《Fidaa - An Akshan Short Stories Collection》Story 2 - I HATE YOU - Part 5
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Part 5
Hi guys, so sorry for making you wait so much. I will not waste any of your time now. Let's get right into the story.
Today is finally the day that Guddan and Akshat go to look for clues to prove Guddan's innocence.
Akshat - Maa main office ja raha hoon!
Maa - Theek hai beta!
It was a normal day in the Jindal Bhawan. Or so everyone thought. Akshat was going to the restaurant as he does everyday.
Some time after Akshat leaves Guddan leaves to go to the mandir. But actually she is going to Akshat's restaurant so that they can both go to the Rice Mill where Angad was kidnapped and kept to look for clues.
Guddan (a bit louder than usual so that everyone can hear) - Maa ji ham zara mandir jaa kar aate hai. Hum aate hue bazaar bhi ja aayenge, aapke kuch chahiye toh nahi. Aur Haan hum toh bhul hi gaye the, aaj hame hamari ek purane dost ka phone aaya tha, ham uske ghar hi naashta kar ke aayenge toh aap please hamari wait mat kijiye Ga. Durga bahu Lakshmi Bahu, dhyaan rakhna ki maaji time par naashta kar le aur unhe dawai bhi dedena.
Durga and Lakshmi - Ji Sasuma.
Guddan - Ham chalte hain Maa
Guddan touches Dadi's feet
Dadi - Jeeti raho beti
With that Guddan leaves for Akshat's restaurant.
At Akshat's Restaurant
Guddan (while knocking on Akshat's door) - Jindal Saab hum hain.
Akshat - Haan biwi ji aa jayiye
Guddan - Jindal Saab kya bulaya aapne hume abhi?
Akshat - Maine? Maine kya bulaya hoga? (Pretending to act innocent) Guddan hi bulaya Hoga?
Guddan - Nahi Jindal Saab aapne hume abhi jab ham darwaze par knock kar rahe the toh kuch bulaya tha!
Akshat - Kya Guddan mujhe yaad nahi hai naa tumhi batado kya bulaya tha
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Guddan - Nahi Jindal Saab jhoot mat boliye aapne abhi toh kaha tha!
Guddan starts getting a bit angry and Akshat is loving this. He is finding Guddan really cute when she is angry.
Akshat (Pretending to be a bit irritated) - Kya kaha tha. He then takes a pause smiles, pulls Guddan into him and holds her waist, then he says. BIWI JI!
Guddan (innocently) - Haan yeh hi toh kaha tha! She then realises and hits him on the chest playfully
Akshat - Ouch!
Guddan - Aapko yaad tha Jindal Saab. Aap aise hi mera ullu bana rahe the itni der.
Akshat just laughed
Guddan - Chaliye Jindal Saab chodiye hume, Hume clue dhoondne bhi toh jaana hai, agar zyada der lag gayi toh Chutki ko shak ho jayega.
Akshat - Chalte hain biwi ji pehle ek zaruri kaam toh karlein!
Guddan - Pehle toh aap hame yeh BIWI JI bolna band kijiye aur doosri baat, konsa zaruri kaam?
Akshat - Pehle tum mujhe Jindal Saab kehna band karo phir main tumhe biwi ji nahi bulayunga aur doosri baat.
He slowly brings his face closer to Guddan and Guddan starts breathing heavily. Akshat then kisses Guddan passionately but gently, Guddan reciprocates and kisses Akshat harder. They part for air and then leave.
Hi guys, this chapter is a bit short but that is because the next part is going to be the LAST PART. Yes I have decided to end this story as I believe 6 parts is long enough for a short story. However the next part will be a bit long, which is why I have decided to make this part shorter. You guys will not be disappointed with the ending.
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