《Avneil - being with you》Lardki?
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Flashback starts...(from where the last flashback ended )
In apartment ......
Avni set the babies on the bed...while Neil keeps the suitcase in...
Neil:"chalo avni ab sote hai..."
Avni:"Neil tum ab ghar gao...me sambhal longi..."
Neil:"pagal mat bano me kahi nahi ja raha..."
Avni:"per ghar pe..."
Neil:"subhe jaldi chala gaonga...."(avni nodded...and they slept....)
Next morning....around 5 in the morning..
.....avneil were sleeping peacefully when there was a knock on the door waking both avneil ....
Avni:"neil yeh kaun hoga..."
Neil:"muhje nahi pata hai..."
Avni:"neil....me chup jati hoon..."
Neil:"per kahan..."
Avni:"bathroom...."(she picked the kids up and took them and hid in the restroom...while neil opened the door...)
Neil:(shocked )"vidihut...."
Vidihut:"haan me..."
Neil:"tum yahan..."
Vidihut:"me under aa sakta hoon..."
Neil:"haan haan aao na.."
Vidihut:"avni kahan hai"
Neil:"woh yahan kaise hogi....(acting angry )"or uska naam bhi mat lo abhi.."
Vidihut:"tum yahan kya kar rahe ho...."
Neil:"me woh muhje kal kisi se baat nahi karni toh me yahan aa gaya.."
Vidihut:"accha....or kitna jhoot bologe....jao avni or baccho ko bathroom se bahar Lao..."
Neil:(shocked )"tumhe tumhe kaise pata..."
Vidihut:"batata hoon pehele usse baar nikalo....(hearing vidihut avni comes out with the babies in her hands...vidihut takes aarav in his hands..while all sit on the bed)
Neil:"ab batao..."
Vidihut:"tum logo ko kya lagta hai ki tum dono aapni acting se sab ko fool kar sakte ho per muhje nahi....me sab janta hoon...Maine tumhari or avni ki bat soni thi jab tum dono yahan aaye woh bhi dekha....or me yeh jana chahata hoon ki tum dono ne yeh sab kiya kyun..."
Neil:"vidihut woh ....hua yhe ki...(and he tells him all the truth...)
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Vidihut:"muhje toh jabse woh aaye hai tabse kuch gardbar lag raha tha...riya ne bhi muhje bola tha...usse toh me.."
Avni:"nahi vidihut abhi hum kuch nahi karenge....abhi mere bacchon ka sawal hai....or uske saath koyi or bhi mila hua hai or uska pata lagana bahut zarori hai.."
Vidihut:"per tub tak tum dono kya karoge.."
Avni:"abhi tak toh kuch socha nahi.."
Neil:"haan avni or bacchon ko koyi safe jaga rakhna hoga.."
Vidihut:"mere pass ek idea hai.."
Avneil:"kya.."
Vidihut:"avni or bacche mere saath rahenge...waise bhi maine or riya ne socha hai ki hum court marriage karke humhare purane ghar chale...toh yeh sahi rahega.."
Neil:"per vidihut"
Vidihut:"nahi neil.....avni meri behen jaisi hai...or usse ese akele nahi chord sakte...uper se 2 bacche bhi hai .....yehi sahi rahega...tum dono muhje aag raat tak ka time do me ghar pe sab sambhal longa phir tum dono wahan aa jana...isse ek or fayda hai ki neil tum theeno se kabhi bhi mil sakta ...agar yahan kisine dekha toh problem hogi..."
Avni:"neil i think vidihut theek kehe raha hai...abhi ke liye yeh safe rahega.."
Neil:"hmm theek hai..."
Vidihut:"toh great me 2 ghante me aata hoon phir hum chalete hai....(saying so he gave aarav to neil and left)
Neil:"sab kuch kitna accha tha life me...hum sab kitne khush they...muhje shruti ko bolana hi nahi chahiye tha...sab meri galti hai.."
Avni:"heyyy neil...tumhari koyi galti nahi hai...meri taraf dekho....humhari zindagi abhi bhi bahut khoobsurat hai...kyunki yahan tum ho me hoon or humhare bacche hai.....ab udas hona band karo....or jao tum bhi ghar jao.."
Neil:"nahi me nahi ja raha...."
Avni:"per neil sab parashan ho rahe honge..."
Neil:"aare meri bholi avni..tum chinta mat karo...maine vidihut ko ek plan bola hai woh sab sambhal lega.."
Flashback ends....
Avneil were lost in the flashback when mishti comes in...
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Mashti:"aare superman .....angle chalo...papa bola rahe hai..."
Avneil:"haan chalo..."(they head down to the breakfast table to see all seated ...)
Riya:"finally aa gaye aap dono......"
Priya:"waise avni di aapke hanth me jadoo hai kya noddles hai..."
Naina:"yummy nodolos.."(neil starts to laugh)
Vidihut:"kya hua bhai itna kyun hass rahe ho.."
Neil:"kuch nahi yaar vidihut...muhje madam(avni) ke purane karname yaad aa gaye.."
Priya:"kyunse karname bhaiya.."
Neil:"jo tum tarif kar rahi ho na avni ke khane ki...muhje purane din yaad aa gaye jab avni ko sirf ek cheese banani aati thi....poha...."
Avni:"haan toh kya..or yeh sab babe or maa ne...(she stops and becomes sad remembering her time with sweata and bebe...neil keeps a hand on avni shoulder while she smiles sadly...)
Vidihut:"mishti aap jao aarav or naina ko aapne room me le gao.."
Mishti:"okay papa...aaru nainu come..."(all the kids leave)
Vidihut:"ahh avni neil muhje tum dono ne kuch zarori baat keheni hai.."
Avni:"kya hua vidihut"
Vidihut:"woh humne private investigaters lagaye the na shruti ke baare me jane ke lliye..well this morning they informed me that the person that is helping shruti is a girl not a guy.."
Neil:"what....lardki..."
Avni:"lardki kyun ho sakta.."
Riya:"tum log socho koyi hai..."
Neil:"nahi riya ..."
Vivan:"its okay aap log inta tension mat lo...hum log uss admi...opss sorry i mean aurat ke bahut karib hai...jaldi hi pata laga lenge..."(all nodded...while neil phone rang...he sees the id to be shruti and gets angry)
Neil:"yaar yeh lardki muhje chain se kyun nahi rehene deti.."
Avni:"neil tum phone uthao..."
Neil:"nahi muhje nahi uthana.."
Avni:"common neil..."
Neil:"okay fine...(picking the call....)"hello..."
Shruti:"hello neil where are you.."
Neil:"bahar hoon.."
Shruti:"bahar kahan neil"
Neil:(almost yelling)"dekho shruti me busy hoon tumhe kuch kaam ki baat karni hai toh karo warna mere pass waltu time nahi hai.."
Shruti:"aare neil gussa kyun kar rahe ho.."
Neil:"yoh kya karon...dekho shruti i am very busy baad me baat karte hai bye..(he cuts the call)
Avni:"neil yeh kya kiya tumne..."
Neil:"kya kiya.."
Avni:"usse baat kyun nahi ki acche se.."
Neil:"jaan yaar iss sab ko chordo....kuch hi dino me aarav or naina ka birthday hai....tum theeno (avni riya priya) uski tayari karo...or jab tak hum iss insan ka pata lagate hai..."
Naina:(came running in)"papa papa..papa.."
Neil:"kya hua princess (he asked picking her up)
Naina:"dedo(dekho) na papa aarav bhaiya mele(mere) saath nahi khel rahe..."
Neil:"kyun..."
Naina:(in a childish voice)"pata nahi....Mishti di bhi unse pouch rahi hai.."
Avni:"chalo me chalke dekhti hoon...(all head to room to see aarav sitting on the bed while mishti asking him questions...)"aaru beta kya hua.."
Aarav:"muhje aapse baat nahi karni.."
Avni:"kyun nahi karni babo.."
Aarav:"bas nahi karni..'
Neil:"champ hua kya hai"(he made aarav sit on his lap)
Aarav:"papa mela (mera) beday(birthday) hai...or aapne pormiss (promise ) ki tha ki aap muhje mela (mera) favritr (favorite) toy delaoge... aap bholo (bhool ) gaye..."
Neil:"oh no....yaar ...sorry beta per pakka aapke birthday se pehele aapka woh toy aapke pass hoga promise...and pakka wala.."
Aarav:"sachiii"
Neil:"muchi..."(he kissed aarav forehead while aarav smiles and hugs neil)
Naina:"ol (or) mela(mera) gift"(she said keeping her hands on her hips and pouting)
Neil:"aare princess aapka gift kaise koyi bhool sakta...aap dono ka gift aapko mil gayega ab khush..or iss birthday mumma ko bhi ek gift milega..."
Naina:"kyunsa gift papa.."
Neil:(looking at avni)"Family..."(avni smiles with tears in her eyes because she understands the gift was neil promise)
Aarav:"phamli (family)????"
Neil:"haan family...accha yeh sab chordo muhje jaldi se ek jadoo ki jhapi chahiye.."(all laugh while avneil and aarav and naina hug..)
Avni:"aare mishti riya vidihut ...vivan priya..tum sab ko invitaion dena pardega...jaldi aao ider.."(all smile and share a big group hug....all were happy for few min forgeting of the unknown person they need to find out about)
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So guys I hope you enjoyed it...
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Precap:"Who is the "lardki" that is with shruti....any guesses...."
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