《Love is Beyond everything (#BeHir one shot )》(part-5) you'll get what you deserve
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Bela screams in pain as that metal bullet goes in her leg muscles and that hot metal becomes cold in her muscles bela screeches in pain mahir goes numb for mili seconds......
Mahir said to him self in traumatic tone ab... Ab.. Kya... Kru... Bela... Don't worry ku.... Kuch nhi hoga tumhe I'll save u.... Bela.... Bela
Bela looked towards. Him she understood his situation & tried to not to show him her pain she said mahir ji look.... Look... At me I'm.... I'm fine.... Just thoda sa pain ho raha hai that's it (she pressed her lower lip for controlling her whin and wave of pain which is Hitting her leg again & again)
On the other side the man who shot bela is trembling from fear another man came (whose face was covered with cloth )towards him and said Abey ye kya kiya tuney bhai ji ki behn pe goli chla di chhodenge nhi tujhe Vo
The man who shot bela said bhai... Bhai galti se hua mujhe toh uss ldke ko marna tha yaar mai kya kru bhai ji mere ko chhodenge nahi.....
That man looked towards him and said acha tu ek kaam kr ye ye gun mujhe de aur tu bhaag ja.... Ja bhaag ja mai krta hu kuch....
man said bhai shukriya he gave that gun to another masked man & than he ran away from there....
Than he move towards bela & mahir
(Mahir is sitting on road taking bela in his lap...... )
Mahir looked towards him. And said dur......dur..... Raho chhod do humein please humne tumhara kuch nhi bigada dur raho meri bela ko haath bhi mt lgana dur raho he gets up & starts running taking bela in his lap.....
That man screams arey ruko ruko.... Arey suno ....but mahir didn't listened him & he ran as fast as he can.....
But finally he stopped when he listened a familiar voice of calling him....
Mahir bhai bela bhabhi rukiye ruk jaiye........
Mahir turned and saw and that man unmasked him self.....
Mahir said Abdul he broke down and sits on his knees taking bela in his arms..... (He cries helplessly)
Abdul immediately hugged mahir he said don't worry bhai jaan sb thik ho jayega hum sb haina hum sb thik krenge aur bhabhi ko kuch nhi hoga....
He takes out handkerchief from his pocket and ties around bela's wound....
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Bela is in state of half unconsciousness she said abdul a tear fell from his eyes........
Abdul said bela bhabhi ghbraiye mt sb thik ho jyega....
Bela said in very low & weak voice abdul sai.... Saima... Saima bhai ke paas hai please usse bcha lo.......
Abdul said I know mujhe pta hai saima kahan hai.....
Mahir & bela looked towards him in confusion and said toh tumne usko abhi tk bachaya kyu nhi go jao bachao usse.....
Abdul said bhAi bhabhi mera aur saima ka ek plan hai jisme aapko humara saath dena hoga aur phir ye sab hum humesha humesha ke liye khtm kr denge saath mai.......
(But before he could complete Bela interrupted )
Bela said mahir ji please pehle meri ye baat suniye dhyaan se see insb mai aage kuch hua toh I'm not able to forgive myself issiliye aapko ye baat btana bhut zruri hai ki that ab hum dono akele nhi hai humare saath ek aur nanhi si jaan hai jo iss waqt humare saath ldd rahi hai in sbse
Mahir looked towards her in confusion .....
Bela said yes mahir ji I'm.....I'm.... Pregnant..... Ye baat mujhe bhai ke mujhe yahan laane se pehle pta chali.....
Mahir's eyes beams with joy & happiness but he knows that this is not a right time to celebrate we can do it later....
Abdul also gets happy & said yayyy mtlb mai chachu aur saima chachi bnne waali hain....
Behir looked towards him.... And said ye kb hua.....
Abdul said kya kb hua.... Than he realized what they are talking about his cheeks becomes red..... Vo... Vo... Mai aapko .... Aapko baad mai bataunga....
Behir laughed.....
15mins. Later....
Mahir starts walking taking bela in his lap......
But suddenly they were stopped by bela's brother .......
A car stopped 2 meters away from them .......
Mahir saw saima sitting in. The car
....
Bela's brother stepped out of the car and move towards mahir......
Mahir stepped 2-3 steps back and said no no please humein alag mt kijiye please....... Please......
Her brother came there and said neeche utar meri behn ko.....
Mahir said no.... Nhi.... Mai nhi chhodunga bela ko.....
Her brother signed to her mans & along with them he also forcefully starts moving mahirs hand.....
After more efforts of his mens & him finally mahir left bela and bela is about to fall but mahir sits on the ground......
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And her brother moved bela from mahir towards him.... Bela startled as pain in. Her leg increased as she move her step..... Her brother held Bela from her arm.....
Bela whinced in pain and said aahhh... Bhai leave me.....
But bela's brother can't able to listen her whincing sound or pain right now he is burning In Fire of anger.....
He takes Bela away with him from mahir and stands near car....
And Mahir is still helplessly sitting on his knees on the centre of the road....
And looking towards Bela who is trembling again & again in subconscious state because of pain..... And her brother is holding her from her arm.....
Bela's brother said bhut ho gya ye chhuhe billi ka khel ek baar agr maine kaha ki ye nhi ho sakta mtlb nhi ho sakta he looked towards Bela in anger......
He said maine dharam ke aage apna ma papa ko nhi samjha toh ye mahir kya chiz hai.....
Mai nhi marna chahta tha unhe pr unhone mujhe majboor kiya maine unhe kitni baar kaha mt kijiye ye... Ye galat hai..... Ye galat hai pr nhi unhe meri sun ni hi nhi thi.... Toh mai kya krta marna pda mujhe unhe.... Ab mai iss mahir ko bhi maar dunga..... Jo bhi mere aur mere dharam ke beech aayega mai usse maar dunga....
Bela said in low tone bhai kyu krre hai aap ye mt kijiye.....
Bela's brother said beta ye aapki bhalai ke liye hai humare aane waali peedi ke liye hai beta hum aapse bhut pyaar krte hai beta.... Ye sb jo ho raha hai ye aapke bhalai ke liye hai....
Bela said bhaii...... Aap pagal ho chuke hai ye dharam iss raajneeti ne aapko haiwan bna diya aapki sochne ki smjhne ki shakti khtm kr di hai ..... Bhai ye kis tarah ka dharam hai jisne aapko apne hi ma papa ko maarne ke liye majboor kr diya....
Aur bhai ye kaisa pyaar hai aapka kabhi aap mujhpe itna pyaar dikhate ho aur kbhi meri jaan le ne ke liye taiyar ho jaate ho.... Bhai mujhe shaq hota hai aap mere bhai ho bhi ya nhi..... Ya ma papa ko aap pe daya aa gyi hogi utha laye honge khin se aapko Kyunki mere ma papa ka khoon itna gnda nhi ho skta hai....
Before bela could complete her sentence a tight slap landed on her face by his brother....
He said chhup chuuup ho ja ek dum besharam ab tk bacchi samjh ke aapke saath pyaar se pesh aarhy thy pr aap ne humein majboor krdiya bnd kriye ye bchpana .... Hum aapse baad mai baat krenge pehle hum iska kuch krte hai.....
He signed to his one masked man to give him gun.....
Bela who is standing & trembling..... Looked towards his brother & said bhai aisa mt kijiye mt kijiye...... She spread her hand towards mahir.....
Mahir looked towards her.....
Bela said bhai she fell on the ground...
(Mahir Quickly stand & about to go towards Bela but stopped looking towards her brother)
Mahir said Bela.... Bela u're ok... Bela... Baby... Bela...
Bela said mahir ji I'm ok... Baby bhi ok...
Bela's brother looked towards her in confusion.....
Bela said yes Bhai please mahir ko mt maariye vo...vo...mere hone waale bacche ka baap hai please.... (With tearful eyes & hope she told this to her brother)
(But it seems bels's hopeful eyes & innocence didn't worked on him....)
Bela's brother's anger sets on peak after listening that Bela is pregnent ....
He shots mahir ..... Again & again 3-4 times continuously.....
(A tear escaped from mahir's eye he looked towards Bela & than fell on the ground with loud thud)
Bela is just looking towards mahir with her popped out eyeballs
.... She yell mahir..... Mahir..... Mahirrr..... Bhai nhi.....mahir.... Mahirrr..... She moved towards mahir as she is not able to walk she dragged herself towards mahir..... She is just crying loudly she is crying & crying & crying loudly..... Mahir.. ..... Mahir.....
And the only word coming from her mouth is mahir & mahir.... The pain she is going through she is not able to cry properly .....
Saima also watched all this from car she also starts crying after watching Bela in that state.....
Bela is continuously crying...... She is broken......
Than her brother again moved his gun towards Bela............
Sorry guys forgive me for this much emotional part but as I said this one is different from others...... But i can give you a hint that next part is filled with happiness only & in next part you guys gonna witness more twist turns & drama..... I promise Stat tuned🙂
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TO BE CONTINUED...!!!!!!!
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Sword System Academia
2/17 NOTICE: I'm putting this on hiatus, possibly permanently. I didn't want to spam with an "update chapter", so hopefully here and in the story blurb will get enough eyeballs. There are a couple reasons for ending SSA for now. 1) I wrote the next chapter but wasn't happy with it. I've been less and less satisfied with SSA's quality the more I thought about it. Part of the reason is... 2) I am seriously thinking about trying to publish some novels to help pay the bills, since I don't have my other source of income anymore. I have never asked for anything from SSA readers, no money, not even a review or rating. SSA is written for fun to amuse myself, primarily, and I would kind of feel bad actually charging someone money for something as unserious as that. I don't think it is good enough to ask anything in return. To use an analogy from music, SSA is more like a jam session with a bunch of friends. You're just chiling and having fun playing some music. I mean, if you are Mozart or even Eminem, your jam session is good enough to sell, but for an amateur beginner like myself, haha, no. If I want to publish something, I feel like I need to go the proper route of practice and rehearsals, which might be more similar to a classical concert performance. With SSA, I work from worldbuilding notes and a loose outline, but what you are essentially getting is the first draft with lots of so-called pantsing. Pushing out a web novel like this also means it is very difficult to go back and improve things without breaking everything else downstream. I wanted to try this "jamming" approach, as it was a good way to teach me about another aspect of writing, but to move forward, I think I need to hone my "classical" techniques, which emphasize rewriting, or at least, revising outlines. 3) While I intend to try to make $$$, my actual current goal is to "get gud". I've spent a lot of time recently trying to understand the self-publishing industry, and I'm pretty sure I can make some money by using short-term strategies with my current amateur skill level. But I've seen too many authors come and go/burnout, and really, the only way that I think I can enjoy writing and still make money on a long-term basis is to become a better writer. And the next step for me, which I haven't done much before, is to spend more time on rewriting and outlines. That is pretty much antithetical to the way SSA is developing. I've always been kind of 20/80 plotting/pantsing, but I want to spend a lot more time outlining before I even start writing. SSA jam sessions don't really fit my goal anymore. If you're curious about what's next, read on... Among other regrets, I regret not finishing SSA. It's the first story I've dropped, but then again, it's the first web novel I've attempted, so I suppose that's not a surprise. I don't think traditional web novel formats suit me that well. The whole SSA story I had loosely planned (beyond a first book or major arc) is way too large as well. Big story = good for neverending webnovel with Patreons, bad for penniless and fickle writer like me. I am currently outlining a complete trilogy to another story in great detail. I want the story to end concisely, and I also want the chance to really spend a lot of time on the full outline to spot pacing problems, character issues, lost themes, and so on. I'll still share this story on RR. What I intend to do is finish book 1, flash-publish the whole thing here for a few weeks, then publish on the big Zon. Repeat for books 2 and 3. The upcoming story will be about crafting heroes. The backdrop is an isekai-like setting, where elves will summon humans to their world as heroes, but the whole hero crafting business is still in its infancy. 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