《Akshat Aur Guddan Ki Atrangi Kahaaniyaan》💕TUM DENA SAATH MERA💕
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It was a Saturday..The entire Jindal Family was having dinner together..They were chatting happily.. Suddenly,Akshat received a phone call..After hearing to the other side,he was shocked..He stood up with a jerk and the phone slipped from his hand.. Everybody was shocked looking at him..
Guddan-Kya hua Jindal Sahab??Sab theek toh hai na??
Daadi-Kya hua Lalla??
Akshat said while stammering-Restaurant sseee....phone aaya ttthaa... restaurant mein...aaaggg lag gayi hai...
Everyone was shocked to the core..
Kishore-Kya!!!
Vardaan-Yeh aap kya keh rahe hain Papa!!!Yeh kaise.....
Durga and Lakshmi handled them..
Akshat was about to fall but Guddan held him..
Guddan-Sambhaliye khudko please...
Saru went to bring water for them..
Daadi-Hey Kanha!!!Yeh kya ho gaya??? Kaise hua!!!
Then,immediately they all went to the restaurant...The scene shattered the..
Fire brigades were already there..All were trying their best to extinguish the fire.. Everything was finished..There were only ashes left...There were not ashes of things of restaurant but of Akshat's dreams,his hardwork...He could not bear anymore and left the place alone...Guddan tried to convince him to take her with him,but he didn't listen to her and left..
Daadi-Pata nahin kya guzar rahi hogi mere bacchhe par!!!Yeh sab uski mehnat aur uska sapna tha...Par sab khatam ho gaya!!She cried vigorously....Durga consoled her....
Guddan was also crying looking at the scenario in front of her..She left the place and went behind Akshat..
Guddan reached home..She found Akshat on terrace..He was crying vigorously...Revti also reached there..
Revti-Di!!Yeh kya....Maine news mein dekha!!Yeh sab kaise!!!
Guddan-Pata nahin Chutki!!Abhi humein sirf Jindal Sahab ko sambhalna hai!!Tu please zara paani lekar aa..
Revti-Haan abhi layi!!
Guddan went to Akshat...As soon as he saw her,he could not hold him and hugged her immediately..He cried a lot in her embrace....Guddan also reciprocated and hugged him back..She tried to soothe his pain and caressed his hair...
Akshat-Kyun hua yeh sab Guddan!!!Woh restaurant nahin,mera sapna tha..mera wajood,meri pehchaan,mera mandir tha!!!Mera sab kuch wohi restaurant tha!!!Din raat mehnat karke apne nashe ko apna pesha banaya tha maine!!Kamyaabi haasil ki thi!!!Sab khatam ho gaya,Guddan!!!Sab... khatam..ho gaya!!!
He cried hard!!He was hardly able to say anything...
Guddan-Kuch khatam nahin,hua hai Jindal Sahab!!
He looked at her,shocked!!
Guddan-Haan!!kuch khatam nahin hua hai!!Yeh toh dastak hai nayi shuruaat ki!!Aapne pichle 4 saalon mein humare jaane ke baax khudko kho diya tha!! Restaurant bhi aapke bina adhoora tha!!Toh yun samajh lijiye k,Lord Krishna ne na,ek raasta dikhadiya!!bhale hi dard ka,par ek wajah sab kuch phir se naye sire se,naye tareeke aur naye umang ke saath shuru karne ke liye,in a perfect way!!!Aur iss baar,aapki Guddan aapka acche se saath degi!!!Aapko kamzor padne nahin degi!!!Aapka poora saath denge wapas se restaurant ko khada karnw mein,woh bhi uske advanced version mein!!!
Akshat was happy listening to her talks!!!
Meanwhile,the other family members also reached there..
Daadi caressed Akshat and said-Haan Lalla!!Hum sab tera saath denge...
Durga,Laskhmi and Saru-Ji AJ!! Hum sab aapke saath hain!!
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Kishore-Don't worry Papa!!!Sab milkar sab theek karenge!!
Vardaan-Haan Papa!!In fact Rahul ka bhi phone aaya tha!! Woh bhi abroad se laut raha hai hum sabki madad karne!!Kal aa jayega!!
Revti-Don't worry,Jiju!!! Everything will be fine!!!
Akshat got motivated seeing his family supporting him strongly!!And specially finding His Guddan by his side,as a strong companion!!
He held her hand and said-Agra aap sabka saath hai na,toh yeh Akshat Jindal kuch bhi kar sakta hai!!!
Guddan smiled and said-Toh theek hai phir!!Kal se shuru karte hain!!!Mission Jindal Empire!!!
Everyone joined hands with her and smiled!!!
The next morning,Rahul reached Jindal Mansion and took his father's and Daadi's blessings..and of course,of his Guddan Maa's!!!Then they all set out for the restaurant..Revti also joined them..
They all began to clean the place where the restaurant was situated and cleaned the ashes and other things with the help of workers and machines.. This work was conducted under the guidance of Rahul..
The three bahus took the responsibility of ordering the new equipments for the restaurant and cleaning the inter region of the restaurant..
Kishore and Vardaan talked to the several businessmen and well known chefs for funds and greater ideas for cooking and tried to find the skilled men who can help them..Rahul also took the responsibility of their restaurant that was situated in US and established a connection between the US restaurant and Indore restaurant to speed up the progress..
And here Our MasterChef Akshat Jindal began to work on his cooking skills,with the help of his Lifeline,his Guddan..She helped him in cutting the vegetables,supplying ingredients and manymore..In this way,she also learned how to cook that is a great achievement for Our Guddan!!!And of course,ahem ahem!!!Their kitchen romance was used to be witnessed by the family members,who never wanted to disturb them!! Sometimes Guddan used to put atta on Akshat and sometimes Akshat used to put whipped cream on his wifey!!!They got to know each other more closely than before!!!
To cheer up Akshat and motivate him,Guddan also called up the children of their NGO..They also helped Akshat and he also spent time with them and used to relax with them..He was thankful to Guddan for these special moments..
Daadi used to advise all of them about their works and rectified them if necessary..
Revti helped her Jiju in his bakery dishes and the Jija-Saali duo used to tease Guddan a lot with their skills!!
In this way,4 months passed and their hardwork began to gain success!!
Akshat represented his dishes before the member of the board of restaurants and cooking management... As he was already a known chef and had a very good reputation,so as expected,his dishes impressed them a lot and they helped him in re-establishing his empire!!
At last,their harwork was successful and The Jindal Restaurant reappeared as a Great Jindal Empire!!! Completely in a new avatar and reinovated,advanced!!
Akshat was very happy and so was his family!!
To celebrate this success,the Sons decided to host a party..
The day of Party arrived.. Everything was well organized and it was a splendid party,indeed!!
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All the guests were there.. Everyone were busy in talking to each other and were praising the arrangements..Then,Akshat came to the stage..
Akshat-Ladies and Gentlemen!!May I have your attention please???
Everyone turned to him!!
Akshat-Jaisa ki aap sab jaante hain,pichle kuch mahine mere aur mere parivaar ke liye kitne mushkil the..I was completely devastated!!I thought nothing would be okay!!But then,My family stood by my side and supported me as my strength..Aaj main jo kuch bhi kar paaya hoon,jo kuch bhi ban paya hoon,mere parivaar ke liye..Mere beton,meri bahuon,Meri saali sahiba,Meri Maa aur khaas kar,Meri Guddan ki wajah se!!! Thank you so much all of you!!
Every family member was proud of him and showed their respective gratitude through their eyes..
Akshat-Aaj ek aur zaroori announcement karna chahta hoon main!!Puri family ki razamandi se maine ek faisla liya hai!!(looked at Guddan)Guddan,this is for you!!!Then he asked for the permission from his family through his eyes and they nodded yes!!
Guddan was confused..
Then Akshat called up his lawyer who came with some papers..The papers were of restaurant and property..
Akshat-Sab ki razamandi se maine yeh decide kiya hai ki Jindal Empire ki saari property aur Jindal Restaurant ki power of attorney main apni Patni,Mrs.Guddan Akshat Jindal ke naam karta hoon!!
Everyone was happy!!
Guddan was shocked and looked at her family for confirmation!!They nodded with smile on their faces!!
Guddan-Iski kya zaroorat thi,Jindal Sahab!!Hum iske layak nahin hain!!Yeh sab aapki mehnat ki kamaayi hai!!Aapka hai,aapka haq hai!!Yeh humara kaise ho sakta hai!!Nahin,please!!
Akshat-Jo mera hai,woh tumhara bhi toh hai,Guddan!!Aaj agar main wapas apne restaurant ko khada kar paya hoon,toh sirf aur sirf tumhare sahare ki wajah se!!Agar uss din tumne mera haath na thama hota,mujhe motivate na kiya hota,toh shayad main yeh sab kuch nahin kar paata!!Main toot gaya tha,Guddan!!Tumne mujhe joda,mujhe sambhala!!Mera hosla badhaya!!Yeh sab tumhari badaulat hai!!Tumhara yeh ehsaan main saat janmon mein nahin chuka sakta,Guddan!!Nahin chuka sakta!!Tum hi mera sab kuch ho Guddan!!I love you!!Tum nahin hoti toh pata nahin mera kya hota!!Tum guroor ho mera,Guddan!!!
Guddan-Par Jindal Sahab...
Daadi-Lalla sahi keh raha hai,meri bacchi!!Mere iss parivaar ki neev tu hai!!
Sons and Bahus also supported Daadi and AJ!!They were very grateful for their Guddan Maa and Saasu Maa respectively!!They were proud of her!!
Guddan was teary eyed seeing her family supporting like this!!
She hugged Akshat.. He also hugged her back!!
Then everyone applauded for them and the media requested them for a couple dance..
They began to dance..
Ve Maahi..ve
Oh Maahi..ve
Maahi menu chaddeyo na
Ke tere bin dil naiyo lagda
Jitthe vi tu chaleya ve
Ve Maahi tere picche picche chaleya..
Tu jee sakdi nahin
Main jee sakda nahin..
Koi dusri vi sharatan bhi
Rakheya nahin..
Kya tere baajunn mera.....
Saccheya mohabbatan ve
ho maahi kitthe hor naiyo milna...
Jitthe vi tu chaleya haan
Maahi mein tere picche picche chaleya...
Akshat intertwined his hands with Guddan's and swiftly danced with her..Guddan sang for him..She danced with him putting her arms around his neck...
Dil vich tere yaara menu rehne dey
Aankhon se yeh aankhaan wali gal kehn de...
Dhadkane dil di yeh tenu pehchaane
Tu mera hai main hoon teri Rab bhi yeh jaane...
He lifted her up and swinged her..They were lost in each other's eyes!!
Tu jee sakdi nahin
Main jee sakda nahin...
Tere bin yaara aur kitthe
Takda nahin..
Kya tere baajunn mera....
Rang tera chadheya ve
Ke hun koi rang naiyo chadheya...
Jitthe vi tu chaleya ve
Maahi main tere picche picche chaleya...
They were unknown to the happenings of their surroundings.They forgot each and everyone..Only remembered each other and remained in each other's embrace for a long time.They were completely lost in each other.Akshat was conveying his gratitude to Guddan through his eyes.Guddan was showering her love on her hubby..The entire environment was filled with love...
After the Party,at night,they were sitting on the terrace..
They were spending some quality time together..Guddan had rested her head on the shoulder of her Jindal Sahab.. Akshat was holding her hand close to his heart...
Akshat-Guddan,Ek baat bolun???
Guddan-Hmm.
Akshat-Ek tarah se accha hi hua ki restaurant uss din jalgaya..
Guddan opened her eyes and looked at him,shockingly!!
Akshat looked at her and said-Haan!!Kyinki woh restaurant maine Antra ke saath khada kiya tha!!Uska haath tha uss restaurant ke peeche!!Mujhe bhi kabhi kabhi uss baat la khayal aate hi guilty feel hota tha,gussa aata tha!!Accha nahin lagta tha!!Lekin,uss aag mein sirf restaurant hi nahin,balki uss Antra ke saath judi hui yaadein aur kadvahat bhi door ho gayi,humesha ke liye!!!
He was having tears in his eyes at that time..Guddan wiped his tears..Akshat smiled..
Akshat-Maa sahi kehti hain!!Unke Kanha ji jo bhi karte hain,acche ke liye karte hain!!Isiliye toh,agar yeh haadsa nahin jota,toh mujhe apni Guddan ke saath milkar phir se naye sire se shuruaat karne ka mauka kaise milta!!Kaise main unn kadvi yaadon ko mitakar,in a same way,acchi yaadein bana pata!!Kaise mera restaurant aur bhi bada aur bhi advanced hota!!!Hmm!!!???Ab mein garv se keh sakta hoon,ki meri Guddan ne yeh restaurant khada kiya hai!!!Aaj dil se saare bojh utar gaye,Guddan!!!Bas please,isi tarah mera saath dena Guddan!!Kabhi mujhe akela mat chodna,pichli baar ki tarah!!Main khudko sambhal nahin paunga!!Takat ho tum meri!!Agar tum saath ho,toh main kuch bhi kar sakta hoon,kuch bhi!!!
Guddan nodded and smiled at him..Akshat planted a kiss on her forehead and she hugged him..
Together,they spent one of the most precious nights of their life,in each other's embrace!!!
Hello,guys!!Sorry agar update thoda zyaada lamba ho gaya ho toh!! Gustakhi Maaf🙏😅!!! Please vote and give your precious comments!!!If you all want anything,you can all suggest your ideas to me!!I will definitely try to implement your ideas!!
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JAY SHREERAM🙏🙏!!!!
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