《HIS LIL' BABY》Character Debate 2✌🏽
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Like you guys were told, every few chapters I'll post a debate for you guys to voice your opinions on the characters and their actions.
Teeasia
- how do you feel about her?
- what you like about her?
- what you don't like about her?
- what about her, should be changed?
- Any other opinions?
Jaionna
- how do you feel about her?
- what you like about her?
- what you don't like about her?
- what about her, should be changed?
- Any other opinions?
Jazmine
I've never shown her so here Jaz go.
- how do you feel about her?
- what you like about her?
- what you don't like about her?
- what about her, should be changed?
- Any other opinions?
Ni'kira (nini)
- how do you feel about her?
- what you like about her?
- what you don't like about her?
- what about her, should be changed?
- Any other opinions?
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Tyquan
- how do you feel about him?
- what you like about him?
- what you don't like about him?
- what about him, should be changed?
- Any other opinions?
Sincere
- how do you feel about him?
- what you like about him?
- what you don't like about him?
- what about him, should be changed?
- Any other opinions?
Maleek
- how do you feel about him?
- what you like about him?
- what you don't like about him?
- what about him, should be changed?
- Any other opinions?
Kyrie
- how do you feel about him?
- what you like about him?
- what you don't like about him?
- what about him, should be changed?
- Any other opinions?
Deondre
- how do you feel about him?
- what you like about him?
- what you don't like about him?
- what about him, should be changed?
- Any other opinions?
— if there are any other characters, you think should be discussed, please feel free to do so
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