《Akshat Aur Guddan Ki Atrangi Kahaaniyaan》💞SANG HOON TERE💞
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Guddan was at home..She was dusting her cupboard and cleaning that..Just then,she received a call from an unknown number..
Guddan-Hello!!
Person-Itni jaldi bhool gayi kya!!Not done!!Mumbai chod gayi toh kya Mumbai waalon ko hi bhool jaogi!!Aise kaise yaar!!
Guddan-Kaun???
Person-Come on!!Ab satao mat!!Aone aashiq ko koi kaise bhool sakta hai inti jaldi haan!!Woh bhi use jo tumhara deewana ho!!
Guddan(recognizing)-Tum!!!Tumhari himmat kaise hui humein call karne ki!!
Person-Thank God!! Finally!!Yaad aa hi gaya na!!That means tum bhi mujhe miss karti ho!!!Right!!!Yeah!!
Guddan-Bakwaas band karo apni aur chupchap phone rakho!!Dobara phone kiya toh humse boora koi nahin hoga,samjhe!!!
She cut the call..She sat on the bed with disgust..
Person-Phone kaatne se kya hoga,jaaneman!!Pahunch toh jaaunga hi tumhare paas!!Aakhir tumhara deewana jo thehra!!!
He laughed maniacally..His entire room was filled with Guddan's photos and posters...
Akshat returned from the restaurant at night..He back hugged Guddan..
Akshat-Kitna miss kartein hain aapko!!Kaam mein mann hi nahin lagta!!Aapko dekhe bina dil jo nahin bharta humara!!Kya karein aap hi batayiye!!!
Guddan-Hmmm
Akshat could figure out the dullness in her voice...He made her turn towards him and asked her..
Akshat-Kya hua???Itni pareshan kyun lag rahi ho???
Guddan-Nahin toh!!Kuch nahin hua ,Jindal Sahab!!
Akshat(cupping her face)-Beshaq hogi tum bahut badi superstar acting mein,par apne Jindal Sahab se jhooth bolna tumse kabhi na ho payega!! Tumahari aankhein padh sakta hoon main!!Batao!! Kya baat hai??
Guddan looked at him and hugged him..She thought for a while and then decided to tell him everything..
Guddan-Jindal Sahab!!Woh humein aapko kuch batana hai!!
Akshat-Hmm!!Batao na!!
Guddan-Nahin!!Baat bahut lambi hai!!Aap pehle fresh hokar khana kha lijiye,phir hum baat karenge!!Pakka!!
Akshat got freshen up and they had their dinner with the family..Then they went to the terrace and started the talk..
Akshat-Batao kya baat hai!!
Guddan started narrating everything..
FLASHBACK
It was then when Guddan settled in Mumbai with Revti..She struggled at first...After some months,she got many big breaks and became a successful actress due to her excellent performances and talent..At that time,Rohit,an actor and producer,had helped her a lot to pursue her career...He brought about many offers to her and gave her many platforms..Guddan was very grateful to him..But Revti found it fishy!!They were new to the city and even did not have a name fame of a well-established family also!!So why he was so interested in helping them!!!She was right... Actually Rohit was mesmerized with Guddan's beauty..He was lost in her.. Gradually he began to fal in love with her..
One day,he called Guddan and told her that he had very good offers for her..Guddan did not want to meet him after Revti had warned her,but she had not any other choice!!She went to meet him!!There he confessed his feelings for her and even expressed his desire to marry her!!He even got intimate with her and dared to propose her for casting couch by giving the greed of international limelight!!!Guddan fumed listening to this and slapped him hard...She left the place and warned him not to follow her again!!Rohit was devastated with her rejection and vowed to make her of him by hook or crook!!By the time,Guddan became a superstar and also an international figure!!But Rohit became her obsessive and psycho lover!!He was possessive of her!!He even troubled her many times,but he hid himself in any other place after getting the threatening of police...Even he injured himself after knowing that Guddan got married again to her husband,Akshat Jindal!!
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FLASHBACK ENDS..
He again started troubling her..
Akshat-Tumne yeh baat mujhe pehle kyun nahin batayi!???
Guddan-Humein laga tha ki hum Monbai chod kar chale aayein toh woh bhi bhul chuka hoga!!Humein kya pata tha ki woh ab bhi baaz nahin aaya hai!!
Akshat-Galati tumhari thi!!(Guddan looked at him,shocked)Haan!! Aur nahi toh kya!!Agar use pata hota ki tumhara Pati Akshat Jindal hai,toh uski majal nahin hoti tumhein pareshan karne ki!!Tumhein batana chahiye tha na!!
Guddan-Haha!!Very funny!!Poori industry ko pata hai ku hum shaadishooda hain!!(Akshat's eyes widened)Are!!Matlab personal reasons nahin pata kuch bhi kisiko!!Par sab jaante hain ki hum MasterChef Akshat Jindal ki Patni hain!!
Akshat-Khair!! Don't worry!!Ab main hoon na!!Main sab sambhaloonga!! Abhi sone chalo!!Raat bahut ho chuki hai na
!!! Let's go!!
Guddan-Hmm...
They went to their room to sleep..
Next Day...
Akshat was getting ready to go to the restaurant and Guddan was helping him..He left for the restaurant,not before hugging his wife... After sometimes,Guddan received a call from Rohit..She ignored this call many times but at last she had to pick the call...
Guddan-Tumhari problem kya hain haan!!Ek baar mein sidhi baat samajh mein nahin aa rahi hai kya!!!Just cut the call aur khabardar agar dobara phone kiya toh!!
Rohit-Are baap re!!Itna gussa!!Accha phone kaatne se pehle kuch dekh toh lo!!See!!
Guddan received two videos..In 1st video,two men were pointing guns at Akshat and Bhushan to kill them..Guddan got scared..In 2nd video,there was something that would ruin her and her family's reputation completely..She fumed..She called Rohit..
Guddan-Kya bakwaas hai yeh sab!!Yeh sab jhooth hai!!Chahte kya ho tum!!??? Himmat kaise hui tumhari humare Pati aur Papa ko nuksaan pahunchane ki koshish karne ki???
Rohit-Good!!Yeh hui na pate ki baat!!Toh ek kaam karo!!Mujhse na milne aa jao,sheher ke bahar jo steel factory hai na,wahaan jaldi se aa jao!!I promise!!Main videos delete kardoonga aur tumhare Pati aur Papa ko bhi chodoonga!!
He cut the call.. Without wasting a minute,Guddan took her car keys and ran out of the house..Bahus noticed this and also tried to call her but she couldn't listen to them..Bahus felt strange but ignored it and went to their respective work..
Guddan reached the factory and searched for Rohit..Just then,Rohit back hugged her and Guddan got a jerk..
Rohit-Are!!Main hoon,Darling!!Ghabra kyun rahi ho!! Aankhein taras gayi thi tumhe dekhne ko!!Bas khush ho gaya aaj!!Tumhein choon bhi liya!!Yesss!!Ab aur kya chahiye!!
Guddan-Bakwaas band karo apni aur chupchap phone karo apne aadmiyon ko!!Jo promise kiya hai woh nibhao...
Rohit-Are are!! Gussa kyun kar rahi ho,jaaneman!!Abhi karta hoon!!Dekho tumhare saamne karta hoon!!
He called his men and told them to back off..They also backed off and Rohit showed it to her in live video..Guddan felt relaxed..
Guddan-Abhi woh dusra video bhi delete karo!!Warna humse boora koi nahin hoga!!
She tried to snatch the phone but Rohit stopped her..
Rohit-Are!!Aise kaise Itni asaani se delete kardoon!!! Ek hi toh copy hai mere paas!!Ab apna kaam poora karane ke liye tumhe bhi toh kuch karna hoga na!!
Guddan-Kya karna hoga humein????
Rohit-Good girl!!!(pointing to somewhere)Woh dekho!!Agar apne parivaar ko bachana chahti ho toh phir mujhse shaadi karni hogi!!
Guddan-Dimaag kharab ho gaya hai tumhara!!!Hum aisa kabhi nahin karenge!!! Aisa soch bhi kaise sakte ho tum!!Agar humare Pati ko pata chalega na toh woh jaan le lenge tumhari!!!
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Rohit-Pata toh tab chalega na jab woh tumhara pata jaan payenge!!!
Guddan-Woh apni Guddan ko kahin se bhi dhoondh lenge!!Unhein Kisiki bhi madad ki zaroorat nahin hain!!!Woh dekho!!Woh toh aa bhi gayein!!
Rohit was shocked..At the moment he turned back,Guddan snatched his phone and ran away from there.. Rohit followed her.. Guddan hid herself behind a trunk and deleted the video immediately..Rohit found her.He saw that the video was deleted and he fumed in anger and grabbed her from her hair...
Rohit-Teri himmat kaise hui Rohit Singh se nipatne ki!!!Ab toh tujhe mujhse shaadi karni hi hogi!!!
Guddan bit his hand and ran away...Rohit followed her.. Guddan even tried to call Akshat but there was no network.. Meanwhile,she got hit with a steel and fell down..Her forehead started bleeding profusely and she felt dizzy...Rohit grabbed her from hair and dragged her to the mandap..
On the other hand,Akshat was feeling restless..So he returned home early.. He reached home and started searching Guddan but did not find her..He asked his bahus about the same..
Durga-Humnein Saasu Maa ko hadbadi mein kahin jaata hua dekha tha.. Humnein unhen awaaz bhi di par unhone suna nahin...
Akshat felt strange... Suddenly he got a call and immediately set out for the restaurant..The security guard of the restaurant had caught the same spy who was hired by Rohit to kill him....He told them everything..Akshat fumed in anger and tried to kill him but others stopped him..Akshat then without wasting a second set out to find Guddan..
Rohit tortured Guddan a lot.. Whenever Guddan tried to protest,he would slap her..He even tortured her by trying to strangle her in water,grabbing her hair and what not!!! He tied Guddan's hands...
Rohit-Kyun kar rahi thi yeh sab haan!!!Acche se maani hoti toh mujhe yeh sab nahin karna padta na,sweetheart!!!Mujhe bhi takleef hoti hai tumhein takleef mein dekhkar!!Par bas!!Ab aur nahin!!!Ab toh humarre beech koi nahin aayega!!!! Chalo!!
He dragged her to forcefully marry her...Guddan was so badly injured that she couldn't protest..He forcefully began to take pheras with her..
Akshat was worried for his Guddan..He was driving the car in full speed.
Akshat-Kahaan ho tum Guddan!!???Kaisi hogi!!! He bhagwan,Meri Guddan ki raksha karna!!!Tumhare Jindal Sahab tumhein kuch nahin hone denge!!!Main aa raha hoon,Guddan!!
Guddan fell to the ground still that psycho did not stop and dragged her for the pheras..The last phera was about to get completed,Akshat arrived there...Rohit was shocked to see him..Akshat felt a pain in his heart sseing his lady love in this vulnerable condition..He ran to her and hugged her..He tried to wake her up as she was unconscious.. Akshat's eyes fell on Rohit and he fumed in anger...He went to him...
Akshat-Teri himmat kaise hui Meri Guddan ko haath lagane ki!!!How dare you to harm her!!!Akshat Jindal ki Patni ko takleef dega tu!!!Meri Guddan ko dard dega!!!
He began to beat him black and blue....He beat him badly..Rohit started bleeding profusely but Akshat continued to beat him...He didn't care of Rohit's life...If police would have not reached on time.Akshat would have killed Rohit.. Police came and stopped Akshat and took Rohit with them...Akshat took Guddan in his arms and headed towards their home...
Everyone was worried for Guddan..Bahus were crying..Daadi was continuously praying to God for Guddan's well being...No one had eaten a single morsel of food...Just then Akshat arrived with an injured Guddan in his arms... Everyone ran to them...
Akshat placed Guddan on bed and Kishore called the doctor.. Doctor came and checked Guddan..
Doctor-Ghabrane waali koi baat nahin hai!!Bahut injuries ke wajah se yeh behosh ho gayi hain!!She is in a shock!!Maine davai de di hai kal subah tak inhein hosh aa jayega!!!Aap sabko bas inka khayal rakhna hoga!!Agar koi bhi zaroorat pade toh mujhe bula lijiyega!!Main chalta hoon...
Doctor left with Vardaan..Daadi sat near Guddan and caressed her hair...
Daadi-Yeh kya ho gaya hai Meri bacchhi ko!!!Uss haiwaan ne kya halat kardi hai Meri beti ki!!Hey Kanha!!Humesha Meri Guddan ko itni takleef kyun dete hain!!!
She kissed her forehead..Just then they heard a chaos..They all went downstairs.. Durga sat near Guddan..
Police had just arrived and media was also there....
Akshat-Kahiye,Inspector!!
Inspector-Mr.Jindal,hum Mrs.Jindal ki gawahi lene aayein hain!!Is she okay now???
Akshat-Ji nahin!!Use ab tak hosh nahin aaya hai!!Jab bhi use hosh ayega and she will feel better,I will inform you..
Inspector-Ji,theek hai phir!!
Journalists got started with their annoying questions...They began to accuse Guddan for trapping Rohit..They began to question about affair between Guddan and Rohit!!!The family got angry...
Akshat-Bas!!Bahut bol liya aapne!!Apni Patni ke khilaaf ek shabd nahin sunoonga main!!Agar Akshat Jindal ki dehleez par aap nahin khade hote toh ab tak dhakke maar ke bahar nakale jaa chuke hote!! Bakwaas band kijiye apni!!Meri Guddan ka character certificate nahin maanga hai aapse!!She is perfect and she is innocent...
Police also interfered and defend Guddan..They gave Media the proofs about Rohit's crime..Media was silent..
Akshat-Mil gaya aapko jawaab!!Ab baizzat nikal jaiye yaahaan se!!
He went to Guddan...He caressed her hair and kissed her forehead..He slept with her while taking care of her...
In the midnight,Guddan saw the nightmare of the incident and woke up with a jerk...She began to scream...
Akshat calmed her down..She was just calling Akshat..
Akshat-Guddan!!Calm down!! Everything is fine!!Main yahi hoon,see!!
Guddan saw him and hugged him tightly..She cried and Akshat consoled her..
Guddan-Hum bahut darr gayein the,Jindal Sahab!!Aap nahin aate toh...
Akshat-Ssshhhh!!!Ab sab theek hai!!Main hoon na!!Ab tumhe uss kaminey ki fikar karne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai,ok!!? Everything is fine!!
He cupped Guddan's face and kissed her forehead..He hugged her with assurance that he will always be with her,whatever the situation may be!!!They slept in each other's arms peacefully💕!!!
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