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So guys I am here with my next part.....
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Avni:"neil ab kya..."
Neil:(breaking the hug and cupping her face)"ab hum ghar gayenge upne ghar......khanna mansion..."
Avni:"per Neil sab...aur shruti..."
Neil:"tum chinta mat karo...chalo...ab bahut ho gaya avni...an diksha ka end ho gaya...ab hum aapne ghar gayenge...hum family ke pass...."(avni nodded and they head to the car)
In car...(avneil sat in the back with the kids while dd drove the car to khanna mansion...)
Dd:"waise bhabhi kya aaj aapke hanth ka khanna milega....bahut miss kiya hai maine..."
Avni:(smile)"kyun nahi dd....chalo ask tumhari mann pasand aalo puri banayenge ..."
Naina:"mumma ek questions hai puchon..."
Avni:"haan baby pouchona..."
Naina:"dd uncle ne jo dress pehena hai woh toh ek plooci offfisher (police officer ) ki hai na.."
Neil:"haan princess....aapke dd uncle ek police officer hi hai..."
Aarav:"per papa woh aapko sir kyun bolate hai..."
Dd:"aare baccho aapke papa hi toh mere sir hai..."
Aarav:"matlab?"
Neil:"champ....me bhi ek police officer hoon..."
Naina:(excited )"sachi papa..."
Neil:"muchi beta...."(kisses her cheek)
Dd:"sir aa Gaye..."(avni looks out the car window to see khanna mansion....all the older memories rush in her head....dayavanti meheta house...nilami....neil wife...becoming the bahu of this house.....all sweet moments with family and Neil....finding she is pregnant....kids ka ghar pravesh....naamkaran....and leaving the house.....everything....)
Neil:(bring avni out of her thoughts )"avni...."
Avni:"haan....chale..."(avni nodded)
Aarav:"wow papa yeh ghar kiska hai....yeh toh humhare purane ghar se bhi bara hai..."
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Neil:"yeh humhara ghar hai aaru...."
Naina:"humhara ghar....per humhara ghar toh dusara hai na..."
Neil:"haan princess per aapne aaj itna accha kaam kiya na...iss liye hum aapko yeh surprise de rahe hai...aapka new big house...kaisa hai..."
Aarav:"bahut accha...thank you papa.. "
Naina:(pulling avni in the house )"chalo mumma...chalo na..."
Avni:"naina ruku...(naina stopped aa they reached the entrance )
Naina:"wow mumma dekho kitna bara hai ander se..."(neil came with aarav in his arms...and with a free hand he held avni's shoulder )
Avni:"neil woh kaise react karenge..."
Neil:"avni woh bahut kush honge chinta mat Karo...or waise bhi tum toh janti ho muhjse zayda toh woh tumse pyaar karte...me bichara akela bangara..."
Avni:(laughs a little )"nautanki ho tum..."
Naina:"mumma muhje bhi godi chahiye...bhai ke jaise...(she said opening her arms...avni smiled and picked her up as well...)
Neil:"chalo..."(they entered the house with dd behind them...as they reached the hall se see everyone seated at the dinner table lost in their thoughts...avneil makes the kids stand and hold their hands.....)"bebe...."(Neil called out....hearing his voice all looked up and were shocked and surprised to see avneil standing there with the kids)
Bebe:"avni ..."(and she came and hugged avni...while avni hugged her back and cried....soon she broke the hug and cupped her face)" tu theek hai na putter....kahan thi itne din ...aapne bebe ki yaad nahi aaye tenu..."
Avni:"esi baat nahi hai bebe...halat hi kuch ese the..."
Sweata:(comingand hugging avni..)"halat hi ese they ya iss khute (breaking the hug and hitting neil) "ne halat banaye ese...avni tu Neil se naraz thi...Humse toh nahi na...phir humhe kyun chord ke gayi...tu muhje aake bolte iss khote me kaan keechti me..."(she said pulling Neil ears)
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Neil:"ah mom...dard ho raha hai..."
Avni:"mummy ji esi koyi bat nahi hai.."
Sweata:(still pulling his ears)"ese kaise isne tuhje bahut sataya na..."
Naina:"aunty aap papa ko kyun maar rahe ho....papa bahut acche bacche hai...unhe mat maro...(sweata leaves Neil's ears as all look at her hiding behind Neil and innocent looking at sweata )
Sweata:"yeh...yeh naina hai na"
Neil:"haan mom...yeh naina hai or woh aarav..."(sweata smiles and goes close to them but they get scared and hug avneil...)
Avni:(bending down)"baby....aapko inse darne ki zarorat nahi okay...yeh aapki papa ki mom hai.....matlab aap dono ki dadi ...."
Aarav:"dadi ..."
Neil:"yes champ....aur yeh bebe..."
Naina:"hello dadi....hello bebe.."(all chuckle at their cuteness...)
Avni:(hugging prakash )"papa..."
Prakash:"tu theek hai na putter..."
Avni:"bilkul theek hoon..."
Neela:(tears in her eyes )"av...avni..."
Avni:"maa...."(they both hug and cry....)
Naina:"papa mumma roh kyun rahi hai..."
Neil:"baby...aap aapne mumma se milte ho toh huggy dete ho na...waise hi Mumma bhi aapne mumma se bahut dino baat mili hai...iss liye unhe huggy de rahi hai...."
Naina:"ohhh..."
Mishti:"bebe..."(all turn to see mishti vidihut riya priya and vivan all standing at the entrance...)
Vivan:(to driver)"aap yeh saman uper ke kamare me kar dijiye..."
Driver:"okay..."
Bebe:"tum sab yahan..."
Avni:"ek min..vivan vidihut riya aur priya ok sofe pe bitao..."
Aarav:"chachu....(he said running and hugging vivan..)
Vivan:"hey champ...kaisa tha tumhara din..."
Aarav:"accha tha...phir un buri aunty ne bura kar diya...phir papa mumma ne phirse accha kar diya..."
Vivan:"accha ji..."
Bebe:"ek min me confuse ho rahi hoon.."
Neil:"me bata hoon bebe....yeh sab start hua 3 Saal pehele...usse din...."(and Neil tells them everything about how he heard shruti call convo...how Avneil made a plan...how vidihut got involved...why he used to be less at home ...because he used to be with avni and kids...how they found out about diksha and what happened today as well....)
Bebe:"aare tumsab theek toh ho na..."
Avni:"hum theek hai bebe.."
Sweata:"tum dono yeh chese humhe bhi bata hi sakte they na...kitna tension me rakha tha pure 3 saal...aur humne toh tuhje bhi galat samja tillu..."
Aarav:"dadi yahan koyi baby bhi hai kya..."
Sweata:"kyun..."
Aarav:"abhi toh aapna kaha...tillu..."
Avni:(laughs)"aaru...aapke papa ka nickname name tillu hai.."(all laugh except the kids...while neil looked embarrassed )
Neil:"mom atleast baccho ke samne toh mat bolo"
Naina:"papa...."
Neil:"haan baby..."
Naina:"me bhi abse aapko tilluuuu bolongi..."(all laugh)
Neil:"princess papa hi theek hai no tillu plz..."(all laugh while Neil and naina have a cute fight of calling Neil tillu or no...but their happiness end when they hear a voice)
Shruti:"neil....."
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So guys I hope you enjoyed the update....
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Precap:"avneil confront shruti....and prep for aarav and naina 3rd birthday...."
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