《Avneil - being with you》She!!!
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So guys I am here with my next part.....
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Avni:"huggy woh bhi mere bina..."
Naina:"mumma come..."(she smiles and joins the hug)
Neil:"sorry champ...sorry princess ...muhje tum dono pe nahi chilana chaiye tha ...its just me thora tension me tha..."
Aarav:"it's okay papa....per kal hum ice cream khane gayenge na.."
Neil:"pakka beta...sorry...(saying so he kissed both their foreheads )
Avni:"accha aarav naina aapne time dekha...aapke favorite show ka time ho gaya.."
Naina:"oh no...mumma...mela(mera) slow(show)"
Aarav:"mumma tb (tv) on kalo (karo)"(avni giggles and nods....the kids sit on their bed while avni puts on their favorite show....)
Avni:"tum dono dekho me aur papa neeche ja rahe hai okay..."
Kids:"okay doky..."(avneil head to the hall...
Hall....
avni holds neil hands and makes him sit on the sofa...she sits next to him on the sofa....
Avni:"neil...kya hua hai...kya baat tumhe parshan kar rahi hai...me janti hoon bina kisi bhi serious wajah ke bina tum baccho pe nahi chilao ge..."
Neil:"haan avni...wajah bahut baari hai ..."
Avni:"neil plz batao na hua kya.."
Neil:"me ...me bahar car ke pass tum sab ka wait kar raha tha...jab maine kuch dekha....kuch kya kisi ko dekha...muhje samaj hi nahi aa raha yeh kaise ho sakta hai..."
Avni:"neil muhje bataoge hua kya hai ..."
Neil:"me janta hoon ki shruti ke saath kyun mila hua hai...she....she came back..."
Avni:"who neil???"
Neil:"woh insan koyi aur nahi balki diksha hai..."
Avni:(shocked)"bua...diksha bua..per esa kaise ho sakta hai..woh toh jail.....unki maut...."
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Neil:"haan wahi baat pe me bhi confuse hoon ...jitna muhje yaad hai uss raat jab woh...."
Flashback start...
After the death of Dayavanti and ragani pandit....avneil came home with juhi.....few days after the incident avni got a call aur to say threat call from an unknown number....
Person:"tumne mera sab kuch barbad kar diya...magar ab baari tumhari hai...me tumhe barbad karke rahongi avni.."
Avni:"ho kaun tum..."
Person:"arre arre itna gussa accha nahi hai ...."
Avni:"tum ho kaun..."
Person:"aare aare itni jaldi hai Jane ki...theek hai tumhari yeh icha bhi pooti kar dete hai....aaj shaam 7 bhaje muhjse milne aao....northwest gali....aur han akeli sana warna.....I think ur smart enough to know...."(laughs and cuts the call...)
Around evening....Avni goes to the location stated by the the person and was shocked too see diksha their.....
Avni:"bua??!!"
Diksha:"haan me avni....kaisa laga surprise..."
Avni:"aapne muhje yahan kyun bulaya.."
Diksha:"ek bahut purana kisa khatam karna hai.."
Avni:"kaisa kisa.."
Diksha:"tum..tumhe khatam karna hai...jabse tum aur tumhari maa humhari zindagi me aayi tabse humhari zindagi me sirf parshaniya hi aayi hai..aur ab toh tumne meri maa...meri maa ko bhi marr diya...tumne muhje mera sab cheen liye ...bhaiya bhabhi aur ria kahan hai yeh bhi nahi pata.."
Avni:"maine aapse kuch nahi cheena...aapko aapke karmo ki sazza mil rahi hai....aur chacha chachi aur ria ek nayi zindagi ki suruyat karne gaye hai....aur khas aapne bhi nayi suruyat ki hoti toh aapko jail me nahi rehena parta...abhi bhi time hai bua....chord dijiye yeh sab...aur ek nayi suruyat karo.."
Diksha:"shut up just shut up....me nayi suruyat karongi....zarur karongi....per tumhe maar ke...tumhara marna bahut zarori hai avni....(laughs..while pointing a gun at avni...she was about to shot avni but stopped hearing a voice)
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Voice:"Avni ko chordo diksha....wahi tumhare liye sahi hai.."(she turns to see none other than neil with dd and police officers...)
Diksha:"yeh kaise ho sakta ....maine tumhe kaha tha na akele aane ko...aur tumne toh kisis ko call bhi nahi kiya...nahi ghar se bhar nikali aur tumhare ghar pe toh maine cameras la gaye the.."
DD:"haan but i guess u forgot ki tumhara pala kisse para hai....Bhabhi ne muhje sir ke phone se msg kiya tha plan...because she new ki tumne unka phone tap kiya hoga...and maine neil sir ko plan bata diya tha...and now ur game is over.."
Diksha:"itni asani se nahi avni...."(she moves to shot avni but dd takes the gun from her before anything happens...the police capture diksha and neil rushes to avni..)
Neil:"avni tum theek ho na.."
Avni:"haan neil.."(he kisses her forehead and side hugs her...)
Diksha:(struggling in the holds of police officers)"this is not over avni...me wapas aaongi...aur phir tum nahi bacchogi...yeh pyaar yeh khushi me sab tumse chen longi....tum bas dekho avni..."(she said as they took her in the van...soon the police left with diksha...while avneil also left for home...)
After few days they got a call from the police station that diksha killed her self and is no more....avneil very shocked but neil was successful in diverting avni mind...)
Flashback ends...
Avni:"per woh toh maar gayi thi ab zinda.."
Neil:"yahi muhje bhi nahi samaj aa raha...per yeh me yakin se kehe sakta hoon ki aaj maine shruti ke saath diksha ko hi dekha.."
Avni:"neil diksha bua ne kaha tha ki woh....kahin baccho ko.."
Neil:(cupping avni face)"jaan maine tumse promise kiya tha ki me tumhe aur baccho ko kuch nahi hone donga....muhjepe barosa haina.."
Avni:"haan neil..per muhje daar lag raha hai.."
Neil:(hugging avni)"me bahut jald dikha aur shruti ka problem solve kar donga..."
Voice:"diksha...???"(they turn to see priya riya vivan and vidihut)
Avni:"haan woh lardki jo shruti ke saath mili hui hai woh diksha bua hai..."(she tells them everything)
Riya:"toh ab kya.."
Neil:"ab mere promise ke hisab se humhare pass 6 din hai aarav aur naina ke birthday se phele humhe diksha aur shruti ko expose karna hoga aur ghar pe sab theek karna hoga.."
Naina:"mumma...mumma...."
Avni:"haan baby..kya hua..."
Naina:"mumma buku lagi.."(she said rubbing her stomach while all laugh)
Avni:"chalo phir khana khane ka intazaam karte..."(all have dinner together and head of to bed...)
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So guys I hope you enjoyed it...
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Next update after 200 votes....
Precap:"so how will avneil expose diksha and shruti...will avneil be able to celebrate aarav and naina birthday with the family members...."
Remember 200 votes.....
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