《Avneil - being with you》Flashback
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Flashback....(guys this is where the chapter My Life My Wife ended...)
Avneil reach their rooms...sleep unaware of the storm that will hit them the next day....
Next morning......
Neil wakes up first to see aarav playing with his tshirt....and giggles....naina and avni was missing...but than he heard the bathroom shower open...
Neil wakes up and starts playing with aarav when avni comes out all dressed in her saree and has naina in her hands....
Avni:"aare neil..tum uth gaye...dekho muhje actually neeche mummyji ke pass kaam hai...tum plz aarav ko nehela doge....me aake uske kaparde bathroom me rakh diye.."
Neil:"jo hukum mere aka..(he said bowing down)
Avni:(laughing)"dramebaaz...(saying so she leaves the room with naina..)
Neil:(picking aarav up)"chalo champ...tum aaj boys day in the bathroom manate hai...hum tum...naahai naahai karenge.."(and he takes aarav with him to the bathroom)
In hall.....
Neil comes down with aarav in his hands...and sees prakash playing with naina...he goes and sits next to prakash....
Neil:"papa....avni kahan hai.."
Prakash:"kitchen me... pata nahi yeh ladies kya kar rahi..."(just than vivan and vidihut also arrived...)
vivan:(taking aarav)"aare champ.."
Avni:"papa ji aap naina ko muhje de jiye...(she takes aarav and naina in her hands...and leaves in the kitchen)
neil:"ajeeb hai...bacche ko kitchen me kyun leke gayi yeh..."
Vivan:"pata nahi bhaiya..per haan muhje pani chaiye tha toh me kitchen me gaya tha tab bhi muhje inhone bahar nikal diya..."
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Neil:'kuch toh pak raha hai under..chalo chalke deke..."
bebe:(entering)"koyi zarorat nahi hai tillu...okay bas aab tu wahan dekh...(all boys look at the direction bebe pointed and are shocked to see the girls standing with a banner in their hand that said ......HAPPY FATHERS DAY"
Vivan:"aaj fathers day hai..?"
priya:"yes mr.bhodhu.."
mishti:(hugging vidihut)"happy fathers day papa.."(vidihut kiss her forehead)
Avni:(with the babies in her hand)"neil yeh toh bahut choote hai kuch bolne ke liye per mehi inki taraf se bol deti hoon ....happy fathers day neil...(neil smiles takes naina in his hands..kisses both the kids and avni forehead..)
neil:"yeh world ka best fathers day hai.."(then avneil head to prakash)
avneil:"happy fathers day papa/papaji.."
prakash:"thank you putter ji.."(everyone shares sweet moments and head to lunch....the day goes as normal with the family....shruti was not seen by many family members that day... than came the night all had headed to their rooms to sleep but avni was alone in her room..with the kids...)
avni:"yeh neil khahan rehe gaya.."(she was busy making the kids sleep...after that she cleaned the room ....and started to scroll through Instagram.....just than Neil entered)
Avni:"aa Gaye Mr cop....1 ghanta lagta hai kya pani peene me..."
Neil:"avni meri baat suno...."
Avni:(seeing him serious and tensed ..)"kya hua Neil....sab theek hai na.."
Neil:"nahi avni....(he closes the door...and makes avni sit on the bed...and he sits next to her holding her hand.)
Avni:(cupping his face)" Neil kya hua bolo na..."
Neil:"avni you trust me na..."
Avni:"more than myself neil..."
Neil:"avni me abhi aa raha hai pani peke....toh Maine dekha..."
Avni:"kya dekha Neil..."
Neil:"shruti....woh...kisi se baat kar rahi thi phone pe...something about separating us and for that might even harm our babies...me nahi chahat ki tumhe ya champ or princess ko kuch ho..."
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Avni:"what.. per shruti esa kyun karegi...or uske saath koyi hai...kaun..."
Neil:"muhje nahi pata avni per is sab se pehele muhje tum theeno ko safety chahiye...."
Avni:"neil humhe kuch nahi hoga..."
Neil:"per avni..."
Avni:"accha bolo tumhe kya lagta hai humhe kya karna chahiye..."
Neil:"separation...."
Avni:(standing up)"what...are u mad Neil...me tumhe kyun chordongi...."
Neil:(pulling avni in a hug...)"avni shant....meri puri baat toh suno....humhe surf natak karna hai..."
Avni:"nahi neil per me ...."
Neil:"avni trust me...just do as I say..."
Avni:"okay...bolo kya karna hai..."
Neil:"good ab suno...(he tells her the plan to fight.....and also what to do after the fight....)
After few hours.....it was around 2 at night...when avneil executed their plan...
In avneil room....
Neil:(yelling )"avni tum itni careless kaise ho skati ho..."
Avni:"Neil tum meri baat toh suno..."
Neil:"I didn't expect this from you...."(all wake up and come to their room to see...then fighting.....)
Bebe:"neil...kya hau..itni raat ko kyun chila raha hai..."
Neil:"bebe aap beeche me mat bolo...."
Avni:"Neil sorry mera dhayan nahi tha..."
Neil:"dhayan nahi tha...tumhe pata hai tumhari is a wajah se naina ko kitni chot lag sakti thi....per nahi tumhe kya farak parta meri beti ko jo bhi ho jaye..."
Avni:(tears in her eyes)"tumhari beti... Neil woh meri bhi beti hai..."
Neela:"hua kya hai Neil..."
Neil:"maa muhje ek important call aaya tha toh me balcony me gaya Maine avni ko bola naina ko dekhe...per nahi madam ko baccho se zayda phone pyara hai..."
Avni:"Neil me..."
Neil:"bas avni bas..."
Shruti:"Neil sahi kehe raha hai avni....tum itni laparwa kaise ho sakti ho..."
Avni:"shruti tum is sab me na pardo....."
Neil:"kyun na parde...meri dost hao woh use bolne ka pura hac hai...."
Avni:"bas neil... sab tumhara nahi hota. .tumhari dost tumhari beti..tumhara beta.. mera kya..haan...kabhi tumne muhje aapna mana...kabhi woh juhi...kabhi the shruti...thang aa gayi hoon me"
Neil:"wahh kya baat hai....bat ko kahan se kahan le ja rahi ho tum....you know what ...muhje tumse baat hi nahi karni...(and he leaves...avni crys.....after sometime all the others also leaves....while avni was wiping her tears someone hugs her from the back..it was Neil...)
Neil:(snuggling in her neck)"sorry...."
Avni:"sorry kyun..yeh sab ek .....natak tha na.."
Neil:"I know ...per juhi ....or shruti wali baat toh sach thi na...pata nahi avni humesha yeh sab kyun hota hai..."
Avni:"....heyyy neil esa kuch nahi hai.....accha ab next step kya hai..."
Neil:(breaking the backing and turning her)"yeh letter...(giving her the letter...)
Avni:"theek hai...toh ab me cahlti hoon...per itni raat ko gaongi kahan...woh bhi baccho ke saath...."
Neil:"woh mera apartment me...uske baad wahan se me kuch sochta hoon.."(guys this is the same apartment where Neil used to live before marrying avni if you all forgot)
Avni:"theek hai...maine suitcase toh pack kar liye bas...tum use car me rakhdo...me babies ko leke aati hoon..."(he nodded )
In apartment ......
Avni set the babies on the bed...while Neil keeps the suitcase in...
Neil:"chalo avni ab sote hai..."
Avni:"Neil tum ab ghar gao...me sambhal longi..."
Neil:"pagal mat bano me kahi nahi ja raha..."
Avni:"per ghar pe..."
Neil:"subhe jaldi chala gaonga...."(avni nodded...and they slept....)
Flashback ends.....
Avni came out of her thoughts as naina woke up ....
Naina:"mumma..."
Avni:"kya hua baccha aap soye nahi..."
Naina:"muhje bhook lagi..."
Avni:"ishi liye maine bhola tha ki acche se khao per nahi...tumhe toh papa ke saath khelna tha..."
Naina:"mumma bhooku lagi toh aap dhantu kar rahe ho...(pouting )
Avni:"puri neil pe gayi hai...chalo aao...(she picks up naina and goes to the kitchen...)
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So guys hope you enjoyed it...
And maybe few things got cleared now....more flashback scenes are left....so stay toon to the story....
I will update next part after 200 votes....
Precap:"how is avneil living with vidihut family...how will they find out....who is the other person with shruti..."
Remember 200 votes...
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