《Akshat Aur Guddan Ki Atrangi Kahaaniyaan》😉JINDAL SAHAB KI KOSHISH🤗
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Next Morning,Guddan woke up and found her bed tea in front of her.. She became happy..Soon,she found a letter beside the cup..She picked it and read-
"Main tumhe phir se saar vachan dena chahta hoon,Guddan!!Aur iss baar,mar jaaunga par ye vachan tootne nahin doonga!!Mera pehla vachan,sounds funny!!Par yes!!Mera pehla vachan yeh hai ki,main har subah tumhare liye bed tea banaunga!!You like it na!!"
Guddan smiled reading the letter... But she had not forgiven him yet..She got freshen up and came downstairs for breakfast... She greeted everyone and also Akshat..Akshat smiled at her..
Daadi-Kishore!!Mujhe juice de zara!!
Everyone noticed that Daadi was still angry with Akshat as the jug of juice was near to Akshat..Guddan noticed this and felt bad for Akshat as he was clearly sad..
Later,after breakfast,Daadi was in her room,reading the scriptures..Guddan came there..
Guddan-Maa!!
Daadi-Are Guddan!!Aa na,Beta!!Wahaan kyun khadi hai!!Andar aa...
Guddan came inside and sat near Daadi..
Guddan-Maa!!Aap humse pyaar karti hain na!!
Daadi-Pagli!!!Yeh kaisa sawaal hai???
Guddan-Pehle kahiye!!Haan ya naa!!
Daadi-Zaroor karti hoon,Gudiya!!
Guddan-Apni beti ki ek baat maanengi please!???
Daadi-Bol,Beta!!Kya chahiye tujhe!!??
Guddan-Jindal Sahab ko maaf kardijiye please!!
Daadi's facial expressions changed into disagreement.. Guddan felt it..
Guddan-(holding her hands)Maa!!Hum jaantein hain aap unse naraaz hain!!Unhone jo kiya woh galat tha!!Apne saath galat kiya!!Par,Maa!!Aap jaanti hain na unhone sirf humse naraazgi rakhi,kabhi humse nafrat nahin ki!!Hum jaantein hain,unhone jo kiya hai uske liye hum unhein asaani se maaf kar payenge!!Par pyaar toh hum aaj bhi unse kartein hain na!!Isilye hum unhein takleef mein nahin dekh saktein!!(Daadi looked at her confused)Haan,Maa!!Hum itna toh jaantein hi hain ki woh aapse iss duniya mein sabse zyaada pyaar kartein hain!!Kabhi jaanbujh kar aapko dard nahin denge!!!Unhein acche Pati ka certificate hum phir kab de payenge yeh toh hum nahin jaantein!!Par Best Bete ka certificate,unse iss duniya mein koi nahin cheen sakta!!Woh aapse bahut pyaar kartein hain aur aapki bahut izzat kartein hain!!Aap unse kuch ghante hue baat kya nahin kar rahi,woh kitne mayus ho gayein hain!!Bahut udaas ho gayein hain woh!!Maa,aap unki sabse badi taqat hain!!Aapke bina woh bikul nahin reh saktein!Aap unka sab kuch hain!!Aapki ek hasi ke liye woh kuch bhi kar saktein hain!!Aur aapke ek aansoo ke liye khud ko tabah kar saktein hain!! Please,Maa!!Apne Lalla ko maaf kar dijiye na!!Iss tarah hum unhein toota hua nahin dekh saktein hain!!Honge woh duniya k liye Khadoos aur strict Akshat Jindal,Par apni maa ke liye woh aaj bhi ek chote bacche hain jo apni maa ke god mein sar rakh kar rona chahta hai,apne dil ki baatein karna chahta hain,sukoon pana chahta hai!! Please,Maa!!Ek baar humari baat ke baare mein sochiyega please!!
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Saying this,Guddan left from there,leaving a great impact on Daadi!!She was feeling bad for her son...How could she punish her Lalla!!How she couldn't see the pain of her son that he was going through because his mother was not talking to him!!She cried cursing herself!!
Akshat was in his studyroom..He was doing some work..Just then,he felt a known touch of soft hands on his head,caressing him lovingly!!He looked back and found his Maa there...
Akshat-Maa!!
Daadi-Mujhe maaf kardey,Beta!!Maine tujhe takleef de di na!!Apne bacche se kaise muhn pher liya maine!!Bahut dil dukhaya na maine tera!!
Akshat-Maa!!Yeh aap kya keh rahi hain!!Aisa kuch bhi nahin hai!! Please maafi maang kar mujhe sharminda mat kijiye please!!Baithiye aap yahaan!!Aisa kyun keh rahi hain aap!!
Daadi-Haan beta!!Maine anjaane mein sahi par tera dil tod diya na!!Bacche, main kya karti!!Main bahut pyaar karti hoon tujhse!!Maa hoon teri!!Tujhe takleef mein nahin dekh sakti!!Tujhe tere khud ke barbaadi ki wajah banta hua dekhkar mujhe tujhse shikayat ho gayi aur main gussa ho gayi tujhse!!Kyunki mujhe mere samajhdaar Lalla se yeh ummeed nahin thi!!Aur Guddan ka dard bhi mujhse dekha nahin gaya!!Jitna mujhe tu pyaara hai utni hi Guddan bhi pyaari hai!!Agar tu mera beta hai,toh woh meri beti hai!! Bhala kaunsi Maa apni bacchi ko dard mein dekh sakti hai!! Isliye kuch palon ke liye shayad main bhul gayi ki main teri bhi Maa hoon!!Bas mujhe uska dard dikha!!Mujhe maaf....
Akshat-Maa!!Pagal ho gayi hain kya aap!!Yeh kaisi ajeeb baatein kar rahi hain aap!!Aapka mujhse naraaz hona bilkul jayez tha,Maa!!Aapka haq hai mujhse gussa hone ka!!Maa main jaanta hoon ki aap mujhse aur Guddan se kitna pyaar karti hain!!Maa,mujhe toh sabse zyaada khushi hain iss baat ki,ki aap Guddan ke haq ke liye,uske hisse ki khushi ke liye mere khilaaf jaa sakti hain!!Chaar saal pehle bhi jab maine apne pyaar ka saath choddiya,uspar bharosa nahin kiya,tab aapne uska saath diya!!!Uspar poora bharosa dikhaya!!I am proud of you,Maa!!Aapne Meri Guddan ka tab saath diya jab usse aapki sabse zyaada zaroorat thi!!Maa,jitna pyaar main aapse karta hoon,utna hi pyaar Guddan bhi aapse karti hai!!Jab maine uska saath chod diya toh woh kamzor padgayi!!Par agar aapne uska saath choddiya hota toh woh toot jaati!!Mujhe garv hai aapke aur Guddan ke rishtey par!!Koi nahin kahega ki woh aapki bahu hai,woh toh aapki beti hai!!In fact mujhe toh apni do bahuon par bhi garv haiUnhone apni Saas ka saath diya,bina kisi kaifiyat ke!!Unhone apni Saas par puri tarah se vishwas kiya!!Sach mein,Maa!!!Main humesha chahta tha ki Meri Guddan ko bhi iss ghar mein woh darja mile,itna zyaada pyaar aur izzat mile jiski woh haqdaar hai!!Aur usne apne dum par woh darja aur izzat haasil kar hi di!!Uske liye poora parivaar apni jaan tak dene ko taiyaar ho gaya!!Chaar saal pehle kuch toh accha hua!!Ek din tha jab main uske saath tha aur poora parivaar uske khilaaf khada tha!! Phir yeh din aa hi gaya,jab bhale hi main uske saath na tha,par poore parivaar ne uska saath diya!!Aap sab uski taqat bangayein,yahaan tak Revti bhi badal gayi!!Par ab bas!!Main aur galati nahin karoonga!!Apni Guddan ka pyaar aur bharosa wapas paakar rahoonga!!Chahe uske liye mujhe kuch bhi kyun na karna pade!!
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Akshat went to his room after finishing his work in studyroom...He wanted to have black coffee as he was tired..He went to kitchen to prepare his coffee...There he saw his coffee was already there,prepared!!He went there and found a letter...He read it-
"Humein nahin pata ki hum aapko kab maaf kar payenge!!Par phir bhi!!Agar humne aapko kabhi maaf kardiya aur phirse aapke saath apni zindagi ki nayi shuruaat ki,toh humare saat vachan bhi taiyaar rehne chahiye na!!Toh humara pehla vachan hai,ki hum roz aapke liye aapki black coffee banakar rakhenge!!Acchi banayenge!!Fikar mat kijiye!!"
Akshat smiled after reading the letter..His hope increased and he decided to put more efforts to woo his wife..He happily drank the coffee,though it was more bitter!!He drank it without any hesitation as it was made by his love...
Guddan had made kheer for everyone in lunch..But it was more sweet and this made Guddan sad as she wasn't able to feed tasty kheer to everyone...She went to kitchen to drink water..There she found a letter..It was-
"Toh kya hua agar aaj kheer acchi nahin bani!!Ek din zaroor zaaykedaar khana banakar sabko khilagi tum!!Mera dusra vachan hai ki,main khud tumhein khaana banana sikhaunga aur tum mujhse bhi behtar khaana banaogi,yeh mera vishwas hai!!Don't be sad!!"
Guddan smiled looking at the chit..She decided to reciprocate his chit with her second vow..Later,at night when Akshat went to sleep he found a glass of his favorite milkshake near his bed..He got happy..His eyes fell on the chit present there..He read-
"Thank You!!Humein khana banana sikhane ki zimmedari lene ki!! Ummeed kartein hain ki aapke yeh vachan ek din poora karne ka mauka aapko zaroor milega!! Toh hum bhi abhi se apne dusre vachan ko kehdete hain!!Humara dusra vachan yeh hai ki,jab bhi aap humein khaana banana sikhayenge,hum poori shiddat ke saath sikhenge aur aapki har bar har instruction ko dhyaan se maanka khaana banane ki koshish karenge!!Aapko niraash nahin hone denge!!Iss milkshake se aapko acchi neend aayegi!!Good Night!!"
Akshat felt happy and he hoped that one day he would be successful in his mission for sure..He drank the milkshake and went to have a peaceful sleep..
Some days passed in this way..Akshat was putting all the efforts to woo Guddan and win back her trust and love...Guddan was not showing that he was influencing her,but in her heart she was melting slowly seeing his effort..Daadi was happy seeing this..Sons and bahus were also helping Akshat..
Finally,one day Akshat decided to apologize to Bhushan for his deeds...He went to Gupta House.. Everyone was shocked to see him..
Hello friends!!Here is my latest update!!Many of you wanted to see Akshat's efforts to win back Guddan.. So I wrote this!!!It would be a two-shots story!!I hope you all will like this!! Please vote and comment!!Do share your ideas,please please!!Stay safe and stay at home!! Thank you so much😊...
Regards.
Aradhana☺️..
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