi bigad na jaye..
After listening to this Maharaj ran towards her daughter..
Here,
Urmila: Aap yahan humare bhawan k nikat y dhanush ban lekar q upasthit h.. Iska satya karan bataiyega ab..
Lakshman: Bataunga kitnu pehle aap bataiyea ki aap h kon..
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Urmila: Hum h kon... Arthaat..
Lakshman: Arthaat y ki aap kabse to bolrhi h.. Ki aap yahan ki Rajkumari h.. Kintu is tarah mathmaile vastra dharan kiye hue konsi Rajkumari ghoomti h apne rajya m..
Urmila: To qa lagta h aapko yaha k Das Dasiyan hume dekhte hi naman q krre h..
Lakshman: Yadi aisa h to aapko y samajh aa jana chahiye tha na.. Ki aapke hi das dasi to humko bhi naman kr rhe h.. To uska b koi karan to avashya hoga.. Is pr vichaar nhi kiya apne...
Urmila: Wo.. Haan.. Ho skta bhaibheet ho gye ho y sab.. Aapka y bhayavah roop dekh kr..
Lakshman: Ohhho... Accha yadi aisa h to... Hume nhi gyaat tha ki.. Maharaj Janak ne apne darbaar m jo suraksha karmi rkhe h.. Wo bhaibheet ho jaate h.. Tab to aapko thatha maharaj ko apne rajya thatha.. Haan apne bhawan ki suraksha pr punar vichaar krne ki avashyakta h.. Rajkumari.. Qki aise karmi aapke upyog m nhi aa skte Rajkumari... Satya keh rha hu na m..
Urmila: Aaaaahhhhh.... Aisa nhi h Rajkumar.. Wo wo hum to bss..
Lakshman: Rajkumari.... Hum aapse mukh se y jaane k liye atyadhik utavle ho rhe h.. Ki aap to bss... Qa..
And here they all have reached the place and they were currently standing behind them both.. They were laughing after listening to their conversation...
But all the 3 matas were standing there straight in shock,
Sumitra: Jiji.. Y y.. Dekha na apne y Lakshman krodhit hue bina hi kisi k saath behas kr rha h..
Kaushalya: Hnn Sumitra yahi jaan k to hum b achambhit h..
Kaikeyi: Ji ji.. Aap maaniye na maaniyea kintu kintu maharaja Janak ki Rajkumari m awashya hi koi shakti h..
Sumitra: Hnn tabhi to Lakshman ko orodh nhi aya..
Sita's mother: Matra humari putri hi nhi apitu apke putra m b koi divya shakti h..
Sita's aunt: Tabhi to Urmila tatha uske mitron ne abtk rajkumar p koi prahaar nhi kiya..
Kikayei: Mitra.. Arthat??
Sita's mother: Rani yaha upasthit sabhi pashu pakshi iske sabse bade samarthak honge..
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All were laughing while talking about their child..
Here,
Maharaj: Raja Janak.. Hum aapke samaksh ek yachak k roop m hi upasthit h.. Nivedan krna chahta hu aapse ek..
Raja Janak: Are nhi nhi maharaj.. Aap to agya dijiye..
Maharaj: Aagya nhi raj rishi.. Aagya koi swami athwa kisi unche pad pr sthit koi adhikari deta h.. Yun yachak aagya nhi dete..
Raja Janak: Nhi maharaj aap humare liye yachak nhi ho skte..
Maharaj: Yadi aap vastav m dekhe to m ek yachak hi hu.. Jo aapse aapki param pujya sabse anmol punji apki putri ki yaachna krne aya hun..
Raja Jank: Maharaj aapke dwara kaha gya yh vachan.. Mera seesh garva se uncha krne k pashchaat.. Ek nayi soch ko disha b dega..
Maharaj: To Janak ji aap bataiyea ayga h... Ki aapki yadi to...
Raja Janak: Aap apni iksha to prakat kijiye maharaj..
Maharaj: Yadi aap de sake to kripya mujhe mere sabhi putron k liye apni sabhi kanyon ka haath de de..
Raja Janak was quite happy with this decision of Maharaj.. But still he took time to have a chat with his daughters and other members of the family..
Raja Janak: Hume y batate hue atyadhik harsh ki prapti ho rhi h.. Ki Maharaj Dashrath ne humari sabhi putrion ka haath maanga h..
Other members: Qa.. Y to atyadhik harsh ka vishay h hum sabke liye..
Urmila: Qa.. Aarthat Rajkumar Lakshman.. Rajkumar Lakshman mere mere swami honge... Mata aapko lagta h ki.. Ki hum abhi.... Abhi kisi ki bharya ban skte h.. Lagta h qa aapko.. Boliye na..
Raja Janak: Hnn meri putri h hi itni sanskari aur sabhya.. Ki wo kisi ko b sambhaal sakti h..
Sita's mom: Aur tmhra vivaah b to Rajkumar Lakshman k saath ho rha h.. Wo to h hi itne vidvaan aur sajag.. Tumhe vyarth m chinta krne ki koi avashyakta nhi h putri..
With this Urmila made different faces.. But no one can defeat the fate.. The wedding was then confirmed.. And the elders decided that the couples should have a chat for sometime..
At LAKSHMILA'S SESSION:
(Here major part that will be portrayed will just be of Lakshmila.. I won't write too much about others..)
Lakshman: Mujhe gyaat h ki.. Jab hum pratham baar mile to humare beech avashya mat bhed ho gya.. Kintu ab hume apna sampoorna jeevan ek saath vyattet krna h.. To yadi aisa kuch b h.. Jo aap mujhse puchna athava batana chahti to aap bata skti h...
Urmila: Sarvapratham to hum apse chama chahte h.. Us samay aapse aisa vyahvaahar krne k liye..
Lakshman: Aree.. Usme chama kaisi.. Yadi m b aapki jagah hota to us paristhiti m kadachid yahi krta..
Urmila: Arthat.. Aap aap humse krodhit nhi h.. Aur aapke hridya m koi durbhawna b nhi h na humare liye..
Lakshman: Nhi aur.. Aapse aisa kisne keh diya.. Waran.. Jo b hua wo to.. Swabhavik tha..
Urmila: Nahi wo kaki ne bola ki yadi aapse chama nhi maangi to iska prabhaav humare vivahit jeevan p hi padega..
Lakshman: Aisa nhi hoga. Kabhi b nhi.. Kintu aap humse yun sir neeche krke vaartalaap q krr rhi h.. Upr dekhiye humari aur..
Urmila: Nhi bua ji bolti h.. Kabhi b swami ki natron m dekhkr nhi bolna chahiye.. Isse unhe accha nhi lgta..
Lakshman: Aisa kadachid nhi h.. Hnn yadi aap chahe to parivaar jano k samksh aise vaarta kr skti h.. Kintu humare samaksh.. Aise krne ki koi avashyakta nhi.. Aap vastva m jaisi h jo h.. Waisi hi acchi h.. Usse badaliye nhi..
Urmila: Aap stya bol rhe h...
Lakshman: Hnn to aapse asatya bolkr hume qa laabh..
Urmila: Tab to aap ek acche insaan h.. Humari kalpna tha aapke prati jp humare vichaar the.. Usse ekdum vipreet..
Lakshman: Ha ha ha ha.. Hnn kadachid krodh m hum khud hi apne vipreet ho jaate h..
And with this they were called out...
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