《Akshat Aur Guddan Ki Atrangi Kahaaniyaan》MISSION MEMORY😅..(Part-9)
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After Guddan was introduced to everyone in the family,she went to drink water as she was thirsty...She reached the dining area to drink water without asking anyone about the direction!!She herself was shocked too!!Then she shrugged it off and drank water..After that,when she was coming back keeping the glass on the table,her legs slipped and she was about to fall..To prevent herself from falling she put her hand on the table that was beside the dining table,containing some showpieces..In this process,due to the jerk,an idol of Lord Ganesh was about to fall...Guddan tried to prevent the idol from falling by showing her hands under it..
Just then she felt another hand beneath her hand that didn't let the idol to fall...She looked at the owner of the hand and was surprised!!!It was Akshat...They looked at each other..They shared an eyelock...Akshat was shocked to see her there but he got happy the next moment...He then remembered what his bahus had told him...Suddenly they came out of each other's thoughts as Guddan lost her balance and fell on Akshat...Then they soon composed themselves...
Guddan -(being irritated)Matlab hadd hai!!!Jahaan hum jaate hain aap peeche peeche chale aatein hain!!!Ek minute ek minute!!!Kahin aap hum pe nazar toh nahi rakh rahein hain!!!Stalker hain kya aap!!!!Tameez nahin hai ki....
Akshat-(cutting her talks in midway)Oh hello!!!Kuch bhi bolne se pehle thoda soch toh liya karo!!!Matlab mere hi ghar mein aakar mujhe hi suna rahi ho!!Kamaal hai!!
Guddan-(confused)Wait!!!What!!!Aapka ghar!!???Kaise!!!???
Akshat-Ji,haan!!!Mera ghar!!
Guddan-Kaise???
Akshat-Kaise matlab???Accha ek baat batao!!Mera naam kya hai??
Guddan-Excuse me🙄!!!!
Akshat-Maine pucha mera naam kya hai??
Guddan-The Khadoos Akshat Jindal😏!!!
Akshat-Ha ha!!Very funny!!Thank you!!!
Accha yahaan aate waqt bahaar ka name plate toh dekha hi hoga!!Woh kya likha tha???
Guddan-Jindal bhavan!!(She stopped and thought for a while)(murmuring to herself)Yeh bhi Jindal!!Ghar ka naam bhi Jindal Bhavan!!!Toh matlab....Nahin!!!Aise kaise!!(talking to him)Toh kya haan!!!Duniya aur bhi Jindals hain!!Sab aapke rishtedaar hain kya!!!!Nahin na!!!
Akshat-Nahin lekin Indore mein toh ek hi Jindal Parivaar hai aur woh mera parivaar hai!!!Okay!!!Wahaan dekho!!(pointing his finger towards his family)Woh meri Maa hain!!!Woh dono mere bete hain aur woh dono meri bahuen hain!!!Agar abhi bhi yakeen nahin ho raha hai toh idhar dekho!!(showing her their family photo in which Guddan was not present)Yeh mera parivaar!!!Ab toh vishwas ho gaya na yaa phir....
Guddan was now convinced that this is Akshat Jindal's family..Then Akshat asked her how she did know his family...Then Guddan narrated him everything..Akshat was surprised hearing all the incidents...But he decided to be normal...
Guddan-Waise ek baat bataiye!!Aap dikhte toh young hain!!And I am sure age bhi itni nahin hogi!!!Phir aapke bahu bete kahaan se...I mean..!!!!Thoda ajeeb lag raha hai!!!
Before Akshat could decide what to answer,her next question left him in a dilemma...
Guddan-Agar bahu bete hain bhi toh aapki patni bhi toh hongi na!!!Kahaan hain woh???Nazar nahi aa rahi hain!!!(looking here and there)
Akshat was shocked hearing this and could not decide what to say!!!He was looking at his lifeline that was standing in front of him!!!He wanted to hug her and tell her everything,but he couldn't!!He wanted to tell her that she is the one about whom she was asking!!!He came out of his thoughts when Guddan snapped her fingers in front of him...
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Guddan-Kya hua!!??Kahaan kho gayein aap!!Bataiye na!!!
Akshat-(with a heavy heart,controlling his tears,faking a smile)Haan!!Woh!!Darasal meri biwi apne maayke gayi hai!!Aa jaayegi kuch dino mein!!!Aur rahi baat mere bete bahuon ki toh,yun samajhlo ki khoon ka rishta hai bhi aur nahin bhi!!!Par dil ka rishta sab se upar hai unse!!!
Saying this,he left that place,not before wiping that lone tear from his eye...Guddan was left confused...She felt concern for him...She became restless seeing that lone tear in his eyes!!!To her surprise,her eyes were also teary!!!She was surprised when she felt a drop of tear on her cheeks!!!She wiped it and left that place to join everyone in the veneration...
Everyone gathered at the hall for the pooja...Everyone wanted Akshat and Guddan to do the pooja together...But they didn't know what to do for that!!!But the superbahus of the supersaas had planned for this already!!!Everyone did the pooja...First Daadi,then Kishore-Durga and Vardaan-Lakshmi did the pooja..Then Daadi asked Guddan to do the pooja as she was also like s family to them...
Guddan agreed and went to perform the pooja..But she was unable to hold the diya alone as it was heavy...But still she tried and lifted the diya...But it was very heavy for a person to handle it alone..Due to this reason,the diya was about to fall from her hands injuring her...Just then Akshat rushed to her and held the diya with her...Everyone got happy seeing this...Akshat and Guddan looked at each other...Then the priest asked them to perform the pooja together...Guddan agreed but reluctantly while Akshat was confused that why the diya was so heavy!!!It was not supposed to be!!!Actually the bahus had replaced the light diya with a heavy one...So that Guddan wouldn't be able to handle it alone and Akshat would come to help her...In this way,they would be able to perform the Pooja together...Their plan was successful and Akshat and Guddan performed the pooja together...Everyone became very happy...
After the veneration,Durga was giving Guddan a tour of the house..Guddan was enjoying it with much interest and was feeling familiar to the every corner of the house...As she crossed a window of a room,she stopped for a while..She sensed something familiar...She walked back to the window and looked inside it....
Guddan-(asked Durga)(looking inside the room)Yeh bacchi kaun hai??
Yes!!!She saw Choti in the room,playing with Lakshmi..She got mesmerised seeing her...To her unknown,the mother inside her was awakened....She wanted to go to her...
Durga-(hesitating,looking at her)Woh....woh darasal AJ aur Saasu Maa ki beti hai!!!
Before her answer was complete,Guddan had entered the room..Lakshmi was surprised seeing Guddan there and looked at Durga...Durga gave her a helpless look gesturing that she couldn't stop Guddan from coming there..She went from there to inform AJ about the same as they feared that something wrong should not happen as it would affect Guddan's health...
Guddan went to Choti...She sat near her...Choti saw her and she got happy...After all,she was meeting her mother after a long time...She became excited and jumped to her lap...Guddan was overwhelmed and hugged her as if she knew that she was her daughter!!!As if she was craving for this feeling....The mother daughter duo were in each other's embrace...Guddan was feeling an unknown pleasure of her motherhood while Choti was hugging her mother as if she wouldn't let her go anywhere...
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Just then,Akshat and Daadi with Revti and Durga came there...They got emotional witnessing the scene in front of them...Akshat was emotional but he thought practically...He decided to take Choti with him away from Guddan,as he feared that it might affect Guddan's health...He didn't want Guddan to have any pressure on her mind as it was risky for her...He tried to take Choti but Daadi stopped him....
Daadi-(holding his hand)Nahin,Lalla!!!Mat rok aaj!!Aulad hi hai jo Maa ko uske wajood ka ehsaas dila sakti hai!!!Usse apna pyaar aur apnapan yaad dila sakti hai!!Tu alag hone mat de iss Maa beti ke jodi ko!!
Akshat-Par,Maa!!!Guddan ki tabiyat!!!Aap jaanti hai na use kuch yaad nahin hain!!!Yahaan tak ki yeh bhi nahin ki jo iss waqt uski god mein hai woh uski apni bacchi hai,uska khoon hain,uska ansh hain!!!!
Daadi-Phir bhi!!!Phir bhi dekh na!!Woh kaise use apne seene se lagaye huyi hai!!Uske saath khel rahi hai!!Bina kisi duvidha ke,bina kisi sawaal ke!!Jab jab woh tujhse takraayi,use duvidha huyi aur usne sawaal pucha!!Uske dil ka haal uski aankhon mein dikh raha tha saaf!!!Humare saath mili tab bhi wahi hua!!!Par aaj dekh!!!Apni bacchi se anjaan ho kar mil rahi hai!!Phir bhi na koi sawaal na koi confusion,kuch nahin!!Sirf pyaar aur apmaan hai uski aankhon mein!!!Jo ek Maa ke dil mein hota hai,apni aulad ke liye!!!Humari Gudiya hi hai jo apni Maa ko aur humari Guddan ko wapas humare paas laa sakti hai!!!
Akshat realised that Daadi was saying right...He looked at his lifelines and adored them...He was overwhelmed seeing them together...Daadi put her hand on his shoulder to give him the emotional strength...
Guddan kept Choti on the bed and kept playing with her...Suddenly she remembered something...She got blurry flashbacks of her moments spent with her daughter...Her pregnancy,her motherhood,her baby shower and all the moments related to her daughter began to flash in her mind with blurry images...Suddenly she began to feel heavy and she felt dizzy...She held her head and screamed as she couldn't bear the pain and stress anymore...Everyone was shocked seeing her in this condition...Akshat got panicked as this was what he feared the most to happen!!!He rushed to her and handled her...He consoled her...Revti also ran to her..
Akshat-(worried)Guddan!!Kya hua??Tum thik ho na??
Revti-Di!!!Kya hua???Aap thik ho na???
Guddan-(not looking at anyone)Humein ghar jaana hain!!!Humari tabiyat thik nahin lag rahi!!(on the verge of crying)Please hummein ghar jaana hai!!Humein nahin rehna yahaan!!!Please,Chutki!!!Ghar chal!!Humein thik nahin lag raha!!
Seeing her in this condition,Akshat signalled Revti to take her home as soon as possible..Revti nodded and took Guddan with her holding her hand...But Guddan was stopped...They didn't understand why Guddan was unable to move ahead...Then Guddan turned back...Others also looked at the same direction and were surprised...
Choti was holding Guddan's dupatta...She was pulling it and giggling looking at her..She was clutching her dupatta tightly as if she wouldn't permit her mother to leave her again!!!Akshat was on the verge of crying seeing his daughter craving for her mother's love and cursed his faith for showing him this day!!!Everyone was emotional witnessing this scenario...And Guddan!!!She was feeling so restless,so bad that she couldn't say anything!!!She was not in a state to handle herself!!She was crying!!
Akshat could feel Guddan's helplessness...With a heavy heart he went to Choti to convince her to leave Guddan...
Akshat-(controlling himself)Princess!!!Beta,unhein jaane do!!Woh yahaan nahi reh sakti!!Unhein apne ghar jaana hai na!!?(making her to leave her dupatta by holding her tiny hands which were not ready to leave Guddan)Chalo,baccha!!!Chodo!!Let her go!!Good girl ho na aap Papa ke!!Chalo hum bhi chalte hain!!Hmmm!!(taking her in his arms)
Everyone felt bad for Akshat and Guddan..Daadi couldn't see her children like that so she left the room...Choti was still not willing to leave her dupatta...Akshat made her leave Guddna unwillingly...Then he gestured Revti to take Guddan with her...Revti nodded and took Guddan with her...Guddan left the room,not before looking behind at Choti...Others too left the room leaving the father daughter duo alone....
Choti began to cry...She didn't want her mother to go away from her again...Akshat hugged her and tried to soothe her..
Akshat-(also crying)I am sorry,baby!!!Papa aapki Mumma ko nahin rok paaye!!I am really very sorry!!Main jaanta hoon aap Mumma ko miss karte ho and unke bina rehna kitna mushkil hai aapke liye!!Aur aaj jab woh aapke paas aayi toh aap unhein bilkul nahin jaane dena chahte the!!Papa bhi unhein aapse dur nahin jaane dena chahte the!!Par main kya karoon,baccha!!!I was helpless!!!I am sorry!!!Papa na aapse promise karte hain ki woh bahut jald Mumma ko aapke paas laayenge!!!Pakka promise!!!Please aap ro mat!!!Papa can't see you crying!!!Papa kabhi bhi aapko aur Mumma ko rota hua nahin dekh saktein!!!Aap dono Papa ki strength ho!!Agar aap ro doge toh Papa bhi royenge,beta!!!Please don't cry!!!
Listening to this,Choti immediately stopped crying as if she understood everything what her father said to her!!!Akshat smiled looking at his princess and kissed her forehead!!!He took her in his embrace and held her protectively....He made a promise to her daughter that he would soon get back her mother and his wife to them....
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