《An Akshan FF- Sauda(deal of love)》Chapter 1
Advertisement
Akshat and Guddan have come to attend a function where Akshat was supposed to be honoured.... They enjoy the function a lot... They sit in audience and enjoy the show when the ladies sitting nearby start asking questions to guddan..
L1- Kyu re...tu to bohot acchi dikh rahi hai...
G- Thank you....
L2- Kafi saal hue na shadi ko....dono akele hi rehte ho na..
L3- Hmm raja rani ki tarah rehte honge.....
G- Ji vo..
L1-Abhi to bacche ho jane chahiye the...
Akshat is also listening everything..he asks his manager to inform organizers that they are leaving...
Aj-Chale..
G- Ha chaliye...
O- Thodi der aur rukte to accha lagta...
Aj- Hume bhi khushi hoti...par kaam hai thoda...but function bohot accha hua...
O- Thank you ji...
Aj- Accha chalte hai hum....
Akshan come back home.. Guddan is removing her jewellery..akshat brings coffee for both of them...
G- Are main bana leti coffee...
Aj- Usme kounsi baat hai...maine bana li...
G- Aaj biwi ki itni seva..(getting up) Kya irada hai...
Aj-(pulling her near and taking in back hug) Irada to bohot nek hai .....
He starts kissing her all over the neck.. slowly opens the dori of her blouse...
G- Main pehle fresh hoke aati hu....
She goes in washroom while akshat is checking his phone... Suddenly he hears noise of breaking the glass.... He goes check in washroom and finds guddan's leg bleeding and she is sitting in shower holding her stomach due to pain and shouting....
Aj- Guddan... Ruko main aa gaya hu na...
He takes her to the bed...and calls the doctor to come home urgently... He changes her clothes.... She is still shouting in pain...
Doctor comes and gives her injection...
Aj- Prashant ye sab kya ho raha hai...guddan ke pet me roj dukhta hai ... Aap roj use injection dete hai...kab tak chalega ye sab...
P- Mujhe bhi samaj nahi aa raha....uske sare tests karwa chuke hai hum...par kisi bhi disease ka koi symptom nahi hai... Ek baat kahi bura mat manna... Tum kisi psychiatric ko consultant..
Advertisement
Aj- Kaisi bate kar rahe ho tum...guddan pagal nahi hai....
P- Main janta hu akshat par....
Aj- Nahi main aisa nahi kar sakta...
P- Accha ye archana kaha hai...
Aj- Kal humari anniversary hai na..usi ki tayari kar rahi hogi...bohot excited hai..party rakhi hai, tumhe bhi aana hai...
P- Jaurur.. accha ab main chalta hu...
The next morning akshat is having tea and archana comes ....
Ar- Good morning Bhaiya... happy anniversary (giving him side hug)...
Aj- Thank you archu...
Ar- Bhabhi kaha hai...
Aj- So rahi hai abhi tak..upar hi hai...
Ar- Accha main dekhti hu...
Archana goes up and gently wakes up guddan...At evening very few close people are invited at the party...they cut they cake..and are dancing in full romantic way...
Archana goes out to check something and collides with Vikram...
V- Dhire...
Ar- Oh aap.. ye flowers.. Aap florist hai??v
V- Nahi nahi, vo florist ne hi thama diye mujhe ye flowers..main yahi aa raha tha na..
Ar- Oh so sorry...aap please aayiye na...
They go inside...Vikram sees Akshan dancing..he is happy seeing them..but as he sees guddan..he feels something strange..
As everyone claps for them..Akshat sees that Vikram has arrived..
Aj- Hey Vikram..kab aaye..
V- Bas abhi...
Aj- Ruko tumhe guddan se milvata hu..guddan yaha ana....
Yeh Mera dost hai Vikram..
G-Namaste... Please make yourself comfortable..
V- Ji jarur....
Guddan is talking to other people in the party.. Vikram is looking at her continuesly...
Akshat observes this...
Aj- I know she is beautiful...but she is mine...
Vikram laughs..
V- Accha tumne mujhe yaha kyu bulaya hai ...
Aj- Chalo bahar batata hu....
Prashant is already present there...
Aj- Vikram ye hai Prashant mera dost aur guddan ka doctor...
V- Nice meeting you...
Aj- Aur ye Vikram mera dost..ye ek palmist hai...
P- Hello...Akshat agar tum bhabhi ko ek palmist ko consult karwana chahte ho....to main iski rai nahi dunga.... Aap hath dekhkar patients ko treat karenge...
Advertisement
V- Kabhi kabhi jo jaisa dikhta hai...vo vaisa hi ho jaruri nahi...
Aj- Prashant kitne sare doctors ko consult kiya hai...par kuch fayda nahi hua...ab ye bhi try karne me Harz hi kya hai... Vikram tum kal subah aa jana guddan ka hath dekhne...
V- Ok....
At night.. akshan sittting on bed...
G-Acchi hui na party..
Aj- Ha...kal maine Vikram ko bulaya hai...
G- Aap kya mera hath dikhana chahte hai.. aisi chizo pe to pehle kabhi bharosa nahi tha aapka...to ab..
Aj- Ye bhi try karne me kya harz hai...vaise...kal ka kaam adhura reh gaya...
They start getting intimate....they are about to proceed...but the clock on the wall starts banging..and they stop...
G- Ye ghadi..koi bhi time pe bajne lagti hai..
Aj- Ha na...
G- Good night Jindal Saab..
Aj- Good night...
They sleep.....
The next morning..akshat is doing some work...
G-Jindal Saab aayiye chai tayar hai...
Aj- Ha aa raha hu do min...
Archana is is going to her college..when she again collides with Vikram...
V- Hum shayad har baar aise hi milne wale hai...
Ar-(laughing) Shayad...
V- College ja rahi ho...
Ar- Ha...
V- Akshat hai...
Ar- Ha bhaiya andar hai...aapka hi intezar kar rahe hai...
V- Ok..bye...
Ar- Bye...
Vikram goes inside buts he finds guddan sitting in Akshat's lap...
V- I'm sorry maine disturb kar diya...
Aj- Ha...
V- Main baad me aata hu...
G- Are aap inki baat kyu sun rahe hai...aayiye na...
Aj- Lo Vikram chai pi lo....
Vikram sits on sofa and Guddan goes and sits near him showing him hand....
G- Lo jaldi se dekh ke batao kya hai mere hato me...
Aj- Are use chai to pine do...
V- Nai koi baat nahi dekhta hu mai...
Vikram keenly observes her hands...
G- Kya likha hai batao na...
V- Batau....
Guddan and akshat get a bit tensed...
V- Inki shadi ho chuki hai...
They get relaxed and smile...
G- Kitni alag baat batai hai na... Aur kya alag dikh raha hai...meri pati businessman hai..mai architect hu aisa kuch...
Vikram again sees her hand and angrily looks at her ...
V- Koun ho tum(holding her hand tightly)
G-(avoiding his gaze) main guddan hu...
V- Main aapse baat nahi kar raha hu bhabhi...main isse baat kar raha hu...
G- Vikram mera hath chodo...Jindal Saab boliye na use...
V- Batao koun ho tum..
Aj- Vikram kya kar rahe ho chodo use...
V- Tum bich me mat aao akshat...koun ho tum..bolo...
Guddan's stomach starts paining again....and she runs towards their room.. Vikram follws her...she tries to close the door but Vikram comes inside....
He pushes her on the bed...
V- Jaldi bolo koun ho tum...
Guddan nods in no... Vikram holds her hair tightly...
V- Bolo koun ho tum...kyu bhabhi ko pareshan kar rahi ho...
Akshat also comes there..
Aj- Vikram chodo use...
Vikram shows his hand to her and she shouts...Guddan pushes him back and looks at him angrily...
V- Bolo ab koun ho tum...kyu bhabhi to pareshan kar rakha hai...
G- Isine meri zindagi barbad ki hai...ise itni asani se nahi chodne wali...
V- Naam kya hai tumhara...
Guddan nods in no... Vikram again threatens her... Akshat is looking with a shock...
V- Kya naam hai tumhara...
G- Antara ....Antara Akshat Jindal......
Guddan falls unconscious..Akshat and Vikram are shocked....
I hope aapko thoda accha laga ho... Ye story shayad kisi ko padhi hui lag sakti hai...par maine thode changes kiye hai isme... So ye part kaisa laga , let me know in comments...and dono stories time to time update hote rahenge...
Thank you 😊
Advertisement
- In Serial16 Chapters
Divinity Skill
Erin is summoned from earth by the goddess Almera to save her world from a terrible famine. What should have been a peaceful slice of life farming story takes a turn when other heroes summoned from earth begin to show up; proclaiming that he is a demon lord, and needs to be slain. Can he save this world while fending off the agents of other gods determined to see him dead? Note: The patreon will fluctuate somewhat, but will always be at least a few chapters ahead of royalroad, so if you like what you've read so far, kicking me a couple bucks is always appreciated :)
8 208 - In Serial17 Chapters
The Battle Mage (litRPG progressive fantasy)
One gesture of kindness brings along a reward worth more than planet earth. Leo embarks on his journey to escape as well as to save. Xanadu was the first world he encounter, a place where wild beasts thrive like ant colonies. It was up Leo to figure things out, finding out new ways in surviving through this hellish new world. With hope of returning just at the front door, he strive for perfection with the aid of his friends, co-workers and his Gift from his misunderstood kindness. And the end game? No one knows at the moment, countries too busy in expanding their power through these new lands while forgetting the most important thing. Climbing Mount Akrat. Leo and a band of unexpected people will chase after the main quest as nothing is more important than finishing a quest. His spells and wit ready to tackle future adversaries no matter how tough it gets. Leo Hart, a man easily spook by a jump-scare is now in the path of transforming himself into a battle harden Battle Mage. From your everyday office worker to slayer of liches and dragons. Try it out and see whether you like it or not. I'm not that good of a writer, but I'm here trying to entertain. Give a comment, a review or even just a smile. [participant in the Royal Road Writathon challenge]
8 264 - In Serial98 Chapters
Unending War
In a secluded forest, Avalel, twelve years of age, was completely oblivious to the torment of the war. His backward village was a hidden safe haven, self sufficient on its own limited resources. Although there were occasionally contact from the "Outside", as they called it, the village remained its own world, isolated and in peace. Until he stumbled upon a girl, broken by the war, hardened by its cruelty. Four years later, the Outside comes to him. Witnessing the horrors around him, his fantasies shattered by the abhorrent ruthlessness of this orderless world, he only has a single goal: to protect the ones he considers his closest in the war. A mysterious sword accompanies him, a relic of the past strangely interested in his development. A kind friend supports him, looking out for each other. A leader pursues him, obsessed with his identity. A journey of life, of death; of friendship, of enmity; of courage, of cowardice; of loyalty, of betrayal; of power, of corruption in this eternal, unending war. Cover edited at Canva, using a photo taken by myself.
8 129 - In Serial37 Chapters
The Merchant Adventurer
Boltac, an ordinary, money-grubbing Merchant takes on the impossible quest of saving his town and rescuing the woman he loves from a treacherous and powerful Wizard. An artful, satire of dungeon crawls and cRPG's, the Merchant Adventurer is part Princess Bride, part Dungeon Pawn Stars and a rollicking good read.
8 256 - In Serial30 Chapters
World Shatter
Henry Miller always dreamt of being teleported to a fantasy world but he never expected that a fantasy world would be brought to him. On that day, the earth cracked open letting loose monsters and magical beasts onto the surface. A stroke of misfortune causes Henry to be incapable of leveling, and in turn, he is forced to become stronger through the power of exercise mixed with a fiery resolve and unparalleled regenerative powers. This isn't a story of candy and roses, but one of pain, struggling, and a strong reliance on community to work together in order to survive. Out of the ruins of shattered earth, many will rise to the top and many will fall at the feet of others, but there are very few truly strong enough to protect others, and of those few even less will willingly choose to do so. Therefore it is Henry's duty to carry that torch and be someone who can bear that responsibility. Through light and darkness, Henry will remain as the pin that holds together the World Shatter.
8 137 - In Serial20 Chapters
Jenius Yang Nakal
Alisya, gadis yang terbiasa dilatih menjadi seorang prajurit sejak kecil oleh ayah dan kakeknya. Berkat kemampuannya tersebut, dia berhasil lolos dari sebuah organisasi hitam yang sangat berbahaya. Suatu ketika saat ia memasuki sekolah SMA dia bertemu dengan Adith yang merupakan orang no 1 di sekolahnya dengan ketampanan yang sangat mempesona dan Kejeniusannya yang luar biasa. Entah bagaimana dengan sifat nakalnya, ia terus berusaha menarik perhatian Alisya namun aura membunuh sang gadis sempat menggetarkan Adith. Apakah Alisya membenci Adith? Tapi...mengapa Alisya masih terus berusaha melindungi Adith meski dalam keadaan setengah sadar? Apakah yang terjadi pada mereka sebenarnya? Siapa Alisya dan apakah alasan dibalik Alisya yang begitu ingin melindungi Adith dengan mempertaruhkan nyawanya?
8 259

