《An Akshan FF- Sauda(deal of love)》Chapter 1
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Akshat and Guddan have come to attend a function where Akshat was supposed to be honoured.... They enjoy the function a lot... They sit in audience and enjoy the show when the ladies sitting nearby start asking questions to guddan..
L1- Kyu re...tu to bohot acchi dikh rahi hai...
G- Thank you....
L2- Kafi saal hue na shadi ko....dono akele hi rehte ho na..
L3- Hmm raja rani ki tarah rehte honge.....
G- Ji vo..
L1-Abhi to bacche ho jane chahiye the...
Akshat is also listening everything..he asks his manager to inform organizers that they are leaving...
Aj-Chale..
G- Ha chaliye...
O- Thodi der aur rukte to accha lagta...
Aj- Hume bhi khushi hoti...par kaam hai thoda...but function bohot accha hua...
O- Thank you ji...
Aj- Accha chalte hai hum....
Akshan come back home.. Guddan is removing her jewellery..akshat brings coffee for both of them...
G- Are main bana leti coffee...
Aj- Usme kounsi baat hai...maine bana li...
G- Aaj biwi ki itni seva..(getting up) Kya irada hai...
Aj-(pulling her near and taking in back hug) Irada to bohot nek hai .....
He starts kissing her all over the neck.. slowly opens the dori of her blouse...
G- Main pehle fresh hoke aati hu....
She goes in washroom while akshat is checking his phone... Suddenly he hears noise of breaking the glass.... He goes check in washroom and finds guddan's leg bleeding and she is sitting in shower holding her stomach due to pain and shouting....
Aj- Guddan... Ruko main aa gaya hu na...
He takes her to the bed...and calls the doctor to come home urgently... He changes her clothes.... She is still shouting in pain...
Doctor comes and gives her injection...
Aj- Prashant ye sab kya ho raha hai...guddan ke pet me roj dukhta hai ... Aap roj use injection dete hai...kab tak chalega ye sab...
P- Mujhe bhi samaj nahi aa raha....uske sare tests karwa chuke hai hum...par kisi bhi disease ka koi symptom nahi hai... Ek baat kahi bura mat manna... Tum kisi psychiatric ko consultant..
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Aj- Kaisi bate kar rahe ho tum...guddan pagal nahi hai....
P- Main janta hu akshat par....
Aj- Nahi main aisa nahi kar sakta...
P- Accha ye archana kaha hai...
Aj- Kal humari anniversary hai na..usi ki tayari kar rahi hogi...bohot excited hai..party rakhi hai, tumhe bhi aana hai...
P- Jaurur.. accha ab main chalta hu...
The next morning akshat is having tea and archana comes ....
Ar- Good morning Bhaiya... happy anniversary (giving him side hug)...
Aj- Thank you archu...
Ar- Bhabhi kaha hai...
Aj- So rahi hai abhi tak..upar hi hai...
Ar- Accha main dekhti hu...
Archana goes up and gently wakes up guddan...At evening very few close people are invited at the party...they cut they cake..and are dancing in full romantic way...
Archana goes out to check something and collides with Vikram...
V- Dhire...
Ar- Oh aap.. ye flowers.. Aap florist hai??v
V- Nahi nahi, vo florist ne hi thama diye mujhe ye flowers..main yahi aa raha tha na..
Ar- Oh so sorry...aap please aayiye na...
They go inside...Vikram sees Akshan dancing..he is happy seeing them..but as he sees guddan..he feels something strange..
As everyone claps for them..Akshat sees that Vikram has arrived..
Aj- Hey Vikram..kab aaye..
V- Bas abhi...
Aj- Ruko tumhe guddan se milvata hu..guddan yaha ana....
Yeh Mera dost hai Vikram..
G-Namaste... Please make yourself comfortable..
V- Ji jarur....
Guddan is talking to other people in the party.. Vikram is looking at her continuesly...
Akshat observes this...
Aj- I know she is beautiful...but she is mine...
Vikram laughs..
V- Accha tumne mujhe yaha kyu bulaya hai ...
Aj- Chalo bahar batata hu....
Prashant is already present there...
Aj- Vikram ye hai Prashant mera dost aur guddan ka doctor...
V- Nice meeting you...
Aj- Aur ye Vikram mera dost..ye ek palmist hai...
P- Hello...Akshat agar tum bhabhi ko ek palmist ko consult karwana chahte ho....to main iski rai nahi dunga.... Aap hath dekhkar patients ko treat karenge...
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V- Kabhi kabhi jo jaisa dikhta hai...vo vaisa hi ho jaruri nahi...
Aj- Prashant kitne sare doctors ko consult kiya hai...par kuch fayda nahi hua...ab ye bhi try karne me Harz hi kya hai... Vikram tum kal subah aa jana guddan ka hath dekhne...
V- Ok....
At night.. akshan sittting on bed...
G-Acchi hui na party..
Aj- Ha...kal maine Vikram ko bulaya hai...
G- Aap kya mera hath dikhana chahte hai.. aisi chizo pe to pehle kabhi bharosa nahi tha aapka...to ab..
Aj- Ye bhi try karne me kya harz hai...vaise...kal ka kaam adhura reh gaya...
They start getting intimate....they are about to proceed...but the clock on the wall starts banging..and they stop...
G- Ye ghadi..koi bhi time pe bajne lagti hai..
Aj- Ha na...
G- Good night Jindal Saab..
Aj- Good night...
They sleep.....
The next morning..akshat is doing some work...
G-Jindal Saab aayiye chai tayar hai...
Aj- Ha aa raha hu do min...
Archana is is going to her college..when she again collides with Vikram...
V- Hum shayad har baar aise hi milne wale hai...
Ar-(laughing) Shayad...
V- College ja rahi ho...
Ar- Ha...
V- Akshat hai...
Ar- Ha bhaiya andar hai...aapka hi intezar kar rahe hai...
V- Ok..bye...
Ar- Bye...
Vikram goes inside buts he finds guddan sitting in Akshat's lap...
V- I'm sorry maine disturb kar diya...
Aj- Ha...
V- Main baad me aata hu...
G- Are aap inki baat kyu sun rahe hai...aayiye na...
Aj- Lo Vikram chai pi lo....
Vikram sits on sofa and Guddan goes and sits near him showing him hand....
G- Lo jaldi se dekh ke batao kya hai mere hato me...
Aj- Are use chai to pine do...
V- Nai koi baat nahi dekhta hu mai...
Vikram keenly observes her hands...
G- Kya likha hai batao na...
V- Batau....
Guddan and akshat get a bit tensed...
V- Inki shadi ho chuki hai...
They get relaxed and smile...
G- Kitni alag baat batai hai na... Aur kya alag dikh raha hai...meri pati businessman hai..mai architect hu aisa kuch...
Vikram again sees her hand and angrily looks at her ...
V- Koun ho tum(holding her hand tightly)
G-(avoiding his gaze) main guddan hu...
V- Main aapse baat nahi kar raha hu bhabhi...main isse baat kar raha hu...
G- Vikram mera hath chodo...Jindal Saab boliye na use...
V- Batao koun ho tum..
Aj- Vikram kya kar rahe ho chodo use...
V- Tum bich me mat aao akshat...koun ho tum..bolo...
Guddan's stomach starts paining again....and she runs towards their room.. Vikram follws her...she tries to close the door but Vikram comes inside....
He pushes her on the bed...
V- Jaldi bolo koun ho tum...
Guddan nods in no... Vikram holds her hair tightly...
V- Bolo koun ho tum...kyu bhabhi ko pareshan kar rahi ho...
Akshat also comes there..
Aj- Vikram chodo use...
Vikram shows his hand to her and she shouts...Guddan pushes him back and looks at him angrily...
V- Bolo ab koun ho tum...kyu bhabhi to pareshan kar rakha hai...
G- Isine meri zindagi barbad ki hai...ise itni asani se nahi chodne wali...
V- Naam kya hai tumhara...
Guddan nods in no... Vikram again threatens her... Akshat is looking with a shock...
V- Kya naam hai tumhara...
G- Antara ....Antara Akshat Jindal......
Guddan falls unconscious..Akshat and Vikram are shocked....
I hope aapko thoda accha laga ho... Ye story shayad kisi ko padhi hui lag sakti hai...par maine thode changes kiye hai isme... So ye part kaisa laga , let me know in comments...and dono stories time to time update hote rahenge...
Thank you 😊
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