《[DISCONTINUED] the swingset -Tyrus》Questions
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Hi. I've been having mixed thoughts about this story, so I need your guy's opinions.
Should I discontinue this and write another story? I still will have Jonah's sister in it, because I just feel like he needs a family member like every other character does.
Comment on which one you want me to do.
Discontinue?
Don't discontinue?
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Now for my second question.
If I continue this story I'm thinking of making Kira bisexual so should I or no?
You should!
You shouldn't!
If you don't want me to comment if you want her to be straight, pan, lesbian, etc.
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Now for my last question.
Should I make another character to make Cyrus or Tj jealous?
Like if Cyrus was hanging out with someone else and it made Tj jealous?
I just feel like we need more drama, so should I?
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bye
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