《Akshat Aur Guddan Ki Atrangi Kahaaniyaan》💞TERA MERA PYAAR💞
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Akshat was trying his best to woo both the father-daughter duo all these days..Bhushan had also started melting.. Kaushalya had forgiven him and Revti along with the Jindal Family,was helping Akshat...
One month had passed this way...One day,Daadi organized a Pooja for her family's well being..The Guptas also came there...Saraswati had not changed yet..So she had planned to harm Guddan..She had hired a sharp shooter to just to harm Guddan...The Pooja was held at a temple..After the Pooja was completed,Daadi asked Guddan and Akshat to distribute food among the poor hungry people..They did the same..Saraswati had signalled the sharp shooter..He was ready with his target to shoot Guddan..While distributing food,Akshat's eyes fell on him and he understood that he was aiming at Guddan..Just the moment when the shooter shot the bullet,Akshat pushed Guddan and came in front of her.. The bullet hit him.. Everyone was shocked.. Saraswati got disappointed that her plan got failed.. Kishore and Vardaan ran to catch the culprit...
Guddan-(screamed)Jindal Sahab!!!
Daadi-(screamed)Lalla!!!
Everyone ran to Akshat who was unconscious..
Guddan-(taking his head on her lap)Jindal Sahab!! Aankhe kholiye please!!Jindal Sahab!!Nahin!!Aapko kuch nahin ho sakta!! Aankhe kholiye na,please!!(crying)Koi doctor ko bulao jaldi se!!
Daadi-(crying)Hey Kanha!!Yeh kya ho gaya!!Lalla!! Aankhe khol mere bacchhe!!Kuch nahin hoga tujhe!! Aankhe khol,Beta!!
Bhushan called the doctor..They all went to home..Guddan was hell worried..Durga was consoling her while Lakshmi was consoling Daadi... Bhushan was worried for his son and he couldn't see his daughter in so much pain..
Guddan-Kya hua,Doctor!!??Sab theek hai na???Kuch nahin hua hai na unhein???Woh bilkul theek hai na!!???
Doctor-Ghabrane waali koi baat nahin hai,Mrs.Jindal!!He is out of danger..Thank God,goli bas chunke nikal gayi!! Isliye pareshan hone waali koi baat nahin hai!!Maine dawaai de di hai!!Unhein thodi der mein hosh aa jayega!!
Everyone sighed in relief..Guddan thanked him and Lakshmi led him to outside..
Daadi-(caressing his head) Bhagwan ka laakh laakh shukar hai!!Mera Lalla sahi salamat hai!!Gudiya,tu fikar mat kar,Beta!!Kuch nahin hua hai use!!Sab theek hai!!Hmm!!
Everyone left the room to let him rest..Guddan sat beside him holding his hand..She was kissing his hands numerous times..
In the evening,Akshat got consciousness..He looked at his surroundings and found his lady love sitting near him,who had fallen asleep while taking care of him,putting her head on the on his forehead..He smiled looking at her..He tried to sit straight but he felt pain on his shoulder as it was injured... Hearing his painful voice,Guddan woke up and found hin awake..
Guddan-Are are!!Yeh kya kar rahein hain aap!!Aaram se!!
She arranged the pillows for him so that he could sit comfortably..Akshat looked at her face..He could figure out how badly she would have cried!!He could feel her pain as he was also scared for her when she had met that accident..
Akshat-Tum theek ho???
Guddan-Goli aapko lagi hai!!Humein nahin!!
Akshat-Baat toh ek hi hai na!!Goli mujhe lage ta tumhein,jaan toh dono ki jaayegi!!
Guddan-Agar yeh baat jaante thein,toh saamne kyun aayein!!??Tab yeh baat yaad nahin aayi!!!
Akshat-Kya karoon!!Tumhein kuch hone kaise de sakta tha!!Jaan basto hai tummein meri!!Agar tumhein bachate bachate main mar bhi jaaoon toh..
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Before he could complete his sentence,Guddan covered her mouth with her hand..
Guddan-(crying) Khabardar!!!Agar aainda aisa bolna toh door ki baat aisa socha bhi toh!!Kya samajhtein hain aap khudko!! Superman!! Chaar saal pehle bhi humein samajh nahin paayein aur aaj bhi nahin!!Are humne kehdiya ki hum aapse pyaar nahin karte aur aapne maan bhi liya!!Jaan basti hai humari aap mein!!Aapko kuch ho gaya toh hum bhi mar jayenge!!Bahut pyaar kartein hain hum aapse!!Nahin jee saktein aapke bina!! Shikayatein hain,bahut hain!!Par pyaar usse bhi zyaada hai!!Pata hai hum kitna darr gayein thein!!Ek baar bhi humare baare mein nahin socha aapne!!Are humari chodiye!!Ek baar ke liye bhi iss parivaar ke baare mein nahin socha!!Maa ke baare mein nahin socha!!Agar aapko kuch ho jaata toh woh kaise jeeti!!Bete aur bahuon ka kya haal hota!!! Kisike baare mein nahin socha aapne!!Agar aapko khodete toh!!
Akshat couldn't see her crying and pulled her into a tight hug...Guddan hugged him tightly and released her pain in his embrace..They remained like this for a long time..They were feeling each other's warmth after a long time...They were craving for this peace from a long time...
Just then,Bhushan and Kaushalya came there...AkshAn composed themselves..
Bhushan-(folding his hands)Pata nahin,Beta!!Kis tarah se shukriyaada karoon aur kaise maafi maangoon!! Shukriya meri beti ki jaan bachane ke liye aur maafi aapke pyaar par bharosa na karne ke liye!!
Akshat-Papa!!Yeh aap kya keh rahein hain!!Aise maafi maang kar shukriyaada kar ke mujhe sharminda mat kijiye please!!Aapne kuch galat nahin kiya!!Ek Pita hone ke naate apna farz nibhaya!!Apni beti ke bhavishya ke liye aap pareshan the aur uss naate aapka mujh par bharosa na karna bikul jayez hai!!Aur rahi baat Guddan ki jaan bachane ki,toh yeh toh mera farz tha!!Pyaar karta hoon main usse!!Pati hoon uska!!Uski suraksha mera farz hai!!Bhala kaise use kuch hone deta main!!
Bhushan-Aaj mujhe phir se yaqeen ho gaya!!Aap aur Guddan ek dusre ke liye hi bane hain!!Tum donoka saath zindagi bhar ka hai!!Aaj main bhi phir se aapko apne Damaad ke roop mein sweekar karta hoon!!Guddan Beta!!Tu bhi saare gile shikwen bhul kar apni zindagi ki nayi shuruaat kar!! Bhagwan tum dono ki jodi humesha banaye rakehin!!Ek dusre ke pyaar ko dusra mauka do aur bina kisi rukavat ke nayi zindagi ki shuruaat karo,bacchhon!!Damaad Ji!!Main phir se apni bacchi ko aapke haath saunpta hoon!!Ab meri beti phir se aapki zimmedari hai!!Uska khayal rakhiyega!!Aur mujhse vaada kijiye ki kabhi uska haath nahin chodenge!!Uska bharosa aur dil dobara nahin todenge!!Us par bharosa karenge aur usse humesha samjhenge!!Ek Pita ko iske alawa juch nahin chahiye!!
Akshat-Main aapse waada karta hoon,Papa!!Iss baar aapko kabhi niraash nahin karoonga!!!Aapse waada karta hoon,Guddan ko phir kabhi bhi uss takleef se guzarne nahin dunga!!Aap mujh par bharosa kar saktein hain,Papa!!Main aapko shikayat ka mauka nahin doonga!!
Everyone was happy with this decision of Bhushan..Guddan also agreed to forgive Akshat and to give him another chance..Guddan took care of Akshat till he fully recovered from his injury..Soon everything was fine and they decided to get married once again..Soon the day of wedding arrived.. Everyone was happy...
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Akshat was getting ready in his room..Daadi was helping him but he noticed that he was tensed..
Daadi-Kya hua,Lalla!!??Itna pareshaan kyun hai tu!!??Tujhe aaj teri Guddan wapas milne waali hai!! Tujhe toh khush hona chahiye!!
Akshat-Maa!!Main khush hoon!!Par ek ajeeb sa darr lag raha hai!!Kahin phir se kuch galat toh nahin hoga na!!Phir se main usse kabhi kho toh nahin dunga na!!Sab humesha ke liye theek ho jayega na!!Maa,main usse khokar mar jaunga!! Kuch galat nahin hoga na!!??
Daadi-Beta!!Aisa kuch nahin hoga!!Yeh jo itni musibaton ke baad tum dono wapas ek ho rahe ho na,isiliye tujhe yeh fikar sata rahi hai!!Par tu hi bata!!Agar tum dono ka alag hona likha hota,toh tum dono chaar saal baad phir kyun milte!!Kyun kismat tumhein aamne saamne laake khada karti!!Yeh sab Kanha ki leela hai!!Woh sacche pyaar karne waalon ki pareeksha lete hain!!Aur har baar ki tarah iss baar bhi,tum dono iss pareeksha mein safal hue ho!!Tum dono ko kabhi koi alag nahin kar sakta,Beta!!Sab theel ho gaya hai!!
Akshat hugged his mother and was feeling very relaxed listening to her talks..
Meanwhile,Guddan was getting ready..She was also tensed...She shared her feelings with her mother..
Guddan-(holding Kaushalya's hands)Maa!!Iss baar kuch galat toh nahin hoga na!!Hum aur Jindal Sahab humesha ke liye ek ho jayenge na!!Hum phir se unhein kho toh nahin denge na!!Maa,agar iss baar kuch galat ho gaya toh hum khudko sambhal nahin payenge!!Humein bahut darr lag raha hai!!Maa,unse door rehkar hum mar...
Kaushalya-(preventing her from saying further)Ssshh!!!Pagal yeh kya!!Itne shubh avasar par aise anaab shanaab batein kaun karta hai,haan!!Beta!!Aisa kuch nahin hoga!!Sab theek ho gaya hai!!Tum dono ko koi alag nahin kar sakta!!Tum dono ka pyaar phir jeet gaya hai aur humesha jeetta rehega!!Tumhare pyaar ko bhagwan ka ashirvad hai,beta!!Kismat bhi tumhare saath hai!!Agar na hoti toh kya wapas tum dono milte ek dusre se!!Nahin na!!Toh phir yeh ghabrana chod de aur apni zindagi ki nayi shuruaat kar bina kisi darr ke!!
She hugged her to soothe her..Guddan felt relaxed listening to her mother's assuring talks...
They both came downstairs and got mesmerized seeing each other..They exchanged the garlands..Bhushan and Kaushalya did the Kanyaadaan of Guddan... Durga did there gathbandhan..Akshat and Guddan stood for the pheras..
Akshat-Ek minute!!
Guddan-Kya hua!!??
Akshat-Hum saat vachan nahin le saktein!!
Everyone was shocked hearing this..Before anyone could confront him,Guddan understood and came to his rescue..
Guddan-Sahi kaha aapne!!Hum saat vachan nahin le saktein!!Kyunki do vachan hum le chuke hain!!Ab hum paanch vachan lenge!!
Akshat smiled at his wife's intelligence.. Everyone sighed in relief...
First two pheras were completed..From the third phera,they began to take the vows...
"Main agnee ko sakshi maankar vachan deta hoon!!Ki main har kadam pe tumhara saath doonga!!Tumhein kabhi akela nahin chodonga!!"
"Hum agnee ko sakshee maankar vachan dete hain!!Hum humesha har sukh mein aapke peeche,dukh mein aapke aage aur har musibat mein aapke saath khade rahenge!!"
"Main agnee ko sakshee maankar vachan deta hoon!!Har zimmedari jitni tumhari hogi,utni meri bhi hogi!!Humari grihasthi hum milkar sambhalenge!!Na tum zyaada,na main kam!!"
"Hum agnee ko sakshee maankar vachan dete hain!!Yeh ghar aur aapko phir se usi tarah sambhalenge jis tarah pehle sambhalte thein!!Kabhi kisi ko shikayat karne ka mauka nahin denge!!"
"Main agnee ko sakshee maankar vachan deta hoon!!Humesha tumhare kaam ki kadar karoonga!!Jitna zaroori mere liye mera kaam hoga,utna zaroori tumhara kaam bhi hoga!!Kabhi tumhein tumhare kaam ke saath samjhauta karne nahin doonga!!"
"Hum agnee ko sakshee maankar vachan dete hain!!Jis waqt jiska kaam zaroori hoga,tab woh hoga!!Kabhi zidd nahin karenge ki humara kaam pehle yaa kaam baad mein!!'
"Main agnee ko sakshee maankar vachan deta hoon!!Har musibat mein tumhari dhaal bankar tumhari raksha karoonga!!Tumhare sukh dukh ki saari zimmedari ab se meri!!"
"Hum agnee ko sakshee maankar vachan dete hain!!Halaat chahein jaise bhi ho,kabhi aapko akela nahin chodenge!!Aapki kamzori nahin,aapki taqat banenge!!"
"Main agnee ko sakshee maankar vachan deta hoon!!Humesha tumse pyaar karoonga!!Humesha tunhari izzat karoonga!!Tumhare parivaar ko apna maanoonga!!Har rishtey ki kadar karoonga aur har farz ada karoonga!!"
"Hum agnee ko sakshee maankar vachan dete hain!!Aapse humesha pyaar karenge!!Aapke parivaar ko apne se bhi saga maanenge!!Iss ghar ke har sadasya ko humesha pyaar aur izzat denge!!Kabhi iss ghar se khushiyon ko jaane nahin denge!!"
The pheras were completed with their vows..Akshat made her wear Managalsutra.. He filled her forehead with the vermilion...The wedding was completed..They took their elders blessings...After completing every ritual,they went to their room....
Guddan was removing her jewellery...Akshat came and back hugged her...Guddan got goosebumps feeling his touch..They got romantic..
Guddan-Jindal Sahab!!Yeh...aap...kya kar... rahein hain!!
Akshat-Wahi jo tum mehsoos kar rahi ho!!
Guddan ran from there to the balcony..Akshat went to her and made her turn towards him..
Akshat-Aaj mujhe mat roko Guddan!!Itne dino baad hum phir ek huein hain!!Finally jis din kar humein chaar saalon se intezaar tha,woh aaj aa hi gaya hai!!Mujhe dubne do tumhare pyaar mein!!I want to live this moment!!Aaj koi kuch nahin kahega!!Tum bhi khamosh aur main bhi khamosh!!
They were lost in each other...Akshat carried her in his arms and took her to their bed...They spent the beautiful night in each other's embrace...They loved each other...They talked to each other...They shared their emotions with each other...They felt the peace for which they were craving for..
Hello friends!!Here is my latest update!!Sorry for the late update!!I hope you all will like this!! Please vote and comment!! Please keep sharing your ideas!!!Mere ideas ka pitara khatam hone ko hai!!!Naye ideas dijiye please please!!!Post leap ideas dijiye please!!!Show ke plot ke related hi dijiyega please because I am good at that only!!!Show ke plot ke alawa main nahin likh paaoongi acche se!!! Please please apne ideas dijiye!!Akshat ke bhaiya bhabhi ki entry ke baad aap sabhi ke dimaag mein jo jo assumptions chal rahein hain future track ko lekar,woh sab share kijiye please please!!! Avinash and Ganga ke kirdaar ke baare mein aapke mind mein jo bhi ideas aa rahein hain share kijiye!! Stay safe and stay at home!!!Thank you so much😊...
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