《I'm just a new choreographer | n.h.》маленькие пережиаания
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Привет:)
Я немного волнуюсь за будущее своей работы. Уже 7 глава,но вы так ничего не написали. Меня смущает немножко это ,чуть-чуть расстраивает.
Хотелось бы знать ваше мнение на счёт работы, на счёт недочетов,если таковы имеются ,и всего прочего.
Пожалуй,мне будет приятно увидеть ,что кто-то просматривает мою работу ,что вдвойне повысит желание печатал новые главы:)
спасибо за понимание :)
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