《Akshat Aur Guddan Ki Atrangi Kahaaniyaan》❤️A STAND FOR HER❤️
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It was a normal day for Jindal Family.Everyone was chatting,sitting on the sofa in hall..As it was a Sunday,so the men were also at home..After sometimes,some elder women who were Daadi's friends and distant relatives came to meet her..
Daadi-Are!!Tum sab itne dino baad!!Aao aao andar aao!!
She got very happy seeing them..Then everyone took blessings of the guests..Then Guddan and bahus went to bring soms snacks for them.. Meanwhile all the men went to their rooms...
Guest-1-Are Savitri(I named Daadi as Savitri as I don't know what is her name in the serial)!!!Suna hai teri bahu badi tarakki kar rahi hai apne kaam mein!!Bade charche hain uske pure Indore mein bhi aur Desh mein bhi...
Daadi-Sahi kaha!! Mujhe toh guroor hai apni Guddan par!!!
Guest-2-Woh sab toh theek hai par ghar ki bahu ka kaam karna yaa aise bahaar aana jaana sahi hai kya!!???
Daadi-Matlab??
Guest-2-Matlab ghar ki bahu ko ghar mein hi rehna chahiye!!Ghar ke kaam kaaj sambhalna chahiye!!Aur teri bahu sirf bahu hi nahin saas bhi hai iss ghar ki!!Agar woh ghar nahin sambhalegi toh teeno bahuen kya sikhengi!!!
Meanwhile Guddan and bahus got snacks to them..Seeing Guddan they got quite..After they left the place,the guests again started talking..
Daadi-Aisa kuch bhi nahin hai!!Bhala ghar ki bahu ka kaam karne mein harz kya hai!!Mere parivaar mein aisi koi pavandi nahin hai!!!
Guest-3-Honi chahiye!!Ghar ke beton k hote hue bahu kaa kaam karna accha lagta hai kya!!!Soch!!Guddan ki kaamyaabi agar Akshat se zyaada hui aur Guddan ke shauhrat ke tale Akshat ka naam mehnat rootba dabgaye toh,Akshat ko kaisa lagega!!!Kisi bhi Pati ke liye yeh sharmindagi ki baat hogi k uski biwi usse bhi zyaada kamyaab aur rootbe wali ho toh!!
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Guest-2-Bilkul sahi kaha aapne!!Waise bhi kya zaroorat hai Guddan ko acting wagera karne ki!!Are paisa,izzat,aisho araam ki zindagi..sab toh hai uske paas!!!Phir yeh sab karne ki kya zaroorat!!
Guest-1-Aur waise bhi aaj kal ki ladki hai woh!!Kya pata kahin film karne ke bahaane se kisi aur ke saath.....
Daadi-Yeh kya kehrehi ho tum!!????
The entire conversation was heard by both AJ and Guddan...Sons and bahus were also there and they felt bad for Guddan and at the same time they were angry at the women..
Guddan was teary eyed and AJ could not control himself..He decided to confront them..
Akshat-Bilkul sahi kaha aapne!!mMujhe bilkul accha nahin lagega!!
Everyone,including Guddan was shocked..Then he continued..
Akshat-Mujhe bilkul pasand nahin hai..Par Guddan ka kaam karna nahin,aapki meri biwi ke character par aur uske kaam par sawaal uthaana...Kis duniya kis zamaane mein jee rahein hai aap sab!!!Sab kuch kitna badal chuka hai!!Ghar ki bahu betiyaan khaandan ka naam roshan kar rahi hain!!Kya kuch nahin kar sakti woh!!!Lekin nahin!!Humein toh apni dhakyanusi soch se bahaar nikalna hi nahin hai!!Usi soch mein khud bhi jeena hai aur bahu betiyon ko jeene par majboor bhi karna hai(sarcastically)!!!Yakeen nahin hota k itne upar uthne ke bawajood itni neech soch hai aap sabki!!!Yahi problem hai society ki!!!Agar bete kaam karein toh theek par bahuen kaam karein toh galat!!!!Agar bete late tak bahaar rahein toh bechara kaam mein phansa hai but bahu betiyaan late tak ghar na laute,toh unka character kharab hai!!!Aap sab se request hai ki iss ghatiya soch se bahaar aaiye please!! Aur rahi baat humare ghar ki aur Guddan ki acting karne ki kaam karne ki,toh woh hum decide kar chuke hain..Meri Patni kaam karna nahin chodegi!! Woh apna har sapna zaroor poora karegi aur iss parivaar ka aur apne Pati ka naam roshan karegi..(looking at Guddan and smiling)Karogi na Guddan???
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Guddan nodded her head with tears pf happiness in her eyes..
Daadi was proud of her Lalla that how he took stand for her Gudiya..
Bahus were also feeling lucky to have a father-in-law like AJ....Sons were proud of being the sons of a father like AJ...
And our Guddan,who was admiring her Jindal Sahab with teary eyes,fallen in love once again with him...The respect that her heart holds for her hubby Jindal,increased more..
After the chaos,everyone departed to their respective rooms..
AkshAn's Room
Akshat was going through some files..He felt two soft hands on his chest and a head resting on his back..It was his Guddan...He also reciprocated by caressing her hands..
Guddan-Thank You Jindal Sahab..
Akshat-Kisliye???
Guddan-Humara saath dene ke liye..Humein support karne ke liye..Aaj humari nazar mein aapke liye izzat aur bhi badhgayi..
Akshat made her look at him and caressing her cheeks,said-Ismein Thank You waali kaun si baat hai!!!Tumne hamesha mera aur mere parivaar ka saath diya hai..har sukhdukh mein..Aaj jab baat tumhare izzat ki aayi,tumhara saath dene ki aayi,toh main bhala tumhe akela kaise chod deta!!I Love You,Guddan!!!
Guddan-I Love You Too,Jindal Sahab!!
Akshat-Mmmmm!!!Aise nahin!!Acche se kaho!!
Guddan(Confused)-Toh Kaise??
Akshat(Pointing at his cheek)-Aise!!!
Guddan(blushingly)-Aap bhi na!!!
Akshat-Please!!!
Guddan quickly pecked and was about to run,but Akshat hold her and pulled her...
They had a romantic eyelock and joined their foreheads...They were completely lost in each other!!!They remained in each other's embrace for a long time where they always find solace!!!
So,here is my 2nd update!! Please vote and comment!!!I have tried my best to portray Akshan romance as it was my first experience...I hope I would be able to satisfy you all!! Thank You!!🤗🤗
Regards.
Aradhana☺️..
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