《Akshat Aur Guddan Ki Atrangi Kahaaniyaan》💕AKSHAN KE DIL KA TUKDA💕
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In the midnight,Durga took the baby along with her as Guddan was tired so she thought she will look after the baby..Guddan and Akshat were tensed but as soon as they saw the baby with Durga,they were relaxed..
Guddan-Durga Ji!! Aapko takleef uthane ki kya zaroorat thi!!!
Durga-Are ismein takleef kaisi,Saasu Maa!!!Kya woh sirf aapki beti hai!!Humari kuch nahin lagti!!Aur waise bhi iske saath jo bhi rehta hai sabka mann laga rehta hai!!Aur dekhiye toh!!Yeh Madam tab se masti kiye jaa rahi hain,kiye jaa rahi hain,ki rukne kaa naam hi nahin le rahi!!
Akshat-(caressing his daughter's forehead)Are bhai!!Kaise masti nahin karegi!!!Aapki Saas ki carbon copy jo thehri!!Hai na!!
Guddan-Aap bhi na!! Waise yeh baat toh hai!!Ki choti Guddan ko sirf badi Guddan hi sambhal sakti hai!!
The trio had a laugh...Just then someone rang the doorbell... Akshat went to open the door and saw that police was standing at the door with that couple who were made fake parents by Ganga...
The couple claimed that she is their daughter..Guddan got angry and Akshat got tensed..Ganga was happy thinking that the baby would go away from her parents..But Guddan wanted to conduct a DNA test.. Everyone got worried..The police agreed..Just then the fake cops arrived there but they were caught by Guddan and original police...But before they could take Ganga's name,Avinash turned off the lights and they eloped..Akshat and Guddan smelled some fishy..The original police said that DNA test would be conducted the next morning.. Everyone returned to the respective places..
The next morning, doctors along with cops came to take samples for DNA test.. Meanwhile,Ganga tried to tamper with the samples but got failed..After noticing something fishy in Ganga's activities,Guddan had a doubt...She started to spy on her..Akshat was worried for his Guddan as he didn't know how would she react when the reports will come..Guddan & Akshat decided to ensure that no tampering should be happen with the reports..They made sure that reports should be correct... Meanwhile Ganga tried to tamper with the reports but Revti and AJ spoilt her plan.So to protect herself from AJ's wrath, Ganga ran back to the house without being able to change the reports.. AJ and guddan tried to confirm their doubt because weather Ganga was at home or not because AJ was damn sure that his suspicion was correct and he had seen Ganga at the hospital..But to their disappointment Ganga had reached home earlier to save herself from AJ..
Later the report came and it showed that baby's DNA has a 100% match with Guddan's DNA.. Guddan was very happy because it was as per her expectation but AJ and other family members got surprised seeing the reports because they had thought that the baby is not AJ and Guddan's daughter and they had lied to Guddan.Though they were surprised but some where they also wanted the same to happen so they were also very happy.AJ was much relaxed seeing his Guddan happy and thanked Lord Krishna. He was very happy that now his princess won't go anywhere.. Ganga had tried to tamper with the test reports with the help of Avinash but Avinash realised his mistake and asked Ganga not to do such a blunder.He did not want his wife to go on the wrong path and he tried to convince Ganga to quit what she was doing.. But Ganga was so stubborn that she did not agree to him.So Avinash decided to leave her side...Ganga decided to manipulate Durga by showing her fake reports..She thought her plan was successful when Durga believed her and did according to Ganga's wish by handing over the baby to the fake parents..Ganga got happy..When Guddan didn't get the baby in her room she informed everyone and searched her everywhere..They came to parking lot..There she asked Durga..Durga told her everything..Guddan and AJ got furious at her..Durga got scared..Soon they both left to search her..Lakshmi confronted Durga and told her that the report was in favor of Guddan..Soon Ganga hatched another plan and handed over the baby to the fake parents secretly...Durga and Lakshmi confronted her...When they were about to call yhr police,Ganga tried to harm Lakshmi..Avinash came there and slapped her.Ganga decided to get more violent.. Guddan got panicked and Akshat tried to console her...They came to know at that instant that she was behind all the incidents that had happened till now..Guddan was crying vigorously and it was hard for AJ to console her as he himself was worried..They searched her everywhere...They got the hold of that fake couple...Akshat got furious and threatened them...They got scared and told them about Ganga..They were shocked..They reached home to confront Ganga...Just then Ganga arrived wearing white saree..She came inside and laughed like a maniac..She danced around Guddan....Everyone was shocked...Before anyone could confront her,the goons of Ganga arrived and kept everyone at gunpoint...Guddan was shocked and worried...
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Ganga-Ka hua,Guddaniya!!!Apni bacchi ko dhoondh rahi ho!!!Haaye!!Tumhare chehre ka toh rang hi udd gaya hai,hein!!!Saari nikhaar aur khushi toh gayab hi ho gayi!!!Yahi toh chahte the hum!!!Tumhara sukoon,tumhari khushi,tumhara chain... sab cheenna chahte the!!!!Humare thappad ka badla toh kabse lena chahte the!!!Par jab tumhari wajah se humne humara baccha khoya uss din se humne kasam khaali,ki tumhein sirf takleef nahin denge balki tumhein barbaad kardenge!!!Khoon ke aansoon rulayenge tumhe!!!Tumne humse humara baccha cheena tha na!!!Aaj dekho!!Humne tumse tumhara baccha cheen liya!!!Hisaab barabar!!
Are hum toh chahte the ki tum uski shakal bhi naa dekhpaao!!Par woh tumhari beti!!Bilkul sakht jaan nikli!!Jitna door bhejte rahe use utna hi woh tumhare kareeb aati rahi!!6 mahine beeta hi diye usne apni Maa Baap ke saath!!Par utne tak hi saath tha tumhara apni bacch ke saath!!!Ab se woh tumse bahut door chali jaayegi....
Everyone was shocked after listening what had Ganga done after the birth of the baby..Everyone was so angry...
Guddan-Humein humari bacchi wapas chahiye..Abhi isi waqt har haal mein..Kahaan hai humari beti????Batayiye!!!
Ganga-Itni asaani se nahin!!!Humein ek khel khelna hai!!!Agar usmein tum jeeti toh tumhein tumhari beti inaam mein milegi...Par agar hum jeetein toh tumhari beti ka sar(she signed to harm her)....
Akshat-(shouted)Ganga Bhabhi!!!!Khabardaar agar meri bacchi ko kuch bhi hua toh!!!Main aapki jaan...
The goons tried to harm him..Guddan got worried...
Ganga-Are chillayiye mat,Devar ji!!!Guddaniya,samjhao na apne pati ko!!!Beti toh door chali gayi tumse!!!Ab kahin apne pati ko bhi na kho do!!!Ab faisla tumhara!!!Apni beti ko kaise bachaogi!!!Waise humari maano toh bhul jaao use!!!Kyunki apni beti ko bachana tumse na ho paayega!!!!
She laughed at her victory...She went to her room..Guddan was in shock and broke down on the floor...AJ ran to her and took her in his arms...He tried to console Guddan who was crying vigorously...She was crying so badly that she was about to get unconscious..Akshat got worried and held her carefully...
Akshat-Guddan!!!Guddan calm down!!!Kuch nahin hoga humari bacchi ko!!!Hmmm!!!Woh bilkul sahi salamat humein mil jaayegi wapas!!!Please Jaan!!!Sambhalo khudko.....
He was crying himself...Everyone was crying...Avinash tried to console Akshat...He apologized to him..
Avinash-Mujhe maaf kar de,Chote!!!Maine bahut koshish ki Ganga ko rokne ki use samjhane ki par mujhe ho nahin paya!!!Main haar gaya,phir se!!Ek pati ke roop mein,ek bhai ke taur pe haar gaya!!!
Akshat-Abhi inn baaton ka koi faayda nahin,Bhaiya!!!Abhi humein sirf apni bacchi ko dhoondhna hai!!!Abhi main aur kisi baare mein baat nahin karna chahta!!!
Guddan went to her room and cried hysterically remembering their daughter..Akshat came there and consoled her...He promised her that he will bring their daughter back safely...Guddan composed herself and went to Ganga...Akshat followed her...
Ganga-Aao!!Aao!!Guddaniya!!Ka hua!!??Soch liya ki kaa karna hai!!Humein pata tha!!Tum geed geedake humare saamne apni beti ki jaan ki bheekh maangogi!!!Tumse na yeh khel khelna na ho paayega!!Na!!!Ttccchhhhh...
Guddan-Galat!!!Guddan apni bacchi ke liye kisi bhi hadh tak jaa sakti hai!!Hum yeh maut ka khel zaroor khelenge!!Humare Lord Krishna bhi humare saath hain!!!Woh humein raah dikhayenge!!Humein aapka challenge manzoor hai!!!Batayiye kya karna hai!!!
Everyone,even Ganga also,was shocked with Guddan's decision..Everyone thought that Guddan would give up and surrender to Ganga as now she is a mother..But Guddan proved them wrong and got back to her bold avatar...
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Ganga gave her the first challenge to make a perfect round shaped roti within 7 minutes..She told her that if she could make it successfully only then her daughter would be given milk to drink...Otherwise she will remain hungry..Everyone was shocked and got worried..The entire family knows that Guddan can't cook food..She won't be able to make a perfect round shaped roti..But Guddan decided to do so for the sake of her daughter..Although she was under confident,Akshat assured her saying that she can do everything..The family encouraged her...
Guddan went to the kitchen to make roti..She tried to make it perfectly but was failed..She cried..The next moment,she closed her eyes and prayed Lord Krishna to show her a way..Finally she recalled how Akshat had taught her to make a perfect round shaped roti..
One day,Guddan decided to cook dinner for everyone..She went to kitchen and tried to make rotis...She was successful in kneading atta..Then she began to make roti..But all her roti got spoiled one after another...In this way all the kneaded atta also was finished...She got sad and angry..So she decided to make it all over again...This time due to the experience of failure,she even could not knead atta perfectly..She decided to add more atta....Just then Akshat came to the kitchen..He was shocked witnessing the condition of the kitchen..
Akshat-Guddan!!!Yeh kya hai!!!Kya ksr rahi ho tum!!???
Guddan-(being irritated,was trying to take atta dabba from cupboard)Gilli danda khel rahein hain atta ke saath!!!Khelenge aap???Aayiye kheliye!!!
Akshat-Was that a joke!!??
Guddan-(still not looking at him)Nahin!!!Taana tha!!!Dikhayi nahi de raha aapko hum kya kar rahein hain!!!
Just then she took the atta container out of the cupboard but lost her balance..Due to which the atta container got opened and she fell on Akshat...Akshat held her,they fell on the ground and both of them were completely covered with atta all over their garments...Akshat glared at her and she whispered a sorry to him cutely...Soon they composed themselves and stood up...
Akshat-(cleaning the atta from his coat)Ho gaya kitchen ka kalyan!!!Waise aapne yahaan aane ki mehrbaani kyun ki!!???
At this Guddan started crying..Akshat got shocked and felt bad...He realised he should have not said that...
Akshat-(worriedly)Guddan!!!Kya hua!!!Tum ro kyun rahi ho!!!I am sorry!!!Mere kehne ka woh matlab nahin tha,Jaan!!!I am really sorry!!!Please rona band karo!!!Ro kyun rahi ho!!???
Guddan-(crying)Humse koi kaam thik se nahin hota!!Ek dhang ki roti tak nahin banayi jaati humse!!!(shows him the previous kneaded atta)Yeh dekhiye!!!Koshishi ki thi humne!!!(then showed him the cracked and burnt roti)Par koi faayda nahin hua!!!Koi roti jal gayi toh koi phat gayi!!!Aur gol roti toh iss janam mein naa ho paayega humse banana!!!
Akshat-Baby!!!Ismein rone waali kaunsi baat hai!!!Sirf ek roti hi toh hai!!
Guddan-Sirf ek roti!!!Aapke ke liye hogi yeh sirf ek roti!!Aapke liye toh roti banana baayein haath ka nahin,baayein ungli ka khel hai!!Par humare liye toh badi baat hai na!!!Ab kal ko jab Choti badi hogi aur agar woh humse kabhi kahegi ki hum uske liiya koi special dish banaye,toh hum kya kahenge usse!!Yehi ki,"Baccha!!!Aapki Mumma ko toh cooking aati hi nahin!!!"..
Akshat-(absent minded,sarcastically)Woh toh use ek na ek din pata chalna hi hai!!Usmein kaunsi nayi baat hai!!Ab uski Mumma se nahin ho pata toh....
Soon he realised what he said and saw that his Sherni was glaring at her...He bit his tongue..He ignored her eye contact...
Guddan-Aur phir jab woh humse puchegi ki"Mumma!!!Mere friends ki mummas toh khaana bana sakti hain!!Phir aap kyun nahin!!"...Toh phir kya jawaab denge hum use!!??
Akshat-Tumhein kaise pata ki uski friends ki mummas ko bhi khaana banana aata hoga!!???Hmmmm!!!Woh agar tumhari tarah hui toh 🤨!!!
Guddan-Haaan!!!Toh kya hua!!!Humein toh aana chahiye na!!!Kisi aur ka humein kya pata!!!Hum toh apni beti ko niraash nahin kar saktein na!!!
(Looked at him in pleading eyes)Aap please humein sikha dijiye na!!!Hum jaante hain khaana banane ke maamle mein hum kamzor hai par kam se kam roti banana sikha dijiye na please!!!Please please hum pukka aapko niraash nahin karenge!!Poore mann se sikhenge!!I promise!!Please sikha dijiye na!!!Please please please!!!Apni princess ke liye sikha dijiye na please!!!
Guddan was requesting like a child..Akshat went aww at her cuteness..He agreed...
Akshat-Accha theek hai!!Aaj main tumhein roti banana sikhaunga lekin...
Guddan-Lekin!!!Lekin kya???
Akshat-(being naughty)Itni asaani se nahin!!Ab mujhe bhi toh badle mein kuch chahiye bhai!!Ab Papa ko Mumma se ek kissie chahiye!!Abhi ke abhi!!!(He stood showing his cheek,putting his one hand on his waist and another on the kitchen slab)..
Guddan glared at him..She decided to play with him..
Guddan-Thik hai phir!!Aap khade rahiye yahaan!!Apne gaal dikhakar,khayali pulao pakaate hue!!Roti banana humein bahuen bhi sikha lengi!!Thik hai!!Hum chalte hain!!
Akshat-(tensed)Are!!!Nahin nahin!!Baby!!Main toh mazaak kar raha tha!!Chalo na!!Main sikhata hoon na roti banana!!Come come!!!
Guddan-Good boy!!!Koi humein chichori keh raha tha,nahin!!!!Agli baar se hain na,apna yeh chichorapan kamre mein chodkar aayiyega!!!
Akshat-(teasing)Haww!!Kaisi baatein kar rahi ho!!!Kamre mein toh choti hogi!!Main kamre mein uske saamne kaise.....Phir bhi agar tum keh rahi ho toh thik hai😉!!!
Guddan nodded her head in disbelief..She hit him on his chest...They started making roti...Guddan was still unable to make a perfect roti though she was trying it with complete dedication...
Akshat-Jaan!!Don't be upset!!Ek din mein koi nahin sikh sakta,main khud bhi nahin!!!Phir bhi agar tum jhat se gol roti banana chahti ho toh phir ek raasta hai!!
Guddan-(excitedly)Kya kya???Batayiye na please!!!
Akshat told her a trick..By using that trick she was able to make her first ever perfect round shaped roti..She was so so excited...She jumped on Akshat and hugged her...Akshat was too happy seeing her like this...
Guddan-Thank you thank you thank you so much!!!I love you,Jindal Sahab!!!Humnein finally apni pehli perfect roti banaliya,yeah!!!!
Akshat-Are,bas bas,Meri Badi waali bacchi!!!Haan!!Bana liya tumne!!Maine kaha tha na!!Meri Guddan se sab ho paayega!!Waise tum na kabhi kabhi confuse kar deti ho mujhe ki meri ek baby hai yaa do!!!(He pulled her cheeks)
They both laughed and hugged each other...
Guddan opened her eyes and there was determination on her face...She worked according to that..
On the other hand...
Everyone was worried for Guddan and Choti...Akshat was praying Lord to help his Guddan..
Ganga-Are khudko Maa kehti hai na yeh!!Are kaisi Maa!!!Jo ek gol roti nahin bana sakti,khaana nahii bana sakti woh bhala kaisi Maa!!!Apni bacchi ko waqt aane par khud se khaana banakar bhi nahin de sakti,dekho!!!
Akshat-Yeh aapko choti soch hai jo ek maa ki paribhaasha uske khaana banane aur ghar ke kaamkaaj sambhalne par nirbhar karti hai!!!Ek Maa hone ka matlab hota hai bacche ko pyaar dena,sahi parvarish dena,uske liye har hadd paar kar jaana,puri duniya se lad jaana aur use sahi galat ki sikh dena!!!Khair!!Yeh sab baatein aap nahin samajh paayengi!!!And waise bhi,main aapko explanation kyun de raha hoon!!Main jaanta hoon,Meri Guddan iss duniya ki sabse acchi Maa banegi!!!Aur usse sab ho paayega,bahut acche se!!!
Ganga-Are Devar ji!!Woh sab chodiye!!Iee dekhiye!!!Bas 1 minute bacha hai!!!Kahaan gayi iss duniya ki sabse aadarsh Maa jisse sab kuch ho paata hai!!Apni bacchi ko bhookha rakhna hai kya use!!!
Ganga started countdown...Everyone got more worried...
Ganga-Rehne dijiye!!Yeh toh pehli chunauti hi haar gayi!!Chalo bhai!!Phir saabit ho gaya,ki Guddan se na.....
"SAB HO PAAYEGA!!!"...
They turned around and saw Guddan was standing holding two perfect round shaped rotis on a plate...Ganga was hell shocked...She was startled...She couldn't believe to her eyes...Akshat was so happy..He felt relieved...He felt proud on his Guddan,once again!!!Everyone was surprised and at the same time they were happy and proud for Guddan...Guddan came to Ganga...Akshat kept admiring her...
Guddan-Yeh lijiye!!Pehla challenge pura hua!!Banali humne perfect gol roti..Ab aapki baari hai apna waada pura karne ki!!Humari beti ko bhukh lagi hogi!!Apne aadmi se kahiye use doodh pilaye!!
Ganga felt defeated..She unwillingly called her goon..
Guddan-(stopped her)Ek minute!!Aise nahin!!!Jis tarah humne aapke saamne challenge pura kiya,usi tarah aapko bhi apna waada humare aankhon ke saamne pura karna hoga!!!Video call kijiye!!
Ganga did so..Guddan couldn't control her tears seeing her daughter..Akshat gave her strength..They both were relieved seeing that their daughter is not hungry now...Soon the video call ended..
Ganga-Pehli jeet mein itna khush hone ki koi zaroorat na hai!!Abhi toh isse bhi bado badi chunautiyaan aayengi!!Unka saamna kaise karogi woh dekhna baaki hai!!Ab toh shuruaat hai!!Aage aage dekho hota hai kya!!
She went from their..Everyone was somewhere relieved seeing Choti safe..
In AkshAn room..
Guddan was sitting on the bed...She was holding that peacock feather and the pillow of Choti..Akshat came there..He sat near her and held her from her shoulders..
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